YouxRiku PART1Falling through thick darkness, my very being is diminishing within moments. The darkness clung to me as if it was stripping the light away from my heart. Everyone is balanced with just enough light and darkness. Once this is out of balance, the unfortunate individual will be consumed by their own evil. Those who have too much light can wield a key-blade. They are pure and kind at heart and want to help others; however, there are few who have obtained such substantial powers to wield the key-blade. My thoughts flow through my mind like running water trying to escape its current path, but it is forced with direction. A voice called out to me, each time a little louder.YouxRiku PART14 years ago in Settings More Like This
My heavy tired-some eyes opened. At first things were blurry but came into vision once I sat up. A hooded figure who wore a black cloak stood before me. My head felt as if it was spinning, was I actually falling? The cool, chippy air kissed my skin erotically that sent a shiver down my spine.
YouxRiku PART2 "I'm not as soon as you left Roxas and Axel found me and brought me here for protection," I justified. He gave me a peculiar look.YouxRiku PART24 years ago in Settings More Like This
"Why are you in a nightgown? It's nearly see-through." I covered up in embarrassment. I was used to the fact that no one ever saw me. I felt extremely self conscious at the moment. Riku removed his black cloak, underneath it was baggy pants, a yellowish vest and a black tank-top that showed his tummy. He placed the cloak over me shoulders. It felt warm and it smelled like his cologne. I inhaled a deep breath.
"Why are you smelling my cloak?" He raised his eye brow and laughed.
"Sorry and I don't have any other clothes other than nightgowns."
"That's not strange at all," he said wittily. I blushed from his playful laughs and joke.
"I'm sorry," I muttered under my breath, nothing else left my mouth. I had a strange feeling that I knew him for many years. He seemed so familiar.
"What are you sorry for _____-chan?" Furthermore, he
Kingdom Hearts Unknown blossom Kingdom HeartsKingdom Hearts Unknown blossom7 years ago in Fan Fiction More Like This
An Unknown blossom
Sora was finally bac
Common Art Theft ExcusesTop Excuses I Hear from Thieves and Rule BreakersCommon Art Theft Excuses4 years ago in Deviant Events More Like This
1.EVERY1 DOSE IT!!!!!111!!!
This one is never well written... Just because other people do it doesn't make it okay. If it's against the rules I will report it. I don't care who you are or who else is doing it. If you give me examples I'll report them to. After all, if crazy people started shooting other people in the face would you start doing it too? Apparently koaumae5918 has seen "Well everyone steals! We're stealing the alphabet!" I've seen this one as well...No. No it doesn't work that way stupid.
2. UR STOOPID. UR A TROLL.
This one isn't an excuse, but I hear it a lot. It's never well written either... Me or anyone else reporting you doesn't make us trolls. We aren't harassing you. We're trying to show you what you've done wrong so you don't get banned, suspended, or reprimanded.
3. You aren't a mod! You can't report me!
DA relies on members to re
RP-Guide - Character Creation and DevelopmentCharacter Creation and DevelopmentRP-Guide - Character Creation and Development3 years ago in Reviews & Guides More Like This
((Whether you're writing your own story or RPing, there's a lot that goes into making an interesting and realistic character. I know that some RPers prefer to come up with characters literally on the spot before they start playing. Others prefer to have one prepared and ready beforehand. I'm one of the latter. Some people can pull off just whipping a character up out of nowhere; if you're able to do that well, you have my respect. But for the rest of us, I have some helpful tips! Not very much of this is WG exclusive, but hey, it helps for any kind of RP.
Once again, most of these are based on my experience and personal opinion. You might have different ideas about things that do and don't work. Take it with as many grains of salt as you wish. The most important thing about RP is that both you and your partners are having fun.))
1. What do they look like?
This might sound like a silly question. They're your characters, after all
A Guide: Crafting a KH OCIntroduction: Good [insert time of day here], reader. First, I thank you for taking the time to take a look at this, and I hope you will find it helpful in crafting a Kingdom Hearts Original Character [KH OC]. I've noticed throughout the fandom that there's a wide range of OCs out there, from the most ridiculous flat character to a believable, interesting, and multi-dimensional creation. I hope this guide will allow such creators to craft/refine a character.A Guide: Crafting a KH OC3 years ago in Profiles More Like This
Now then. I'm open to suggestions about this guide. Feel free to make suggestions.
Just because your character isn't from a world like Halloween Town or Atlantica doesn't mean there isn't a certain type of dress your character should follow. For example: Characters from Destiny Islands [both characters original to the KH series and those from Final Fantasy] often wear short- or no sleeved shirts and either shorts or loose pants. These designs are likely due to the tropical climate of the Islands. Tidus, Sel
Goodbye is Not Forever: Chapter OneGoodbye is Not Forever: Chapter One2 years ago in Romance More Like This
Labyrinth: Goodbye is Not Forever
Chapter One: The Story
A clock on the wall chimed the hour. It was twelve o'clock; the bewitching time of night when the impossible was made possible and the world was silent.
Mariya the goblin had been trying to get her children to bed for quite some time now. And finally she had managed to get them all into their cots, but they were still wide awake.
"Please mama, tell us a story!" Her five children cried in unison.
The old goblin fought to keep the smile from her lips as she sighed loudly, "I will . . . If you promise me you'll go to sleep the second I'm done."
They all promised and settled in for the story.
"What will it be tonight?" Mariya asked.
"Tell us about King Jareth!" One begged from within her place in her small bundle of blankets.
"Oh, but that is a sad story indeed." Mariya said with a frown. "Don't you want to hear a story with a happy ending?"
The Aftermath - Riku"I missed the smell of the salt in the ocean." Riku said, taking a deep breath, through his nose and out his mouth. He was alone, and he knew this, but still he kept speaking aloud like there was someone listening. Maybe there was? It didn't matter.The Aftermath - Riku9 years ago in General Fiction More Like This
He stood on the dock, staring deep into the water. Was it ever this clear? He felt like he couldn't remember the last time he could look down into the slow-moving liquid and see himself so vividly. It felt new to him. He liked this new feeling, this starting over kind of feeling. And it was just that; he was starting his life over. As he stood in his school uniform, white and blue hues, he thought about this past week on the island.
Arriving there, after that final battle with the dreaded Xemnas. After that relaxing conversation on the beach with Sora. After walking through the door to light and dropping into the cold water, only to pop up and see his friends on the beach waiting for him so excitedly. The best moments of his entire life.
Goodbye is Not Forever: Chapter TenGoodbye is Not Forever: Chapter Ten2 years ago in Romance More Like This
Labyrinth: Goodbye is Not Forever
Chapter Ten: Adagio for Strings
Sarah picked up the dress that had Mariya had laid out for her and examined it with wide eyes. Though she was angry and depressed beyond all reason, the girl couldn't deny the elegant beauty of the dress.
As Sarah ran her fingers down the soft material of the gown, she couldn't place the fabric. Though it was quite similar to silk. The dress was a delicate dark green that matched Sarah's eyes perfectly and complemented her figure more so than anything she had ever worn. And as Sarah put it on and looked into the large mirror, she blushed at the woman that stared back. She was breathtakingly beautiful.
As Sarah twirled in the dress, she smiled as she realized that it draped down to her ankles, keeping her legs out of sight. She had always hated dresses or skirts that were higher than ankle length and was grateful that she was been t
Outisders Hetalia Crossover 1NOTE: Ok, its from Hong Kong's point of view, I realize it isn't clear who Xiang is so I thought I'd let you know, he's Hong Kong. Mattie is obviously Canada and Frenchie is obviously France XDDD By the way, if you were wondering, Lars is Netherlands Enjoy!Outisders Hetalia Crossover 14 years ago in Fan Fiction More Like This
How in the hell did we get ourselves into this mess? I wondered as I stepped in front of Mattie, my face set in a scowl as I locked eyes with the man who had been threatening him. Typical Soc: Tall, well-built, smug smirk on his face and expensive clothing. He reeked of cologne too. I seriously thought I'd suffocate just from the smell before anything else happened.
Mattie squeaked in fear, gripping tightly to my arm and peeking around to look up at my face. "X-Xiang--"
I shook my head, cutting him off. I had learned long ago that talking in these situations only made everything worse. It was best to keep your mouth shut and do what you had to to get the hell out of there in one piece. When I was younger, I mouthed
Sailor Moon OC CritiqueRules-Sailor Moon OC Critique4 years ago in Profiles More Like This
1. Copy the form, post it on your dA and send the link to one of us.
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3. You have the right to ignore criticism, you don't have the right to blow up at us for giving it. Please also avoid telling us that you don't care what we said, it's a bit rude.
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5. For the 'Appearance:' portions, we've decided that you're NOT ALLOWED to use any sort of dollmakers, recolors (Unless you have a VERY GOOD REASON.), or commissioned artwork. Bases are okay to an extent, but only as long as it's only the body being used and there is creativity apparent.
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Protagonist or Antagonist?:
For Terra LoversYou sit in the light green grass of the Land of Departure, looking up at the night sky. You've lived here with Terra, Aqua, and Ventus (aka Ven) for as long as you can remember. You came here because of your ability to use a Keyblade. You're all the best of friends. Aqua even gave each of you a lucky charm that is supposed to keep you all together no matter where you are or how far apart you are. You put you hand on your charm, which you wear as a necklace.For Terra Lovers4 years ago in Fan Fiction More Like This
"Admiring the stars again?" a voice asks behind you. You smirk.
"Well it's a good time to think, Aqua," you say turning your head to look at the blue haired girl. She smiles. Ventus, who was between her and Terra (who's being quiet), flashes a bright smile.
"We're going to watch the meteor shower," Ven says brightly, "Want to come?"
"Well before that," you say standing up and facing the trio, "I'd like a rematch with you Terra." You give him a sly smile. The brunette smiles and lets out a small chuckle. Aqua sighs.
"You two," she sa
Kingdom Hearts WGSora WGKingdom Hearts WG5 years ago in Fan Fiction More Like This
Sora and Riku where sitting on the beach watching the sunset peacefully when Sora sees something in the water "Riku, what is that in the water?" Riku looks and his eyes get big "It's a human!" Both Sora and Riku immediately jump in the water and swim up to the young girl drifting on a plank of wood, they push her to shore and set her on the beach. "She's not breathing!" cries out Sora after looking for a pulse. Riku starts pushing on the girl's stomach "Come on breath." The girl coughs up water and passes out again and they both sigh in relief that she is alive. Sora sits there eating a candy bar rubbing his little bulge of a belly from not working out every day. "What are we going to do with her? We can't leave her here she isn't in any condition to be left alone." asks Riku "We could take her home." Riku picks up the girl and heads down the road getting a lot of looks from people because of the girl in his arms. "Sora give me your jacket." "Why?" "She's cold and we
~ How Dare You ~How dare you~ How Dare You ~1 year ago in Free Verse More Like This
You spinner of lovely words...
How dare you weave me a web of glistening endearments
Only to trap me in their sticky, meaningless embrace?
How dare you
You artist of deception...
How dare you paint me a picture of love
That was only a forgery to begin with?
How dare you
You bearer of lovely items...
How dare you shower me with priceless affections
That in the end were mere plastic coins?
How dare you
You coward of a human being...
How dare you claim to be a brave knight
Only to run before the battle even began?
How dare you
You double-sided coin...
How dare you show me your clean face
Only to expose the filth that lay with a simple flip?
How dare you
You foul excuse for a human...
How dare you claim me as your precious treasure
Only to abandon me as if I were only trash?
How dare you
You inconsiderate, spoiled child...
How dare you take possession of my fragile heart
Only to throw it back once you had broken it?
How dare you...?
The three DonatellosThere is one surefire way for Donatello to get rid of his brothers so he can have peace. Well, two, but that's not the point. The surefire way is to mention the words 'transdimensional portal stick'. He's STILL trying to figure out how that other version of him got it to work (especially when it was originally a flashlight), but he does know that pretending he does gets them to vanish almost instantly. It's funny actually, he has started making a game out of how much of the word 'transdimensional' he can say before they leave. His highest score is 'transdim'.The three Donatellos4 years ago in General Fiction More Like This
He tweaked a few things and the portal stick started glowing, 'causing him to jerk his hands back. Moments later, Don found himself staring at two other versions of himself. One was about two feet shorter, and one was DEFINITELY two feet taller. "Whoa... Where am I?" asked the smaller one. The taller one had whipped out a little gadget and was scanning practically everything with it.
"Prodigious! I'm in another dimension!"
love doesn't come with a get out of jail free card0.love doesn't come with a get out of jail free card1 year ago in Free Verse More Like This
was supposed to mean
the body next to you.
wasn't meant to be
about if it's a friends house
or your current affair.
shouldn't withstand this -
and it sure as hell wouldn't -
if we (i) could try
Scurry to lock the door.
Toy-of-the-week has arrived.
Cover Barbies eyes.
We're doing thing she and Ken
could only dream about.
I'm plastic and you're
perfectly chiseled to fit
my plastic dreams.
Rush out the window.
Put the ring back on.
Return to the kitchen.
Cover up sex with Chanel.
["You seem happier."]
("I met up with a friend.")
beging to clutter
the floors of the office.
slipped between finger and
Sweet escape in the arms
of cheap booze and tobacco.
Survive one more night,
one more lie.
This is what suburbias about,
Crack of a whip.
Bruises to show.
Love games can only
go so far befor
Riku's MINERiku's MINE!Riku's MINE4 years ago in Fan Fiction More Like This
Riku was running; fast, trying to get away from the person chasing him. His silver hair whipped behind him as sweat coated his body. He had been running for a good thirty minutes and he was beginning to run out of breath. He needed to find sanctuary and fast before HE caught up to him. Aqua eyes scanned the pier that harbored the boats of families and kids and he made a dash for it. If he could just get to the
He glanced behind him and found that his pursuer was gaining on him. Worry filled his hearts as he suddenly began to realize that once he set foot in the pier, he would have no place to go. Frantically, his eyes searched for something that could offer his respite from the raging fan behind him.
He caught the glint of golden brown; the tell tale sign of green and brown; and the pointed things that protruded from where ears should have been. He rejoiced at the sight of the person he had found and ran up to her.
"BRIANNA WAIT!" he yelled.
AspergersYou tease him.Aspergers4 years ago in Short Stories More Like This
Lie to him.
And he takes it all.
He doesn't understand. Or maybe he does and doesn't let on. He always has been one to want attention.
No. That was wrong. Not attention. He wants friends. He wants people who don't make fun of how he dresses or the things he likes. He wants people who don't egg him on for a laugh or call him names and make fun of his (often less than socially acceptable) mannerisms.
He doesn't see where he is wrong though! Oh, no. He can't tell when an appropriate time to make goofy faces is, or how Nazi jokes aren't very funny when in serious discussion. He doesn't know that words like "fag" and "retard" are not words he should be throwing around so casually, especially when they are the same words people call him.
I have tried to teach him these things. And I will continue to. People will make fun of me
Kingdom Hearts OC Critique (On Hiatus)Rules-Kingdom Hearts OC Critique (On Hiatus)4 years ago in Profiles More Like This
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4. I haven't played Kingdom Hearts: Birth by Sleep, or Coded. So just know, that it'll take me longer to give you your results, since I'll have to do some research.
5. For the 'Appearance:' portions, I've decided that you're NOT ALLOWED to use any sort of dollmakers, recolors (Unless you have a VERY GOOD REASON.), or commissioned artwork. Bases are okay to an extent, but only as long as it's only the body being used and there is creativity apparent.
A Werewolf ChristmasThe humans dispatch from their merry songsA Werewolf Christmas1 year ago in Urban & Spoken Word More Like This
Sung while moving from house to house in the snow
He selects his prey, one that left alone,
Careful to hide from the one who hunts him,
Moving with the shadows, he attacks her.
She can't even scream as he eats her heart.
His teeth and gray fur smeared with her spilled blood.
He pauses, savoring the moments sweet taste,
And something her arm holds catches his eye
A booklet with a Doug fir on the front.
Pulling it to himself, he looks through it.
All the songs they sung were written in it
One, "White Christmas,: triggers his memory
From before the werewolf curse took his life
It all began flooding back to his mind:
The lights, the presents, the baby Jesus.
He grieved for his victims and death seems right,
So he turned to the man who hunts for him.
Urging him to shoot, he lowers his head,
Lusting for the silver to pierce his heart.
Waiting for too long, he looks up, confused.
The man paused, shocked by the submission;
It was then he saw something
Bleeding Outhe broke my bonesBleeding Out1 year ago in Free Verse More Like This
flung me into the snow
beat my swollen heart
and ripped my light apart.
congested my memories
with terrible pain
ripped out all the stitches
to make me a scarf.
but he was already faded
and long gone
before winter fell.
i bled out for a vampire.