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Urchin's Story: TLM fic part 3THE SECOND DAYUrchin's Story: TLM fic part 33 years ago in Fan Fiction More Like This
The next morning the Prince took Ariel on a tour of his kingdom, and I was left to loaf around the palace wondering how things were going. I found Sebastian in Ariel's room, and we sat around a while, not having much to talk about. I found the long note Ariel had written to me last night, laying on the desk, but I was still unable to read it. I stared at the squiggles and swirls and finally turned to Sebastian.
"Sebastian," I said. "Ariel wrote this to me last night, but I can't read it. Will you read it to me?"
He nodded and I plopped the paper down in front of him. He scuttled on top of it and read it aloud, hesitating at
Urchin's Story: TLM fic part 2THE FIRST DAYUrchin's Story: TLM fic part 23 years ago in Fan Fiction More Like This
Flounder tried to stop me, but Ariel needed help badly, and he knew it. When the Sea Witch's cave came into view, I could see him grow horribly afraid, and I told him to stay behind. I was pretty scared myself to tell the truth. Stories were always floating around on the edges of conversations, always in whispers, about the Sea Witch and the strange and unnatural things she did.
I swam into the cave entrance and there were hundreds of awful little twisted things lining the walls; they stretched toward me and gaped their mouths and made terrible groaning cries, but I swatted them away and swam faster. It got so dark I couldn't
Urchin's Story: TLM fic part 5EPILOGUEUrchin's Story: TLM fic part 53 years ago in Fan Fiction More Like This
Sebastian swam up on the beach a while later, bringing King Triton and his six daughters behind him. He had left under the impression Ariel was marrying the Prince, and had gone to tell her family the good news. Triton and his daughters had come to wish her congratulations, and to say good-bye. They swam up into the shallows, calling and waving to us. Ariel ran forward, splashing clumsily, and threw herself into her father's arms. Then she hugged each of her sisters in a row, kissing each of them. Her family was delighted to see her safe, and not in the clutches of the Sea Witch. But they were a little confused. They had expected to
Urchin's Story: TLM fic part 4THE THIRD DAYUrchin's Story: TLM fic part 43 years ago in Fan Fiction More Like This
The next morning I walked downstairs to find the entire palace in an uproar: people were hurrying in all directions, pushing trolleys of food and decorations and shouting orders at one another. I recognized a young servant that had helped me the other day. He was checking things off a list and issuing orders, and I walked up to him and asked him what was going on.
"Why, you haven't heard yet?" he said with a grin. "The Prince is getting married! He just announced it this morning! Getting married this very day, before the sun sets!"
I stared in surprise. "We're in a hurry to prepare the wedding," the servant went on. "It will
Goodbye - KH, Riku+XionGoodbye - KH, Riku+Xion4 years ago in Fan Fiction More Like This
This contains content up to and including Day 353 in the game Kingdom Hearts: 358/2 Days.
Goodbye
"Goodbye", she said to him, her face bright, her tone of voice cheerful.
"Goodbye", she concluded, a moment before she turned and vanished into the gap in reality behind her. He doubted he'd see her again.
"Goodbye".
Protecting the things she cared for the most, was it? To the point she herself mattered not. He could relate, he knew, as the breeze made the sashes of his blindfold shift along with his hair. So he could protect his most important person... his very best friend... there was no other choice. This much he knew. And yet why was it
CoS: I'm Wide Awake The city was dead asleep as the full moon slowly began to rise above the city. No creatures of the daylight world stirred as the darkness overcame everything in sight. The infected had come out of their hiding places, preparing to take over the world, one bite at a time.CoS: I'm Wide Awake11 months ago in Short Stories More Like This
It sent a shiver down most cats' spines to think about it. They were the bane of their existence, and the very thing that threatened their lives every day. It was a surprise that nobody had tried to find a cure to the disease... then again, the creatures that now lived in the city weren't people, but cats.
The sound of the infected's yowls echoed across the city streets as
Ribbon - RikuNami V-Day Contest EntryTitle: RibbonRibbon - RikuNami V-Day Contest Entry1 year ago in Romance More Like This
Game: Kingdom Hearts
Characters: Namine, DiZ, Riku
Pairings: Riku/Namine
Naminé stared out of the large, mansion window, looking past the gates and towards the woods. Her eyes were intent as she studied the clearing into the woods. "Naminé," came a deep, haunting voice. She turned her head to see DiZ, the mysterious man who had taken the beautiful blonde in and cared for her with only one request: to recreate a young boy's memories.
The sweet girl forced a smile and glanced back at the window, "I know…I'm sorry," she whispered, slowly standing from her window seat and walking back over to the large, white ta
My Style of WritingStep 1: Choose characterMy Style of Writing1 month ago in Short Stories More Like This
I chose Aven in this example because the first character I chose, Avita, didn't really want to be written about. It happens. So it was semi randomly selected. Normally when you're in a roleplay you know what character you're going to start with so it's not so hard to figure out exactly what you're doing.
Step 2: Figure out the setting if it is not already given to you (usually just a sentence works)
It was a dark and cold spring night.
Step 3: Expand upon sentence at least 2 to 4 times
Second Draft: It was a dark and dreary spring night as the wind quietly whistled through the silent and cold wood
Normally between the second and third draft, I start compounding the sentence and changing what word starts it off. Be diverse and don't be afraid to slowly add in more sentences as you go. You want to have a decent starter sentence to introduce where you're at when you're writing.
Third Draft: Darkness was almost overwhel
The UnicornThe UnicornThe Unicorn1 year ago in Short Stories More Like This
Midwinter – a frozen landscape. The cold – blinding, bitter, biting. In this bleak northern land, where winter showed no mercy, the world was consumed by a raw, piercing blizzard. Even the animals that inhibit this harsh winter terrain dared not venture out. The fiercest predators – the bears; the badgers; the foxes all slumbered inside their dens. Even the wolf, the king of winter, sought for shelter in their dens. The only sign of life in this unyielding snowstorm were the sturdy evergreens, trees that weather even this cruel season with silent endurance.
A girl struggled along a frozen path. Her hair
Phantom of the Opera's youth Young Sarah Giry led the boy quickly away from the circus tent. Panic threatened to overwhelm her. What was she doing, rescuing a murderer? But something in the boy's pleading eyes had convinced her. Now, she headed for the only place she could think of. The Opera Populaire. She ushered the boy quietly towards the sewer hole of the building, hissing under her breath, "In, in, in!" The boy blinked at her, then slipped through the bars and waited in silence, slipping into the shadows.Phantom of the Opera's youth3 years ago in Short Stories More Like This
Men ran to Sarah, torches in hand and murder in their eyes. One of them turned to address her. "Young lady, did y
MLP Is Showing Its CracksLet me get this out of the way, because this might come off as a rant: I like My Little Pony: Friendship Is Magic. I do. Really. I'm not a big enough fan to call myself any names or align myself with a subsection of the fanbase. I just watch it with my son, and have a passing interest in the culture surrounding it.MLP Is Showing Its Cracks3 months ago in Personal More Like This
But most of all I watch the show in its own bubble. Me consuming a product as intended for hungry eyeballs made by hard working artists doing what I hope is their very best. So when I say what I say, it is from a me to show complaint only, in large part having to do with how the story is being told.
So. Let's get to it.
I can tell Faust is gone.
I sit here, having ruminated on season 3 and its finale for a few days now. At first viewing I didn't like the last episode, (13). But on rewatch It did grow on me. I have one nitpick, but its at the very very very end and it isn't important to my argument. But the reason I didn't like it was that it felt like it was going by too fas
Pick Me Up Gently--Alternate VerseArrietty woke to the sound of a rich, deep laughter reverberating up the stairs and into the room she shared with Ryan. The sound made her stomach do odd little flips and made her want to rub her knees together. There was just something that was so familiar about it. But she couldn't figure out what. Feminine peals rang out very shortly after the man's—for it was so obviously a man's laughter—woke Arrietty from her sleep. She wondered just what was going on downstairs.Pick Me Up Gently--Alternate Verse1 year ago in Drama More Like This
Climbing from the doll bed—which was actually a bit large for her—Arrietty pulled on her old borrowing dress and boots. She glanced out of the window that
Its Raining - RikuNami RequestTitle: It's RainingIts Raining - RikuNami Request1 year ago in Drama More Like This
Game: Kingdom Hearts
Characters: Riku, Marluxia, Naminé
Pairing: Riku/Naminé
Riku stared at the Graceful Assassin who held something so precious to him in his arms. "Please…don't do this," he said through clenched teeth, staring into his sharp eyes. "You can't. have. her."
"I'm afraid she's already mine. You see…the Organization will always reign supreme. And you can't do anything to stop me." The pink haired man snickered, stroking the beautiful blonde, Naminé, on the head. She timidly stared up at Riku, fear in her eyes.
"Please run" she mouthed to him, her eyes pleading.
He shook his
Redeeming DreamsThey say it is foolish to believe in fairy tales. They tell you that you must get your head out of the clouds and face the realities of life. That's how it was in my case.Redeeming Dreams1 year ago in Short Stories More Like This
As a kid, everyone knew me as a perpetual dreamer, and I received a lot of flak because of it, not only from my teachers and the other kids at school, but from my own family, too. My brothers and sisters teased and tormented me unmercifully, and my parents were forever telling me: "When will you learn to grow up?" Easy for them to say; they never understood how hard I sincerely tried to act adult, yet I couldn't see why I couldn't be a grown-up and retain my imagination at
Ariel Recolour No 24 years ago in Fantasy
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Turnabout Date(Spoiler warning for the final case in Phoenix Wright: Justice for All).Turnabout Date10 months ago in Romance More Like This
He'd come face to face with cold-blooded killers, having to question them and make them break down their façade of innocence.
He'd seen his boss and mentor lose her life.
He'd had his good friend from elementary school disappear without a trace.
He'd been caught numerous times staring defeat in the face, in hopeless situation after hopeless situation… and yet, somehow, coming out victorious.
Phoenix Wright had lived all of this in his 25 years, most of it during his first two years as a defense lawyer. Law school certainly hadn't prepared him for these cra
The Dream Treaders.there's a band of blokes called the dream treadersThe Dream Treaders.6 months ago in Free Verse More Like This
who wear golden helmets and finely-knit sweaters
when they close their eyes at night to sleep
they don't waste their time just counting sheep
the dreamers, the treaders, so it's said
can see inside the dreams they tread
they can sail along stars and paint them all white
then dance amongst them and drink in their light
they wear scarves sewn from aquarian thread
which comes in arian blue and andromedan red
and when they become tired playing with stars
some will tread deeper, exploring their scars
some will see a monster inside
or a friend or lover who's recently died
some searc
Not alone anymoreHe was surrounded by white. White, as far as the eye could see…Not alone anymore1 year ago in Introductions & Chapters More Like This
He didn't know how long he had been here, suspended here. Not knowing where he was, or how he- no, that's not right. He remembered how he got here…
He could see him, the one of whom he was only a Replica for, standing above his dissipating body. Trying to hide the pain he was experiencing, he wondered aloud, "What happens when a fake dies? One like me… where will my heart go? Does it… disappear?"
"It'll go somewhere," the real version of himself answered, obviously trying to comfort him.
Ariel and Flounder3 years ago in Movies & TV
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On the First Day of ChristmasShe could tell that he was home before she could see him. Sho had been kind enough to give her own bed in the dollhouse but when he went to work Arrietty loved to sleep on his pillow, taking in his scent while he was gone. Her eyes fluttered open after hearing the front door gently close and Sho's loud but gentle voice rang from downstairs.On the First Day of Christmas1 year ago in Romance More Like This
"Arrietty!" he called up from the first floor. "I'm home."
She smiled to herself. This was still her favorite part of the day. Slowly she rose up from his pillow and listened as Sho's loud and gentle footsteps rumbled up the stair to meet her in his bedroom doorway.
"Sho," was the first thing sh
CRYOUT:01:CH01:PG241 year ago in Pages & Panels
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Forever, Chapter 3 --Arrietty--I do not own anything related to "Arrietty" or "The Borrowers" nor do I make any sort of profit from them. If I did....well, I wouldn't be sitting here writing this fanfiction. I'd be selling it for money and it would be legitimate fiction. ;PForever, Chapter 3 --Arrietty--1 year ago in Romance More Like This
Forever
Chapter 3
It was quiet on the trip back to the road. Sho didn't speak much, probably letting me be alone with my thoughts. I wanted to speak, to not think, but the quiet was too thick to break. So I was left with my thoughts. My mind raced in circles, trying to figure out how to look at the day's events. On the one hand, the only thing I had really wished for over the last eight years had fin
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