jadenthis story is about a disturbed boy...its a good story i guess...its not completely done thoughjaden11 years ago in Fantasy More Like This
Human Transmutation CircleHuman Transmutation Circle10 years ago in General Fiction More Like This
The CIRCLE!! its basic layout is composed of a circle inscribed with a hexagon (which represents balance, perfection and unity) which inturn is inscribed with the triangle representing FIRE. There are nine other alchemic symbols. I would have put the actuall symbol on the picture... but it would have been rather difficult to explain exactly which element goes with whitch symbol!
The # on the Circle above corresponds with the # below:
3 white arsenic
6 (not sure will find)
7 sal armonic
[I'll be putting up a short descripiton of each element (alchemy-wise) soon]
Now on to the writing and its explanations
BLUE WRITING- this is the outer circle. the inner and middle circles are exactly the same, only they break off - it'll be marked where in the passage:
Pale white and black with false citrine imperfect white and red. The peacock s feather in bright colours, the rainbow in (End Inner Circle) the sky above. The spotted pan
Gay Rights and MarriageGay Rights and Marriage8 years ago in Academic Essays More Like This
Gay Rights and Marriage
Attention: [Picture of Mikey]
This is what close-minded people like to call a fag, queer, homo, faggot, flamer, gay, and many more names. What close-minded people don't know is what it's like to be gay:
[Story of Tyler and Mikey]
"The Model in the image, name is Michael, I always called him Mikey. We met in February 1999 on Valentines Day as it happens. He moved in 2 houses down from mine, It also turned out he was going to the same school. We instantly hit it off, and became the best of friends. We were both 14 years old.
After about a month of him moving in, I went round after doing homework as usual. His Mom sent me upstairs to his room as she normally did. Before I got to the door (which was ajar by the way) he said (I have never forgotten a single word) "And There's this guy who I'm really good friends with,[he giggled] I wonder if he's . . .?, I be
Her Death - HakodaDad! I think Moms in trouble. Theres a man in our house!Her Death - Hakoda7 years ago in Fan Fiction More Like This
I knocked out the man attacking me and I dropped my club. Hundreds of thoughts ran through my head at once wondering the same thing, Is she okay?
I picked up my club and started running. I called out Kya! Hoping my wife could hear me and know that I was coming. Katara followed behind quickly. I was stumbling through the snow and ice as I fought my way to the center of the village. I reached my home, flew open the curtains, and stopped.
I was too late.
The Commandments of MetalTHE METAL TEN COMMANDMENTSThe Commandments of Metal7 years ago in Humor More Like This
1) THOU SHALT NOT VIEW ALL OTHER MUSIC AS EQUAL, ANYONE WHO CANNOT SHRED, PLAY DOUBLEKICK AT 300 BPM, PLAY SOLID RYTHMIC MELODY OR SCREAM UNTIL THEIR LUNGS BLEED IS NOT WORTHY OF YOUR RESPECT (bassists are exempt from this rule, see commandment seven)
2) THOU SHALT NOT ASSOCIATE YOURSELF WITH ANY RELIGION, GOOD HEARTED MENTALITY, OR THE COLOUR PINK
3) THE ONLY VOCALS THAT ARE ACCEPTABLE ARE SCREAMS, GROWLS AND FALSETTO
4) METALCORE, HARDCORE, EMOCORE, GRINDCORE AND PIG SQUEALS ARE NOT METAL, THOSE WHO UTILIZE THEM DO SO ONLY BECAUSE THEY CANNOT ACCEPT THAT THEY HAVE NO TALENT AND MUST MAKE ABSURD SOUNDS TO MAKE UP FOR IT
5) IF ANY FAN ASKS YOU FOR AN AMP WHEN YOURE FAMOUS, YOU DAMN WELL GIVE IT TO THEM
6) LYRICAL CONTENT MUST CONTAIN UNDIRECTED RAGE, HATRED OF RELIGION, DARKNESS AND HORROR, THE ONLY OTHER ACCEPTABLE METAL CONTENT IS FANTASY, AND ONLY IF IT CONTAINS A FAIR SHARE OF BLOOD SPILLING
7) BASSISTS ARE TO BE SEEN, NOT HEARD
8) YOU MUST NOT COVE
HowtoUseMyspacetoKillYourselfHowtoUseMyspacetoKillYourself8 years ago in Free Verse More Like This
How to Use MySpace to Slowly Kill Yourself
Ana and Mia are best friends
Best Friends! they tell each other.
friends until the end!
they hook their pinkies and kiss their fists
and type their passwords into myspace.
warped and blurred reflections
funhouse mirror images
they take pictures
in the bathroom mirrors
an attempt at photographing
which have started to poke through
their tautly stretched flesh.
post pictures of their progress
to their ideal skeletal state
still frames of ribcages
vicious hip bones
barely covered by skin.
hide and seek
from all of us
community of skeletons
with nothing but encouragement
to be a bag of bones
they wither away to nothing
convinced of beauty
only the dead appreciate
Internet StrangersInternet Strangers5 years ago in Philosophical More Like This
I passed by you in the train station today.
Although, neither of us will never know that fact.
You use to call yourself xXLunaXx.
But you were reborn as Marcus09 when your pride was hurt.
You always stay up late, typing away at useless sites.
Starting a new, when you've barely begun.
You always get fed up with that life,
And find yourself a new name.
Knowing people won't care when you're gone,
You enter the same space that your old user name left behind.
Even if you change your alias,
You are still the same person who left those messages.
Countless faces of avatars and display images,
doesn't really change anything.
You are still that same person in reality.
Just one person.
Just adding a mask after another.
You start to wonder, what is it that you are looking for in this virtual world.
It's easier to live here .
Because you never really existed.
My Name Is Sakura 4I held her still as she shook convulsively. I put my arm around her shoulders as I stood with her and tried to move her towards the bathroom. The stench of vomit was everywhere. I could taste it.My Name Is Sakura 48 years ago in General Fiction More Like This
Sakura couldn't move on her own very well, so I moved her back over to the bed. She was shaking but sweat was pouring off her forehead. She claimed to be cold so I wrapped her up in a blanket. What was going to happen? Was she going to die on me? I only had her for a few minutes.
She looked like she was going to vomit again and I backed off a little. My black cotton robe was already stained with Sakura's last meal. She tried to get up but I pulled her against me trying to keep her warm. She was in no fit state to be walking on her own.
I could feel her heartbeat against my chest. Soon she stopped shaking and I looked down to see that she had fallen back to sleep. Poor gir
The Wacken CodeLet it be known that the following set of regulations was laid down by Thor-Varg on deviantART, on January 5th in the year 2010. Feel free to copy and paste, however please give me credit.The Wacken Code5 years ago in Articles & Interviews More Like This
IF YOU ENJOY NU METAL (I.E. KORN) OR DEATHCORE (I.E. BRING ME THE HORIZON,) STOP READING RIGHT NOW
The Wacken Code:
Rules, regulations and guidelines that all real Metalheads should live by
1) Metal is sacred. Do not knock another Metalhead's taste in Metal while on his turf. (Applies only to real Metal, false Metal is fair game. The only false Metal is Metalcore/Deathcore and Nu Metal!)
2) Avoid confrontation with other Metalheads. Wear your Metal gear (shirts, battle-jackets, etc...) in public whenever possible. Don't be afraid to engage in a random conversation with other Metalheads in the street, and don't be alarmed if you're engaged in a conversation by somebody who doesn't look Metal. There's a lot of Covert Headbangers who aren't in a position to dress in de
Who Am I?~ Who Am I? ~Who Am I?7 years ago in Free Verse More Like This
I am the Atheist
For I am lustful to delve into questions.
Headstrong in my boundless curiosity.
Accepting beauty for beauty
in fearless veracity.
I am the Buddhist
For I dine in the noble truths of suffering.
Yearning peace of mind, to end these inner cycles.
Enlightenment through coherence
and the negation of idols
I am the Muslim
For I hold a passion for a true oneness.
An utter devotion to the divine,
through deeds of charity
and rituals sublime
I am the Hindu
For I tread along realms of the spiritual.
Tracing my soul along that of the Brahman.
Beholding my part in this cosmos
so my sense of belonging hardens.
Still I am the Christian
For its how my blood accepted me into this world.
I attempt to live through true humility.
Invest a love far greater than I,
for benevolence far higher than me
I am the hopeful Agnostic,
For I am stardust and flame.
An eternal comfort,
A soft breath of my exhaled name.
I am the poet
and a heartbeat that soothes.
and yes, I am l
CREATING AKATSUKI prologuePein, Konan, and Zetsu were gathered in the living. Zetsu and Konan were lounging on the couch, staring at the auburn-haired man before them, eye sometimes traveling to the books lying on the coffee table between him and them. Pein, what are we doing here? Konan asked, folding a sheet of bright green paper into a small dog.CREATING AKATSUKI prologue7 years ago in Fan Fiction More Like This
This had better be good. Were ready to listen. As long as you keep it short.
Alright, Ill explain, Pein said, clearing his throat. Now, as you two know, Ive wanted to build an organization for a while (twin groans were heard from the two teens, only to be quickly silenced by a glare from Pein) and Ive had trouble figuring out how to do it.
Aint that the truth, Konan muttered, making Zetsu smirk.
ANYWAY, Pein went on, it finally hit me what we have to do. In two days, school will start. Were all going to be sophomores; and, by default, the c
Top 10: Predictions for 2010Top 10: Predictions for 2010Top 10: Predictions for 20105 years ago in Humor More Like This
10. Sequel to smash-hit 2012 movie begins filming.
9. New DeviantArt "Personal Gropes" feature implemented. Thousands disappointed when it's revealed to be merely a typo of "Groups".
8. Global Warming is confirmed a hoax when giant space heaters are discovered in Antarctica.
7. "USDA American Beef" revealed to be made from recycled homeless people. Sales are unaffected.
6. Reality to be replaced with a cunning simulation, supported by clickable ads.
5. McDonalds releases new Happy Your Ass Up Meal, laced with antidepressants.
4. eBay accidentally auctions cursed relics from Hell, opening a space-time vortex in which Stephanie Meyer is a best-selling author with two movies made from her books.
3. Pirates vs. Ninjas debate settled once and for all when Johnny Depp is cast in Ninja Assassin II: Ninjas of the Caribbean.
2. Dan Brown's latest novel I'm Just Making Shit Up Now remains #1 on the best-seller list fo
Metal Myths: Hope and SpeedThe Emergance of The Gods of SpeedMetal Myths: Hope and Speed8 years ago in Science Fiction More Like This
The world was in chaos. Emo, and Metalcore had taken over. And on top of that, Rap began to move into territory owned by the metalheads. Many were enslaved, but none were converted. All seemed bleak, but then a miricle happened. Out of nowhere, two great entites were born. They were known as Sam Totman and Herman Li. They were the gods of speed. They joined together to form a new pure metal alliance known as the Dragonforce! The Dragonforce began to fight back against the emo's and many of them were converted to metalheads. The rebellion had begun!
The Metal Rebellion
The Dragonforce quickly became the most powerful force metal had to offer, but they were still no match for the combined strength of the emo's. They needed help. Out of unknown lands, emerged many metal cults following the teachings of the metal gods! They were led by a cult known as Blind Guardian. With them were other cults known as Hammerfall, Gamma Ray, Primal Fear, and
GuiltThey stood there in the rain looking at the memorial stone. Their eyes locked on one name.Guilt5 years ago in Fan Fiction More Like This
Naruto, Sakura, Sai, Choji, and Shikamaru stood in a line looking at it. The rest of their friends Neji, Tenten, Lee, Kiba, Hinata, Shino, Kurenai, Kakashi, Gai, Yamato, Tsunade, and Shizune stood behind them. They couldn't believe she was actually gone. Shikamaru set down an asphodel (my regrets follow you to the grave). With his asphodel he put down a sweet pea (goodbye; departure; blissful pleasure; thank you for a wonderful time). Sakura walked over and set down Sakura branch and an arbor vitae branch (true friendship). Choji set down his alstroemerias (devotion; friendship). Sai laid a daphne odora (painting a lily) and a calla lily (beauty). Naruto set down a yellow zinnia (thoughts of friend; daily remembrance).
Shikamaru thought of how it all happened. How he lost his teammate and more importantly his best friend.
Shikamaru didn't see it coming, he couldn't have. And the
No More Disney SequelsNo More Disney Sequels6 years ago in Editorial More Like This
It must surprise you why Disney, a company once so great, would waste so much of their time making sequels, instead of continuing to pursue excellent classical films. Disney is known for creating 2-D animated movies filled with creativity and imagination. Nowadays, they are continuing unnecessary sequels to the Disney movies because they have run out of ideas. When will Disney produce something new and creative rather than capitalize on their old successes? Why do they depend on direct-to-DVD movies to make all their profit? Walts company is wasting their time because sequels such as Bambi 2 and the Fox and the Hound 2 have fallen short of the expectations set by the original films, and will never be real masterpieces.
Walt Disney, creator of Disney was always against sequels. He specifically stated, Ive never believed in doing sequels. I didnt waste the time I have doing a seque
The Mythology of Metal 2.0NOTICE: Many of you were fans of my old mythology of metal. Truth be told, I wrote those years ago when I first got into metal. It's been a long time, and I feel like it's time I revised it to fit my current knowledge of the holy music known as Heavy Metal. Enjoy fellow headbangers!The Mythology of Metal 2.05 years ago in Profiles More Like This
Ozzy- First god of metal. He was the figurehead God who ruled with Iommi, the Great Creator at his side.
Halford - The Chosen Metal God. He resurrected the old ways of metal after it was betrayed by the four prophets.
Bruce Dickinson - God of light and arts and heir to the thrown of metal. His powers match that of the metal god himself.
Eddie the Head - Bruce Dickinson's chief advisor.
Vic Rattlehead - the ruler of The Mosh, the land of chaos
Cronos - The wise prophet who brought forth the wisdom that lead to the creation of Black, Death, and Thrash metal. He led the Cult of Venom.
Manowar - The legion of gods of Black wind, Fire, and steel.
Dio - Known as the Holy Diver. The messenger
I Cried TodayI cried today.I Cried Today7 years ago in Free Verse More Like This
I finally cried today
and not the kind of crying
where I silently shed tears
and then stop
and bottle the rest inside my heart.
I cried like a human being,
I sobbed and didn't stop
until my eyes were dry.
It felt so good to finally cry
because the last time I cried like that
was over a year ago.
I know that my problems are still there
but I feel like I can handle them now.
I cried for everything
that has upset me
since last summer.
I finally cried today
and I finally feel okay.
Coping With OCD I suffer from obsessive-compulsive disorder. It is my belief that obsessive-compulsive disorder is misunderstood by the masses. People have a tendency to use it to describe their organizational habits or their fandom obsessions, but it is a genuine affliction, and while it is based on trivial thoughts, the effects of it are far from trivial - they are destructive and powerful. I was officially diagnosed with OCD a few months ago, but I have suspected it nearly my entire life.Coping With OCD7 years ago in General Non-Fiction More Like This
OCD is an anxiety disorder. It is based on obsessive thoughts that cause great anxiety, and in order to relieve those thoughts the sufferer performs compulsions, or in other words: rituals. Each sufferer goes through different rituals, but we all have one thing in common: anxiety. Each individual has their own preferences and their own ideas of how things should be in order to relieve anxiety. Most of us realize that these thoughts and anxieties ar
FlutteringsIt hurted.Flutterings5 years ago in Flash Fiction & Vignettes More Like This
My stomach was hurting for days. Mama said it was probably ulcer or maybe my drinking of so much Coke. But I ate and I ate and never drank Coke, and still my stomach hurted. Even if Mama went to the place where herbal plants grow to get a bunch of leaves so that she could squish them and put them in my drink, my stomach didn't stop hurting.
Papa said it was time to call the doctor, so he put on his funny straw hat and went to call the doctor. And when he came back, there was a funny-looking man that followed him into our little house. He had long kinky hair with white stuff in it and when he smiled he had very few teeth. His skin was brown, and his clothes was brown, and his hair was brown. He looked like mud.
Papa said, This is Pachiko.
And I said, Hello Pachiko.
And Pachiko smiled with the very few teeth that he had. Then he touched my stomach. He touched it for a long time, long enough for me to ask why he was touching it.
Then he took his hand off my stomach and looked a
The Craze That Shouldn't BeAnymore, it is nearly impossible to walk down the street without seeing something related to Stephanie Meyer's Twilight series. The four books in the series have taken the world's teenagers by storm, causing kinship and confrontation to bloom in their wake. However, this seemingly innocent fad has dark undertones of a disturbing nature. These dark tones have gotten the books banned in primary schools and some middle schools all over the world. The promotion of abuse, sexism, infatuation or lust as love, romaticization of suicide, pedophilia, science without reason, and poor writing these are the reasons that Twilight should not be the sensation that it is.The Craze That Shouldn't Be5 years ago in Academic Essays More Like This
First and foremost is Edward Cullen, the male lead. He is abusive toward Bella. According to the Center for Relationship Abuse Awareness, dating abuse is defined as, "a pattern of abusive and coercive behaviors used to maintain power and control over a former or cur
They Held HandsOn a commonplace Tuesday morning,They Held Hands5 years ago in Urban & Spoken Word More Like This
not unlike that Sunday morning
60 years before, destined for infamy
they held hands
as they fell
It was a working Tuesday
a date on the calendar
a morning like the morning before
but now they found themselves
standing on the window sill
of the 92nd floor
overlooking the city
and they felt weightless
They were not thinking
about the cause-and-effect history
of textbooks and CNN sound bytes
they weren't debating the geopolitical ramifications
leading up to that morning
he had decaf
she had a bearclaw and an espresso
and they talked about "Will & Grace"
then jets impregnated buildings with infernos
and now the fire was burning
and the smoke was rising
and it was getting hard to breathe
even after they smashed the window out
the inferno was swelling
it had reached their floor
their stairwells were gone
and the options now
were to burn
or to fall
when the human animal realizes death is inevitable
psychologists say we want control
over those final moments
Theme 50 - Breaking the RulesBato! Hakoda slung his arm casually over his friends shoulder, a devious grin plastered on his features. The pair had just finished their last day of cleaning the weapons hut as per their punishment and it seemed that Hakoda already had their next prank in mind. Since the pair had became teenagers, Hakoda became the mastermind behind their pranks and Bato went along with them just because he wanted to make sure Hakoda didnt do anything too stupid. That and he would do anything Hakoda asked him to. Their first prank had involved a few gull-geese they had rounded up and released into the womens bath house, back when they were thirteen. It had earned them three weeks worth of garbage disposal, but it had been worth it to watch the women flee out of the bath house, half-naked and screaming as the gull-geese chased them. In the three years since that first prank, the boys began to pull off pranks at least once a month, ranging from the Living SnowmanTheme 50 - Breaking the Rules7 years ago in Fan Fiction More Like This
FreedomIt was hotFreedom6 years ago in Urban & Spoken Word More Like This
We couldn't see
We couldn't breathe
Survival was our first thought
We had to live
We had to breathe
And then we found we couldn't leave
We crowded to the windows
Pushing, shoving, crushing
It was over
We were done
We knew we would burn
Then we had a choice
Burn or fall
We looked out
There was fire
There were people
There were buildings
And there was sky
Blue, clear sky
We saw our choice
Death we accept
And so we leapt
To our death
We weren't scared
We weren't cowards
There was no choice but death
We did not hide
We did not scream
We chose a graceful way
We wasted not our time in fear
But said goodbye to our loved ones
As we fell
We saw their faces
We saw their smiles
And said "I love you" one last time
The air blew by
We saw the sky
We did not jump
We spread our wings
We did not fall
But we did fly
We will live on
We didn't die.