Spotlight on Comrade Hero IISpotlight on Comrade Hero II3 years ago in Profiles More Like This
January 28, 2011
Interesting Facts about Comrade Hero: Comrade Hero in Prose II
Another excerpt from when I was working through my Certificate and Diploma in Creative Writing at Waiariki Polytechnic. This is circa June 2009.
This time it's Comrade Hero himself talking about the 'joys' of being a Hero who can soar through the skies...
You don't see many flying Heroes these days. Those that do get permission to patrol tend to fly fast and keep low, rarely traveling any great distance in a straight line, and always darting in and out of cover to avoid a direct line of sight. Hard lessons learned when every aspiring flying Hero wanted to own the skies and nobody wanted to stop and think about the risks, and the consequences.
You cannot argue with the realities that were faced and the lesson passed on from the time our ancestors took to the skies over France in 1914. Brave young men taking to the sky in motorized vehicles made from thin strips of wood, wire, and linen.
The average li
TToG:Chapter2 pt3 SlimeTToG:Chapter2 pt3 Slime3 years ago in Settings More Like This
Where am I?
Oh no...tied up again, oh god. Someone!
Anyone! HELP ME!" I shout.
There's no answer...just the sound of water dripping.
The dungeon is unbearably cold...how do I always end up in these places?
"What is that? Hey! HEY! St-stay away from me!" I say in fear.
"GeeheheHEHEHEAHAHAH! GET AWAHAHAY!" I scream.
The strange slime reaches out, tenderly stroking my bare skin, sliding up my shirt and fondling my helpless belly.
I tug and tear at the ropes holding me down...but they hold strong!
The slime moves closer, covering my body.
"AAAAAH! AHAHAHAH! WAAAAAHAHAHA! GET OFAHAAHAHA MEHEEHEH! GEEHEHET OAFAH!" I scream.
The slime pulls my clothes around, attacking every inch of flesh it can find.
Tiny fingers dig into my belly, poke an prod my belly button, and feather like strings slide in between my toes.
The slime's tickling is soft, but relentless...it reminds me of my nightmarish encounter with Lady Venus.
Fear floods my heart, the though of su
I am for an art...I am for an art the merciless temptress who plays with the imagination of man and sadistically enjoys his futile attempt to maintain control, his heaving breath, reddening face and the awkward mixture of embarrassment and desire written on his face.I am for an art...4 years ago in Urban & Spoken Word More Like This
I am for an art the feeling that overflows the sexual organs and draws out screams, grunts and sighs of relief, the sticky sweat that affectionately bounds the flesh, concluding the aging night.
I am for an art the loneliness, which thirst for the experience of love, but cannot bring myself to channel it through unworthy suitors. The art that is comparable to a false orgasm, only far more painful and long term.
I am for an art that spreads open the tender legs of virgins with pinkish gifts, delicate and as soft as flower petals, dripping with dew from a cold, moist night.
Her eyes, so full and afraid.
Euclid's Saga 6Euclid's Saga 62 years ago in Introductions & Chapters More Like This
Euclid's Saga 6
Big brother wasn't home but that didn't mean Euclid would fly back to Limbo. Euclid decided that he would wait all night if he had to. He sat down on the big brother's front steps and took out his journal.
I have barely had the time to write in you, my friend. I have been so busy with my patient, Tisiphone. I have been trying my hardest to find the source of his anger and in a session we had recently, he seemed very angry at his elder brother, Estragoth. I have to find out why. I doubt this could be the reason why Tisiphone is so angry, but it's a start.
I am a tad nervous about meeting this man. I have so many internal questions bouncing around my head. What is Estragoth like? Is he Tisiphone times infinity? Or a mini Sinclair and will I have to guard my loins? Oh I should erase that. I sound so very cruel to the lust demons. Making them seem like a sex crazed race. Well when you have Sinclair as a leader I guess, you can't help but
The voidThe void3 years ago in Short Stories More Like This
I walked the rough lands, outskirts of the void, looking up at the grey skies I called home. I looked at the palace that was toppling over me; I was supposed to be princess of the void but gave it up after I couldn't handle the stress and responsibilities of it. Amai was the princess now, and I pretty much served her as a person among the crowd of soldiers. "How am I going to get out of this?" I muttered to myself as I walked up the steps towards the doors of the palace, one last thing I'm an angel and that is exactly why I didn't become princess, the whole town would have gone up in uproar. I reached the top of the steps the guards opened the doors for me then closed them as I entered. I fiddled with the ribbons in my hair, the people of the void hate angels the only person who actually knows about me being an angel was Amai. At that moment Amai walked down the stairs, then hugged me, I hugged her back. "Oh thank god you got here safely; I have something important to tell you." I foll
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What happened, where am I? The sharp pain in the back of my head tells me I was knocked unconscious and now I can no longer remember why I'm here. Today the sun decides not to shine into this thick green jungle so I stumble and feel my way to an opening, where I see a river that's full of crows pecking on a charred body at the foot of a massive mountain. I know this place, Mt. Doi Inthanon in Thailand. I look up and see a hole in the side of the mountain where a man stands dressed in red, his hands smoking and a devilish grin on his face...Bison!
I try to gather energy for a Ki blast to throw at him but this throbbing headache wont let me and as a memory washes over me, I realize I did not come here alone. Someone has been trying to track or follow me but a snapped twig gives away their position and I head back to the forest only to see that it is my old friend Ryu. He's talking to me but I haven't heard anything except static in my ear
A loucura metalica e seu inicioA loucura metalica e seu inicio2 years ago in Short Stories More Like This
em um dia proximo ao entadeçer em um complexo mais afastado da cidade 3 elementos conversam de maneira mais informal. 2 deles são ana carolina ( goldess) e patrick tisin (tisinrei). a conversa parece ter entrado em um pequeno vazio quando derrepente ana quebra o silencio:
-- E então, nos podemos participar? disse Ana no tom mais alegre e descontraído possível alem de usar todo charme dos seus grandes e bonitos olhos verdes para ajudar em sua pergunta.
-- Vamos cara, quebra este galho para nós... disse Tisin também em um tom mais descontraído apesar de estar ligeiramente tímido por estar do lado da Ana(um comportamento natural apenas de sua versão civil).
-- ok , só um momento por favor, vou verificar os registros de ambos para poder efetuar o cadastramentos de voces. Apenas um momento por favor disse um homem bem arrumado para os dois que seria o contanto principal da organizaç
Echo of the past 14 [ENG]Echo of the past 14 [ENG]2 years ago in Introductions & Chapters More Like This
It took 4 hours to translate this chapter
14. The Blonde
Head bent back.
Blonde mohawk moved swiftly.
Brows lifted the eye lids followed.
Confident and strong.
Hand moving down the cold, vertical stand.
Long fingers leaving red long mark on the skin.
Sliding down the neck.
To his shoulders.
As if there were only him and you.
No one else.
You can hear your breath.
As if in a slow motion.
The row before last.
Two shadowed places.
- He's good.
The light haired, giddy man looked to the man sitting next to him with a look on his face that said "didn't I tell you?"
But in that look there was something else as well.
But the older man sitting next to him was used to that.
- He defin
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-- Já esta pronta Akane? Precisamos ser rápidas disse Eve enquanto ajeitava seu shortinho curto e apertado e dava uns últimos retoques em seu clospay de Touko/Hilda do pokemon.
-- Só um momento Eve, só esta faltando meus brincos. Já estarei pronta Disse Akane olhando para o seu espelho no banheiro enquanto ajeitava dois grandes brincos entres seus cabelos loiros e longos.
-- não demore o.k, nossos cosplays são bonitos, mas eles não vão ganhar nada se nos atrasarmos. disse ela em um ultimo instante antes de sair do banheiro e ir para o quarto dela.
Fitando a cama e ajeitando uns últimos detalhes em seu short ela notou um curioso novo artefato em sua cama. Olha o que temos aqui - disse ela com tom de surpresa. Ela então pegou o que parecia ser um boneco de pelúcia e, visivelmente animada, foi para sala aonde Abane fazia os últimos ajustes no seu suit (inspirado em samus aram).
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Nesta ocasião o tisin e Ana foram ate a base utiliza
Full Steam, chapter 1Full Steam, chapter 14 years ago in Introductions & Chapters More Like This
Marguerite Butler burst into the Hotel's Saloon. She ignored the angry comments of a man she accidentally pushed to the side and looked around desperately for a hiding place. There was none, at least none that she could reach before they caught up with her. Marguerite turned around, watching the swinging doors she had just crossed, half in fear half in defiance, and took from underneath her dress's bodice a heavy wad of bills.
-"I need to reach Boston in less than a week! There will be five thousand dollars for those who help me get there within that time... two thousand now, the rest when we reach Boston!" she said in a high-pitched and desperate voice.
A group of men began to stand, greed in their eyes, but as one they sat back down, their faces pale with fear as the doors opened and let in a handsome man. He was dressed in a white and expensive leather suit with silver ornaments; his light blond hair was covered by an immaculate white hat. He was soon followed by a group of unsavory
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"She'll be down in a few minutes." The deep voice announced.
Turning around there stood Neji Hyuuga. Dressed in a very expensive Gucci black suit, his flashy black leather watched stood out while his long dark brown hair was pulled back into a low ponytail. Toshiro sighed. "I've been waiting here for nearly two hours the last time someone told me she'll be down in a few minutes. I'm tired of waiting."
Neji chuckled. "I assumed this much. Hinata-sama is currently in a meeting with Uchiha-san to merge the Byakugan and Sharingan Corps into one business. It's taking longer than what I would have imagined. Hinata-sama know
Echo of the past 13 [ENG]Echo of the past 13 [ENG]2 years ago in Introductions & Chapters More Like This
This piece took 7,5h to translate.
13. The Redhead
- So what now? - she asked, sitting next to Nivan.
- Well, nothing. He'll be back. And until then we'll be like a long married couple - he answered her, looking down on the unnatural order under his feet... - We'll find you a job and in the mean time we'll paint his room, maybe the rest of the flat as well.
- Ehm... - she grew sad - Nivan I don't have that much savings... I put aside something so I can visit my parents in Tunisia... And I've got Marcin's rent and that's it - she looked at her feet.
Nivan looked at her. He never saw her that depressed. He pulled her close and hugged her.
- Hey, it's not that bad. You can still pick up tattooing. Here. I can give you my rent for this and the next month. And besides, we'll find some work for you real quick, don't you worry. And you will still be able to go and see your family.
- Not family but parents... My family is here - she said resting her head on his shoulder.
Echo przeszlosci 15Echo przeszlosci 152 years ago in Introductions & Chapters More Like This
Coś, co siedzi tam... głęboko, głęboko zakopane.
Przykryte warstwą piasku i mułu. Przysypane wszystkim tym, czym tylko mogłem.
Udaję, że tego nie ma.
Że to nigdy się nie wydarzyło.
Ale jednak... noszę tego piętno. Może nie jest to tak bardzo zauważalne, ale w jakiś sposób mnie ukształtowało... inaczej, niż może bym chciał".
Te słowa... mogliby wypowiedzieć oboje.
On i Winter.
Marcin i on.
Oboje mimo innych dróg życia, innej historii, mają pewną tajemnicę.
Tajemnicę zakorzenioną głęboko.
Jej małe pędy wychodzą przez całe ich życie.
Nie lubię o tym mówić.
Zresztą, kto by lubił...
Ogółem to ja zawsze... byłem typem uciekiniera. Potrafiłem tylko kłapać dziobem, a gdy
SH. Encounter: Target. Ch1.SH. Encounter: Target. Ch1.2 years ago in Introductions & Chapters More Like This
What's written in -...- means a person talking.
I should apologize that my stories has a lot of grammar and spelling mistakes, but that's just something I can't control So I APOLOGIZE about it
Please don't get angry about it..!
SasuHina. Encounter: Target. Ch1.
Who was this odd girl? Her hair always picked up, hiding her eyes behind glasses, looking always down, watching not to fall, always keeping distance from everyone
Has she ever spoken to anyone? Does she have any friends? Does she even speaks at all?
It was a new high school year Last year she had to stay in this school and all that she wished, was to be unnoticed and alone. She succeeded all these years, so why wouldn't she succeed this one too? Well It wasn't meant to stay this way.
-Hyuuga Hinata. Said the teacher. He was actually handsome, a teacher who had accident years ago and now had a bandage over his left eye.
It was an English lecture and tea
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'Promised myself I'd never be that sad. Maybe that's why you've come along. To show me, it's not always bad' ~Jem~
Lilac hues gazed outside at the winter season. The snow fell from the skies above creating a pallet of snow covering the ground. It's truly a beautiful sight. She loved the winter season, purely for the snow. Removing herself from the soft cushioned chair, Hinata made her way into the living room. Just as she sat down on the couch the sound of the front door being unlocked interrupted the peaceful silence of the house.
Hinata turned around, smiling softly at the male. "Welcome home, Sasuke." Unfortunately she was ignored as the raven haired male made his way down the hallwaymost likely into the bathroomand slammed the door behind him. She sighed. Sasuke Uchiha has been her boyfriend for five years so far. Prior to dating they were both co-workers at the Uchiha Corp, an electronic company that Sasuke is now the President
Hidan and Hinata II -M-Hidan and Hinata II -M-6 years ago in Ballad More Like This
~rated m for soon to be sexual sences!~
Hidan and Hinata had just arrived at the Saunas most exclusive hotel, thanks to Hinata money and Hidans persuasive manner ~ehem~. They had gotten the best room in the house err Hotel, well any way they went to their room but the room was much more suitable for honeymooners!
Hinata looked around and had a suspicious evil glint in her eyes. Hidan was also looking around while thinking Who the hell would sleep in such a colorful room? Not me! Hell no, fuck it! I would never be caught in such a girly room for more than 10 fucking minutes! Suddenly Hidan had a choking feeling and that there was something that was burning a hole at the back of his head, it felt sensual and dangerous. Hidan was now debating if he should turn around or what but that was also interrupted by a sudden hand slightly tracing his face and his chin from behind and then Hinata came into full view in front. (Fully clothed).
Hinata still had her e
20 ways to annoy Jacob Black1. Force him to wear a pink collar20 ways to annoy Jacob Black5 years ago in Humor More Like This
2. Ask him what its like to lose to a guy who sparkles
3. Take down all missing boy posters of him and replace with missing dog posters
4. Take him to the vets to be neutured
5. For every Christmas / Birthday buy him something made of silver
6. Get him and Edward in a room together and sing 'Hot 'n' cold' to them
7. Just before he phases describe Sam in a dress with as much vivid detail as possible. Making sure that when hes in his wolf form hes still thinking about it. (*may require assistance from Edward and possible Jasper to do this )
8. Ensure that all the wolf pack including Sam are in their wolf forms for the above ^^
9. Steal his clothes once he's fazed.
10. Remind him that one day the first girl he loved will be his mother in law.
11. Force him to watch the American werewolf series
12. Remind him constantly that hes not actually a real werewolf XD
13. Remind him that it was his idea to go cliff diving in the first place, and that if
His Butler, Torment Part2His Butler, Torment Part22 years ago in Introductions & Chapters More Like This
There are those eyes again, slender and luminous, sexy and allusive, red and amber. They beckon him from nothing as the pain and humiliation settles into his soul once more, or what's left of it. Those hands reach out of the darkness, the whispers of pretending pounding in his head. No, not again, not the pain not this again. How many times must this happen before the end? Is there even a God somewhere that hears his cries, to save him from this hell?
He screams, the pain too much, the demand for justice stronger than ever. Strong enough to summon him. The demon.
The butler's voice cries, "Young master!" His snow white hands flutter to keep his master steady as the young boy thrashes about in a nightmare.
His eyes pop open, wide with fear as his hand gropes under his pillow for his pistol. Where is it? He just had it; at least he thought he did. It was a gun he kept under his pillow, right?
The butler releases Ciel, returning to erect posture as he shoves his delicately framed rectangu
Missing You SomeI cant sleep. Hours pass me by, but they dont touch me.Missing You Some2 years ago in Free Verse More Like This
Yesterday i went to bed at 6 in the morning
Hello, how do you do?
I have being missing you some
So much has happend lately, things you will probably never know
You have being haunting me in my dreams i would prefer you didnt do that
How is your trip? I hope this finds you well
Your dad looks lonely its heartbraking
I work now i need to get money somehow
I find myself with new things i would like to share with you everyday
I often forget them when i sit in front of the computer to write them down
Maybe they're not as important i just wish you were here
Remember Vanilla Twilight?
It was our song last time you went away
You never told him where to find me if I ran away
Luckily i dont plan on doing that soon
You know, the thing about you leaving is that no one can do the job of replacing you well enough for my liking
If you ever have insomnia call me
Even though i dont think you ever will
Your mind is filled with too many nothing's to
hatredRoses are red , man I wish you were dead .hatred11 years ago in Free Verse More Like This
Violets are blue, god I hate you.
the stars shine while I decline watching you live happly
where I sink deeply into morbidaty thanks to thee
Life is on fair,but you wouldent care you got the better side of it .
You may have it good for now but later on you\'ll see that all the gaming you did well I kept up late to understand , then you\'ll see that in the end the winner is me.
Still I\'ll despise you for making my life a living hell well I was in middle school ,now you drool looking like a fool.I got it good and you got it sadd how bad did you turn out already on your second burn out well am going up in sociaty . Now sse how I hate thee and now you can hate me back
DiwaliDiwali2 years ago in Haiku & Eastern More Like This
festival of light
a time for peace, hope and joy
The WandererMy world dissolves into autumn,The Wanderer2 years ago in Free Verse More Like This
the shade and the fire draped about my throat
like so many jewels.
I met the mist as an old lover,
let the dew paint my lips
with the scent of harvest.
In a white memory, you are still walking away,
down that same road.
Your hair was shining like the fall.
Your shape in the fog beckons;
ghost or vision, I care not.
I lose myself.