Words To Avoid"Words To Avoid In Creative Writing"Words To Avoid5 years ago in Reviews & Guides More Like This
We've all heard there are some no-no words in creative writing - these are words that you want to avoid "at all costs" some people say, but do you know which they are, and why you should avoid them? Well, I didn't the first time I saw a list of "words to avoid", and not surprisingly, a lot of people who write these lists don't know why either. (I know, SHOCK! GASP! just because someone wrote a guide doesn't mean they know what they're talking about.)
So, this morning I went on a word-finding spree to find these "word lists" and find out WHY I was supposed to avoid these words - and more importantly, HOW. This guide will explain what I discovered.
WARNING: Quite often in this guide I am going to use words I say you shouldn't. Do as I say, not as I do. I address one problem at a time so as not to confuse people, so yes, some of my examples will have several mistakes in them even if I only address one of those mistakes.
The Dreaded 2nd DraftDarling Mionette'sThe Dreaded 2nd Draft4 years ago in Writing More Like This
A Writer's Guide To The Second Draft
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Going into this tutorial, I am making the assumption that at this point, you have finished your first draft completely (from beginning to end) and now have a finished (albeit in need of editing) novel sitting in front of you. If you don't, don't worry, most of the information in this tutorial can still be applied. So, for those of you who haven't finishe
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First Person POV
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First person POV is denoted by the use of “I”, “My”, “Me”, “Mine
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Language - SevineniiSevineniiLanguage - Sevinenii4 years ago in Other More Like This
Instructions: Delete ALL vowels from the text that is to be translated. Example:
Hey! This is DarlingMionette!
Hy! THs s DrlngMntt!
Deleting out the vowels from the translation keeps words from getting ridiculously long. Sevinenii translates by converting consonant sounds into full syllables to avoid having several consonants in a continuous line like a direct translation of all letters may create.
When consonants repeat (LL) they are converted to their plural form (LL = denden = dena) shown later in the list after the singular spellings. For instance, Instead of:
Bell (Bll) = Ib-den-den
This was adapted to keep repeat consonants from creating ridiculous sounding words.
Syllables sound exactly as they are presented with a few exceptions based on where they are in the word (front, middle, end).
Consonant = Singular, Plural // Pronunciations ** Alternates
B = ib, iben //