MLPFiM Season 1 Revised OrderMLPFiM Season 1 Revised Order4 years ago in General Fiction More Like This
As you all know, Fall Weather Friends should come before Winter Wrap-Up.
There are many concerns about episode chronology when considering season one as a whole. There are a bunch of monsters at the start of the season, while the CMC take over during the second half. The first half is pretty AJ/RD/PP heavy, while the last half is overloaded with Rarity and Fluttershy. The Gala episode has an Everyone Laughs ending, but to me it feels tacked on and anti-climactic, and doesn't work as a season finale as well as Cutie Mark Crusaders would. (S2 update: we now know the Discord episodes were produced as the season/series finale.)
If we take the air order as the chronological order:
episodes 1-10 summer/fall, year 1000 of the Summer Sun Celebration
11 Winter Wrap-Up 1001
12 Call Of The Cutie 1001
13 Fall Weather Friends 1001
14-26: spring/summer 1002
This means the mane 6 got their tickets right after saving Equestria from Nightmare Moon, then 1 3/4
Sweetie Belle's Love SongSweetie Belle's Love Song4 years ago in Short Stories More Like This
Sweetie Belle's Love Song
"Raaarityyy!" yelled Sweetie Belle as she opened the door to the Carousel Boutique and charged inside. "Big Sis! I need your help!"
The elder unicorn sister gritted her teeth as the sudden interruption caused her hooves to slip, messing up the stitching on a piece of fabric. Closing her eyes, Rarity sighed, taking her foot off the pedal of the sewing machine and letting go of the fabric. She inhaled deeply, then turned to face Sweetie Belle, wearing her sewing glasses, a tape measure around her neck. "Sweetie, what have I told you about knocking before barging into my workspace?"
Sweetie Belle skidded to a halt, plopping into a seated position and looking at the ground. "Oh, Rarity, I'm sorry. I forgot..."
"It's alright, darling." Rarity sighed and smiled. "We all make mistakes now and then." The indigo-haired unicorn filly walked over and shut the door, then retur
A Love PoemYou made me smile and laughA Love Poem5 years ago in Free Verse More Like This
You made me want to be better
To run farther,
To love harder
You made me love to fall
I wanted to be the one to hold you
I want to tell you I love you
I want to kiss you in the rain
Sometimes it burns
Every time I think of you
The pain, the boredom they stop
And suddenly I'd be content to lie still for awhile
If only I could feel your heart against mine.
I'm not a good person,
And this isn't a good poem,
I don't always speak the truth,
But this time it's true:
I love you.
a helping marefriend"Twilight Sparkle I want you to go to Ponyville to check on the preparations for the Summer Sun Celebration and make some friends" Said Celestia to her most faithful student.a helping marefriend4 years ago in General Fiction More Like This
"B-but princess I have a lot of studying to do" Said Twilight a little bit annoyed by her mentor's request.
"Twilight there is more to life than studying".
The unicorn let out a moan of annoyance "Fine... come on Spike, let's go" Said Twilight walking with her head hanging low in defeat.
"Alright" said Spike while following her to the Canterlot Palace's entrance door
They walked outside. There, waiting for them, were 2 royal guards attached to a carriage big enough to carry both of them, Twilight and her assistant hoped onto it and soon they were off to Ponyville.
Twilight and Spike arrived to Ponyville around mid-day. After they descended from the carriage, Spike, seeing that Twilight had no intention in talking to nopony told her "Come on Twilight! Just try and make some friends"
Spotting a pink pony walking tow
A Peaceful Moment -FlutterdashA Peaceful Moment -Flutterdash3 years ago in Short Stories More Like This
(* Note: This is not part of my ongoing Flutterdash story, "Wings of My Heart". It is simply a one-shot I whipped up as an apology for taking so long to update.*)
Knock knock knock.
The quiet knocking on the window broke the near-silence in the cottage. Fluttershy blinked her eyes open, sitting up and stretching before looking to her window to identify the source of the noise. She wasn't all that surprised to see her best friend Rainbow Dash hovering just outside, the light of the moon lighting up her multicolored mane. Her expression was also what she expected; she looked troubled, tired, even a little embarrassed. Fluttershy held back a smile and quickly made her way over to the window to unlock it and swing it wide open.
"Hey," Rainbow greeted her, brushing her mane out of her eyes briefly.
Then Came an Apricot - Part 1Then Came an Apricot - Part 14 years ago in Romance More Like This
Then Came an Apricot
Written by Ben Chambers
The weather was chilly, and the wind was blistering- but that didn't stop Rainbow Dash for keeping her promise to Applejack. The filly knew she wanted to talk to her about something important, and was hell bent on making it there to hear what she had to say. Over the past few months, the two had become much closer, best friends- possibly even more, but Rainbow Dash knew nothing like that would ever become of the two. They were friends... just friends, nothing more. Though Dash could always feel a slight heat in her cheeks every time Applejack would make some cheeky joke, she assumed her friend would never feel such feelings for another mare.
It was nearing the winter season, and the weather team had been busy getting it ready. It was all going to start with a big bang, a huge blizzard was being prepared so as to cover all of Ponyville with a blanket of white snow for the next morning. Night was approaching quickly, and Rainbow Dash ha
Luna's Best Night Ever: 4The punch was cool and refreshing, if a little bland. Luna sipped it slowly and watched the other ponies at the party as they chatted and played. The music, some new style called "pop" that she had never heard of, was playing loudly and served as the backdrop for the event. The cheerful melodies reflected the happiness that everypony else was feeling. Luna finished her glass and refilled it for the third time, taking another bite from one of the cupcakes forming a neat stack on her plate. They were much too sweet for her taste but she continued to eat them in small, refined nibbles.Luna's Best Night Ever: 44 years ago in Introductions & Chapters More Like This
The moment everypony had seen her enter Luna's instincts told her to run. Instead the sudden shock of being in the spotlight had frozen her in place, sitting on the floor and unable to budge.
"Luna? Are you OK?"
She needed a way to escape the situation or shift focus away from her. Her mind searched for answers while her eyes scanned the room.
"Is something wrong? Oh! I didn't ask if you have a heart cond
Fluttershy's Diary Poem Dear Diary,Fluttershy's Diary Poem4 years ago in Free Verse More Like This
I've been thinking about Rainbow Dash all day, I even made a poem about her. Wanna hear it?
Ever since that faithful day,
You've always watched my back.
Even though I just say, "Yay",
My love is louder than that.
From the Pegasus race,
To finding you a great pet,
I just hide me face,
And live with regret.
But maybe one day I can show them so true,
My feelings of love, so sad and so blue.
Hopefully you'll reply , and say you love me too.
I-if that's okay with you.
Luna's Socks - Part 1Luna's Socks - Part 1 starring Twilight Sparkle and the Princesses Celestia and LunaLuna's Socks - Part 14 years ago in Short Stories More Like This
"It's absolutely wonderful to have you back home, my faithful student," Princess Celestia said to Twilight as she walked with her along the corridor that would lead to the East Wing of Canterlot Castle where the guest rooms were. "I've missed you terribly, you know."
Twilight suppressed a squeal of delight. The Princess had missed her? Oh, the things she wanted to say in reply but all she could was blush crimson and whisper, in a voice embarrassingly heavy with emotion: "I've missed you too, Princess "
"It's such a shame that you can't stay in your old tower," Celestia continued as they passed a series of huge stained-glass windows interspersed with tapestries thousands of years old portraying the history of Equestria. "I'm afraid the renovations are really quite untimely."
"It's alright, Princess," Twilight replied, looking at each of the tapestries thoughtfully as they passe
Merely a Mare: Chapter 2Table of Contents:Merely a Mare: Chapter 24 years ago in Drama More Like This
Prologue 1: http://ebonmane.deviantart.com/gallery/#/d3bpd0r
Prologue 2: http://ebonmane.deviantart.com/gallery/#/d3bu3u8
Chapter 1: http://ebonmane.deviantart.com/#/d3fyezo
1st Interlude: http://ebonmane.deviantart.com/#/d3g25jn
Chapter 2: You are here
2nd Interlude: http://ebonmane.deviantart.com/#/d3jdo7e
Chapter 3: http://ebonmane.deviantart.com/#/d3jdor5
3rd Interlude: http://ebonmane.deviantart.com/gallery/#/d3kfmyl
Warnings and Disclaimers:
Characters in this work are property of their respective owners, I do not own any of them, and do not intend to make any sort of profit off of this work.
This is a My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic fanfiction.
And now, on with the show:
Merely a Mare, Chapter 2
Luna could think of nothing to do after she left Sweet Apple Acres that afternoon, but Applejack had told her where to be the next morning, and so she had gone to wait. She flew over Ponyville, spotted the Forest Road, and landed nearby in a suitably clear
You AreYou are the center of my madness.You Are3 years ago in Traditional Fixed Forms More Like This
You are the one who ends my sadness.
You are the first rose in early Spring.
You are the tune that my heart sings.
You are the one who holds my love.
You are the symbol of a dove.
You are the only girl for me.
You are the one who makes me see.
You are the mid-summer sun.
You are my true love, the one.
You are the wind beneath my wings.
You are the very breath I breathe.
You are what makes my entire soul
Completely and utterly whole.
Dinky Doo's HomecomingDinky slowly trotted down the steps after her bath, if what she'd just experienced could be called that. At this inn, a bathtub seemed to be a large metal tub usually used to hold fruit that had been filled with almost hot water. But it had been enough to get the grime out of her hair, and the light peach scent from the harvest gave her a pleasant enough scent to her hair, mane and tail.Dinky Doo's Homecoming4 years ago in General Fiction More Like This
Stretching her sore body slightly, the teen mare looked about the inn to see it had filled with some more guests. In the corner sat four griffons, their large bodies casting a shadow from the light of the setting sun as they played a round of cards. At a table next to the door, an elderly pair of pegasi sat nibbling on a salad together with a look of love for each other still shining in each other's eyes.
And by the bar, a colt no older than her sat with a lute tuning it likely in the hopes of earning a night's rest.
The older teen mare chuckled to herself, then paused in her tracks. A scent was waftin
EquestriaNoir-A Neo-Noire TaleEquestriaNoir-A Neo-Noire Tale4 years ago in Short Stories More Like This
Manehattan - 9:30 PM
Scumbag: the most prolific term in my vocabulary is the word scumbag, and for good reason; almost everyone I meet in the streets nowadays is a scumbag.
What constitutes a scumbag? The signs are too long to list, but I don't need to; I know a scumbag when I see one, and the unicorn running away from me at this very moment constituted a grade-A example of what a real scumbag is.
The filthy piece of scum ran - flying almost - as I pursued him, pistol levitating near my head in a soft, dark colored glow. He sure ran fast for someone who had just had a bullet pierce his hind leg; but I had grown accustomed to this sight, as it had played out in the same form for more times that I dared count.
His ragged red robes concealed just how dangerous this piece of equine filth was, and this one was as vile as you could get: a foal-raping, mass-murdering cannibal cultist who was mere seconds away from having his brains become part of the pavement.
The cultist nearly collap
Much Ahoof About Nothing Part 1Much Ahoof About Nothing starring Princess Celestia and her faithful student Twilight SparkleMuch Ahoof About Nothing Part 14 years ago in Introductions & Chapters More Like This
Twilight watched the little white starlike flowers swirl about in her cup of elderflower tea and sighed.
Rarity put down her own cup and looked at her in sudden concern from across the table. The two of them were sitting at their favourite table at the Dandelion Clock Café and enjoying a little afternoon tea together, but Rarity for some time now had noticed that Twilight, although moody at the best of times, was especially moody today for some reason.
"Darling!" she said. "That's the third time you've sighed in as many minutes! Now I know something is most definitely wrong."
Twilight lifted her face from observing the tea to look at her friend. The white-coated unicorn's eyes were regarding her with concern, but somehow Twilight didn't feel like talking to her.
"Oh Rarity. I'm fine, really," she said, and then straightaway her eyes dropped back down to the tea and its danci
'After the Gala''After the Gala'4 years ago in Short Stories More Like This
It was around 10:00 PM at "Pony Joe's Café." An apple-shaped carriage was parked outside with two male ponies chatting amongst one another. Inside the café, the lights were still on and the open sign was flashing. As expected, there were very few customers. The Grand Galloping Gala was being held not too far away in the royal palace, where everyone else was. However, inside Pony Joe's, laughter could be heard. It seemed the customers that did decide to come there were company enough.
Twilight Sparkle and her friends had all just gotten back from the Grand Galloping Gala which did not go as planned for any of them at all. Their dresses were torn up a bit and their hair was messy. Some of them had even lost some footwear from running out of the Gala so fast. Twilight had told everyone earlier that Pony Joe's would be the best place to settle down at. She also knew that
Luna's Best Night Ever: 5Luna spent the rest of the party with her eyes glued to the necklace. Neither of the other two Elements present at the party had manifested a focus for their power, which made it all the more troublesome that the pink mare had apparently called hers forth. Luna hoped that it was instinctive, a reflex action. The Element of Laughter had told her to lighten up, perhaps it was just something that happened whenever they were embodying their nature to its fullest extent. The troubling part was that nopony besides her seemed to even notice it existed.Luna's Best Night Ever: 54 years ago in Introductions & Chapters More Like This
She decided to ask Twilight once she had the nerve again. After having studied the Elements for so long under Celestia's orders she'd surely have some sort of explanation for it, especially if it was innate magic like that of a unicorn. She was so lost in thought that she collided with something soft and purple. She blinked and found herself face to face with Twilight's flank. Twilight turned to look at her, eyebrow raised. Luna let out a soft,
To The Faithful From The UnfaithfulTo The Faithful From The Unfaithful3 years ago in Short Stories More Like This
To The Faithful From The Unfaithful
A 'My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic' One-Shot
My Dearest Student, Twilight,
In my one thousand years of rule, even I have not been without my errors. I am just as fallible as any other pony in Equestria. I'm not sure how you feel about the way your warnings about Queen Chrysalis were largely ignored before your brother's wedding, but I'm writing to you to express how deeply sorry I am for not trusting you. For years, I have proudly called you my most faithful student, yet when it mattered most, I did not have any faith in you.
But even though I failed you, you did not fail me, and much more importantly, you did not fail Equestria. So the time has come for me to learn a lesson of friendship. Indeed, Twilight, there are times when the teacher can learn something from the student.
Just as I hope you can forgive me, my most faithful student, I hope you can bring yourself to forgive your friends. As close as you six are, I'm sure you m
Heartbrokensilent tears cascade down my faceHeartbroken6 years ago in Free Verse More Like This
I breathe your name
A whisper, a sigh, i cry
How was i to know that kiss would be my last
How was i to know i would never again find sanctuary in your arms
I long for sleep but it never comes, no relief
The grasping, aching pain in my chest never subsides
I turn away
Closing my eyes to remember
then die a little inside
i thought we were meant to be together,
against all the odds
How wrong was i?
A pang of jealousy, a twisted smile
The trigger takes on many forms
All i really want to say is,
i love you.
Cold Cinnamon TeaCold Cinnamon Tea4 years ago in General Fiction More Like This
“Is anypony home?”
On hearing his sister’s voice from downstairs, Big Macintosh stuck his head out of the door. “Applebloom’s been home for a while now. Granny already made her dinner, so yer off the hook.”
“I’ll have to thank her before I call it a night then.” Applejack tipped her hat back and sighed loudly. “Its been a weird night, Macintosh! Do you have any idea what’s been going on out there?”
The red stallion glanced backwards into his room and swallowed. “Eeeee...nope.”
“Twilight kinda lost it today. She got herself so worked up about not having sent a letter to the princess that she ended up trying to create friendship problems just so she could fix them
Luna the Matchmaker Chap. 3Luna the Matchmaker Chap. 34 years ago in Profiles More Like This
Luna the Matchmaker
Chapter 3 "Cutie Mark Crusader Date Spying! YAY!"
By Steven Little
My Little Pony © Hasbro
Luna didn't know how long she'd lain there sleeping. Her dreams were becoming more vibrant and expansive. She opened her eyes slowly, allowing them adjust to bright morning light. She casually looked at the clock on the wall and saw that the morning had only just begun. "A good nights sleep was just what I needed." She said to herself. The Princess rolled out of the small bed and stretched her legs and wings luxuriously. Leaving her room, she walked down that short hall and into the family room.
"Good morning Luna." Spike said smiling. "Did you sleep okay?"
"Good morning Spike. I slept very well, than