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Deux peaux enlacées qui s'étirent
Dans un cœur à cœur alangui,
Trésors dérobés d'une nuit
Sous la parenthèse d'un soupir,
Léger comme une soie sauvage
Dévoilant l'ambre d'un sillage.
Et dans l'aube qui se sépare,
Un train s'avance vers une gare...



       © Deedrane 2010
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Listen close,
Can you hear it?
That faint sound,
Of shattering glass.
It's breaking apart,
It might just be my heart.

Quick!
Get the tape,
Grab the glue.
We can fix this,
Maybe, just maybe.

Take a deep breathe,
Get it under control.
It's not the end,
Get it together.

The dawn is coming,
A new day is here.
Hold your breathe,
And take a flying leap.
Just a drabble... Nothing really important or concrete. I just needed to basically verbal vomit something...

Mainly cause, I srsly think I've covered the emotional spectrum in like 3 days and am now dealing with a fairly bad case of insomnia.

It's due to many things. Which I'm not going to rant and rave about. No one really needs to know unless they wish to ask me. I may tell, but that's at my own discretion.

Yeah... Probably gonna scrap this one later or just delete it. Don't know yet. So do I really think this was worth submitting...? No. Not really. But for now I'm doing it anyway. :\

In a way it's just a poem covering from hitting bottom, getting through it and going on to face a new day.

Music listened to while writing: Stereo Love ft. Vika Jigulina by Edward Maya
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Yesterday, I was walking down a crowded street until I found this girl standing on the corner with dark red hair. She told me her name was Rose and one day she wanted to be on Broadway. I told her I was a writer and had a dream of being published but my words weren't nearly pretty enough. They were nothing compared to her bright blue eyes that were striking enough to burn out all the stars in the sky. I had a tendency to fall short of breath but she knocked the wind out of me for an entirely different reason.

Later that week, we went on our first date to this small Italian restaurant where everyone had thick accents and we felt a little out of place. It didn't really matter at that point though because I was only trying to understand the strings of words she was projecting from her speaker box. I learned that she was adopted from an orphanage when she was 8 and graduated from high school when she was 16 where she finished at the top of her class. She went to a college for the performing arts in New York and was on her way to national recognition when she tore her ACL, just as she was tearing open the paperback layers of chapter upon chapter of secrets, lies, and heartbreak that I used as a barrier to shield my heart. At the end of the date I blurted out that I wanted to kiss her before I realized what I was doing because she had a knack of causing me to speak my mind rather than store it inside my head. Ever since my concussion junior year of high school, I had learned to be wary about trusting the thoughts swirling around like a tsunami in the synapses of my brain matter.

A month later I brought her home to meet my parents and they lit up when they first saw her. I had always let them meet my girlfriends but they really took a liking to Rose because they could tell she had endured a lot and become a strong girl because of it all. My mom told her every embarrassing story about me that she could recall until my cheeks flared a scarlet red darker than the hair falling upon Rose's own shoulders. My dad let her know about my fears and dreams because he knew sometimes I was a little too insecure to reveal them myself, but then she informed him I had already laid out my heart on a silver platter to her. It was at that point my parents started to realize that I was handling every aspect of my relationship differently with this girl than all the rest. My brother took every break from conversation to throw in his 25 cents worth of insults flared at me and to poke fun at me for all of my other ex-girlfriends. She wasn't even bothered by his snide and normally off-base remarks but squeezed my hand even tighter by the time he was done having a go at my ego and self-esteem. My sister just sat at the end of the table and smiled because she recognized the same mannerisms in me that she displayed when she had met her husband. I had to admit that everything was moving rather quickly but slow and steady doesn't always win the race; not in my storybook at least and the author's discretion was in my hands, not someone else's black-inked quill.

6 months later I was applying for Graduate schools and Rose's ACL had finally healed and she was back to doing pirouettes and singing songs from Phantom of the Opera. My top choice was a small University in London where I would study for my Master's in English and live in a one-bedroom flat overlooking the heart of the city, a perfect spot for me to write out my stories on my coffee-stained sheets of paper smelling of her perfume and deep kisses snuck in between breaths, late at night under the covers. The only problem with my dream is that it would be one void of Rose because I would be leaving her behind to follow her dream; 2 wrongs may make a right but 2 dreams can't make a reality.

Another 3 months later, I wasn't only packing up everything I needed to go overseas to England but I was also packing up all the memories Rose and I had shared in our 9 months; whispering secrets under the moonlight and rolling around in bed sheets with our legs intertwined, and all the times I had told her that I loved her only to hear a deafening silence as soon as the words oozed from my lips. I always suspected she loved me but I knew she never wanted to say the words to me because it hurt her too much to see that I would be leaving her for run-on sentences and delicately placed metaphors. As I left the airport the next day she stuttered goodbye in between sobs and choking on her tears, but I refused to say anything more than "I love you." As I was walking away, I felt like I heard her whisper it back but before I turned my head back around, she was gone and all that was left was a mere glimpse of what we once had.

After my first semester of Graduate School, I had already published my first short novel about a young man's struggle to keep together the only relationship that had ever meant anything to him, but duct tape and gorilla glue aren't always the easy fix. In the acknowledgements I had delicately written, "To Rose, the one girl who taught me what it's like to truly love and how detrimental it is to be stripped of that love. I hope you know that not a day has gone by without me thinking of you and the way you would lull me to sleep each night with your dreams of our future together; a future I still hope can happen."

It's been 2 years now since I last saw you and 6 months since your last call. I can't help but wonder what has become of you and am even more curious about what could have become of us. The media says I'm an up and coming author and have a chance of making a mark on people's lives simply by having them absorb the words I share much like I've absorbed every words that you've ever uttered to me. That's all I have left of you now and I have a knack for writing stories that end up coming true, so maybe my next story will have a happy ending for once. Then again I never was one for happily-ever-afters.
title from song by Seal. great song.

a short story i wrote. the ending is garbage i know. i may come back and fix it later.

comments and critiques are greatly appreciated. please please comment if you fave.

these words are my heart. i wish they would come true.
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The world keeps spinning
and people keep on moving.
The deceitful keep on winning
and the innocent are losing.
But the stars sing for us...
baby the stars sing for us...

Day and night alternate
while the seasons change endlessly.
Fragile babies meet their fate
and even the strongest can't see.
But the stars cry for us...
baby the stars cry for us...

The heat burns to cold
and the fire will extinguish tears.
Of all the stories we're told,
we still hold on to silly fears.
But the stars smile on us...
baby the stars smile on us...

All the empty dreams
and the late phone calls.
The times we choke back tears
and when the weak still seem to fall.
We all need someone
to wrap up our skinned knees
and kiss our bruises more than once.
Someone to teach us how to breathe.

And since you're far away
the stars will hold us...
baby the stars will hold us...
Alone in the darkness
In front of a mirror
With nothing but silence
Searching for love
Sometimes it is like a candle
You light it,
But it can be blown out
Sometimes it is like a death
When it eventually passes away
Crying
Sitting there alone
Searching for love
Another piece of poetry of mine
This art belongs to :iconarielxalec:
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My sandwich is getting cold.  It lies halfway to my mouth, dangling there between my hands as I stare at someone over the toasted white bread. It doesn’t matter that it’s toasted, its soggy now with soaking up the mustard and peanut butter.  Don’t ask why I have a toasted mustard and peanut butter sandwich, I don’t even like peanut butter.  I’ve thought for the past five minutes to just get up and give it to the man across from me, who sits on a bench staring at my sandwich.

His clothes are all brown with compacted dirt and mud; his dog, too.  Perhaps they can share the sandwich.  If I had been sitting with a friend, we’d make a bet to see if he’d share it or just eat it by himself.  But if I had been sitting with a friend, had I any, I’m sure I wouldn’t be staring at a homeless man, or eating a mustard and peanut butter sandwich to begin with.

I begin to wonder what he’d think if I just walked right over and handed the sandwich to him.  Would he be embarrassed?  Would he let his dog rip it right out of my outstretched hand?  Maybe he trained his dog to snatch people’s food so that it was less obvious how hungry and desperate he was.  But the way he stared at the food perched between my still raised hands, I knew he was hungry.  I decided to stand up, set the sandwich down on the bench and walk away.  The park we sat in was lush and green, far too pretty for the both of us.  I rounded around a tree and looked back to the homeless man.  Both he and the sandwich were gone.

That was a year ago.  I wonder often if I’d bump into that man and his dog again, or even if I’d recognize him.  I think he’d be mad at me, for giving him such a disturbing flavored soggy sandwich.  Or maybe he’d be grateful.  I stopped going to that park since then, I had the feeling he’d be at that bench again expecting more sandwiches or even a request for a better tasting one.
just something about absolutely nothing.
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In the darkening twilight, I often find myself... lost. Memory disintegrates, personality withers, and the touch of plastic feels strange on my skin. The dark sucks in my soul, reels it in like a drifting trout, and hangs it up to dry next to hundreds of others like it. We dry, slowly, blowing in the false breeze, absorbing the taste of smoke and salt. How long we hang, I don't know. But, when I'm abruptly cut down and thrown back into the water, the sensation is like a gasp. Moisture soaks into my skin, and I'm within myself again, though shrunken and empty from the change.

We are not human. Oh, yes, on the outside we appear so. But look at us sideways, and there's a glimmer, a sheen that's not natural. It clings to our skin, as if we've been left so long in the cold that the essence touches us still, revealing us as "different". It's a mark of pride, a mark of shame, yet we wear it with a diffidence that would make a movie star burn with envy. Each step, each touch, comes away cold – we shiver even as the sun glows warm.

You could call us dead. It certainly seems so to me – we are empty of essence, and must bear up a false face to hide the aching hollowness of what we wish we had. Touch my heart, and you would feel it beat strong. Brush my lips, and the breath that slipped out of them would be as present as the dawn. If you could feel the intangible, feel the soft glow of spirit... why then, you would feel nothing at all if you sought it within me. I look at you, all of you with your softly blazing eyes, every one of you clothed in shame, and I see a gift.

Humanity.

Humanity is what sets apart those who struggle through life's currents and those who float, effortlessly, as though they can't be bothered to swim. Humanity is both the bane and the blessing of your existence. You weep and moan over it, calling it "false" and "weak" and "trivial". I wouldn't know what it should be called, really. I don't have it.

Oh, I can pretend to have it. We've watched you for long enough to know what "humanity" is like. We print a facsimile of it, paste it to our faces and bones and skin. Become one of you. One of any of you. We empty creatures could be your neighbour. Your playmate. Your friend, even, if we feel the desire.

I don't know if we have a name. You may have given us one from time to time, but they cling lightly, and are easily brushed off. Do we really need a name, when we all know what we are? We're the empty, the unchanged, the soulless. We dance in your dreams, a dull rattle of bones, and our absence roams the night. We're the chill in the wind, the shadow in an alleyway. Nothingness made flesh, flesh made temporary.

We're you.

So when the light recedes from the Earth and the Moon rises to tread her tender path across the sky, watch for me – you could catch a glimpse of the lie leaking away.
EDIT: Changed a few words in the second paragraph, to avoid repetition.

Well. Nothing like a slightly creepy piece of prose to cheer up your Christmas, eh?

Wrote this last night, while thinking about the shift in personality I go through at night. Not quite as extreme as what I wrote, but similar. Also, I just felt like writing something creepy and dark.

Comments and critique are, as always, welcome.

Hope you all have a lovely holiday.
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the sun is fading out
she says

whispers turn the day
into dusk
and she runs

through night
past lightning
lamps
let's not stop

she says

let's not stop

she wants
to cross
a forest,
an ocean
pass

through your mind
but

she says
the sun
is fading

out.
than a dream.
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Itís 6:46 and thirty-one seconds when the doorbell rings.  My mom runs to answer it.

ďHi, Michelle!Ē I hear my mom call.  Itís my sister.  She left her college friends to have dinner with us tonight.

I have four minutes before I can go out and greet her.  I can only walk through doors when the number of minutes is divisible by five.  6:46 and fifty-nine seconds.  Not happening.

Itís the killer of what could be an okay life.  Iím late for class all the time when Iím at school.  A teacher will let me out at 1:50 exactly.  I walk through the hallways in a straight line, starting with my right foot, ending with my left.  I reach the door, but itís too late: 1:56.  I lurk outside for four minutes before I can walk in.  Late again.

Or Iíll have a doctorís appointment.  Do you have any idea of how many doors there are in a doctorís office?  It takes me twenty minutes just to get into the examination room.

The other things that bother me are much less obvious.  Itís the door thing that kills me.  My mother canít stand it.  I hate that she hates it.  It makes me feel so lousy.

ďRebecca?Ē my mom calls.  ďMichelleís here!  Why donít you come out?Ē

I check my digital watch.  No way am I leaving at 6:47 and fifty-one seconds.

Iím bored.  I hate waiting.  Another reason why I hate my door issue.  Standing in front of doorways is just so dull.

I canít play music.  I can only listen to tracks five and ten, and I can only keep ten CDs in my CD rack at a time (thatís all it holds).  I canít keep them anywhere else besides my CD rack because I just canít.  But the point is that Iím sick of tracks five and ten on my ten CDs.  Thatís only twenty songs.  For the past who knows how many years.   It gets boring.

I canít do my homework.  I work on my homework in half hour blocks.  I start at a certain time and work until half an hour.  But weíll probably have dinner at seven, and itís already 6:48 and twenty-five seconds.

I have to go to the bathroom.  I check my watch again.  6:48 and thirty-two seconds.  Iíve got a minute and a half before I can go.  I carefully sit down on the foot of my bed, right in the middle.  I put my right hand down without thinking and leave it there for three seconds.  I jerk it up once I realize what Iím doing.  Down with my left hand for three seconds.  It still feels uneven, so I hold both hands down for three seconds.

I donít like the number three.  I like twos, fours, fives, and zeros.  I hold my right hand down for another three seconds, then my left hand, and then both hands again.  Six seconds for each hand separately, six for them together.  Six is an even number.  Good enough.

6:49 and eleven seconds.  I should get in position.  I stand up, being careful not to lean on my hands.  I walk over to the door to my bathroom, right foot, left foot, right foot, left foot.  I stand in front of it and look at my watch again.  6:49 and twenty-eight seconds.  Half a minute of waiting time.  Boring.  Iíve had enough waiting outside of doors to last the entire world about two million years.

ďRebecca, come out and say hello!Ē my mom orders.  She doesnít understand my door thing.  She thinks I do it because I want to.  I canít explain why I have to.  Going through the door at a random time seems unthinkable to me.  Itís the same as starting to walk on my left foot.  I just canít do it.  Actually, that doesnít make much sense either.

Itís like...you arenít suicidal, so you wouldnít jump out of a third story window.  Well, why not try it?  Whatís the worst that can happen?

Exactly.  Youíd die.

Iím not saying Iíll die if I walk through the door at a random time, but itís just something I wouldnít do.  Like you wouldnít jump out that window.  Sure, you can envision it happening and everything working out okay, but that doesnít mean youíre going to take the risk.  Iím not going to take the risk.

ďI have to go to the bathroom!Ē I shout.  I glance at my watch again.  6:49 and forty-three seconds.  Almost time.

I begin my countdown.  Fifteen more seconds, fourteen more seconds...You think Iím a total loser, donít you?  Nine more seconds...eight, seven, six...Iíve told my mom plenty of times: Iím sorry Iím weird.  Three, two, one, go!

Right foot through the door, left foot through the door.  That in one second.  I check my watch.  Yup, only 6:50 and one second.  Now two seconds.

I shut the door and take care of my business and wash my hands.  Now I need to wait until 6:55 before I can leave again.  Going to the bathroom is by far the worst.  In your bedroom, thereís stuff you can do.  But in the bathroom, forget it.  I wash my hands again.  I wash my hands all the time.  Itís weird, but I just do.  They just feel like they need to be washed.

When Iím stuck in the bathroom, I wash them for a long time.  Plenty of soap and water and all that good stuff.

6:53 and thirty-seven seconds.  Enough time to put on lotion?  Not quite.  I could probably do it, but Iíd be taking that risk of missing 6:55.  I canít put on lotion anywhere but the bathroom.

You probably think I donít have any friends.  Iím too weird for friends, in an annoying way.  Who wants to go out to lunch with me if they have to wait for me to go through four doors (out of school, into a restaurant, out of a restaurant, back into school)?  That could knock off almost twenty minutes of their lunch period.

Not to mention me freaking out that I forgot something.  I do that all the time.  Iíll be pretty sure that I havenít forgotten it, but I canít convince myself that I really, truly havenít forgotten it.  And itís not material stuff like notebooks or pens.  Itís stuff like locking my locker or turning off the water in my sinks and stuff.  No one wants to hear about someone whining about crap like that.

I do have friends, though.  Theyíre mostly my friends from elementary school, the few of them that managed to stay in the same school as me all through middle and high school.  Iím not their best friend, but if I have a bit of company, I can deal.  I canít really ask for more.

6:54 and forty-nine seconds.  Yikes.  Iíd better get in position.

I stand right in front of the door and start my countdown.  Ten, nine, eight, seven, six, five, four, three, two, one, go!  Right foot, left foot, Iím through.

I sit back down on my bed, in the middle of the edge, if that makes any sense.  I donít lean on my hands this time.  I rarely make that kind of mistake.

ďDinner!Ē my mom calls.  Sheís probably only calling for my benefit.  She and my dad are probably talking to Michelle in the kitchen or something

ďComing!Ē I shout.  I look at my watch.  6:57 and eighteen seconds.  Great.  Almost three whole minutes.  It doesnít sound like a lot, but my mom can get pretty impatient.  I can too, but I can deal with it better than she can.  Iíve probably had a lot more practice.

I am a miserable person.  Iím not trying to be depressing or anything.  Iím just stating the truth.  I am miserable.

I canít be happy at school.  Everything at school bothers me.  You know how teachers erase the board really quickly sometimes and they forget to erase that one little chalk line?  It drives me nuts.  Iím itching to go up and fix it, but I know that I canít.  If I have to look at it for a long time, sometimes I start to cry.  Itís just so horrible to see it there, glaring at you!  It means that the teacher hasnít rubbed the eraser all over the board, and I just canít stand knowing that.

Iím such a freak.  I know that too.

And then my locker.  I canít stand my combination lock.  There are only three numbers on it that matter, and thatís really not even.  And you turn it around a couple of half/quarter turns or something.  I spin it around about twenty times after Iíve put in the combination, but I still feel like Iím missing something even then.  Itís pathetic.  And every lock I see has to have the zero on the top.  If the zero isnít on the top, I put it there.  I get so many weird looks from people who have seen me fooling around with their locks.

And then thereís the actual school work.  I write the same heading all the time, on everything.  My name, Rebecca Larson, upper left corner.  It needs to take up exactly 1 11/16 inches.  Yes, I carry a ruler with me.  Yes, I know that makes me seem like a math nerd.  No, I do not care.  Iíd rather seem like a math nerd than have my name look different on different pieces of paper.

Next comes the subject, lower left corner.  I donít measure how long that is.  Upper right corner is the date.  I write out the whole month, then the day, and then the year.  Like September 9, 2006 is when we started school.  June 13, 2006 is when we end school.  I wish it was June.

And then the assignment in the lower right corner.  This is weird.  I hate putting down my assignments.  Iíll say ďnotes, textbook pages 412-418Ē or ďreading pages 192-194 + questions.Ē  Donít bother to tell me that I am strange.  I know that.  Donít bother to tell me that I donít seem happy at school.  I know that too.

I also know that I canít be happy at home.  When Iím alone, like I am now, itís okay, but whenever Iím doing something weird (which is all the time) in the same room as my mom (which is a lot of the time), I get her disapproving looks.  Her sadness that I canít just walk through doorways like a normal person.

She gets so embarrassed whenever she takes me out somewhere.  Like to doctor's appointments.  Oh, those are bad.  They are bad.  And Iím embarrassed too.  But the worst part by far is my momís disappointment in me.  I just feel so knotted up inside.  If sheís really upset with me, then I start to feel sick.  I get stomach aches all the time.

ďRebecca!Ē my mom yells.  Oh god.  The time.  Did I miss 6:55?

I check my watch.  6:54 and fifty-five seconds.  Oh man.  I just came so close.  I get up carefully and evenly and walk to the door, right foot, left foot, right foot, left foot.  I glance at my watch.  One second, go!  Right foot left foot, Iím through.

Down the hallway, right, left, right, left.  I reach the dining room.  Thereís no door to our dining room, which is good.  It just opens out into the hallway.  I can walk into it whenever I want to, at any random time.  I turn.  Right, left.  I walk straight.  Right, left, right, left, right, left, Iím in my seat.  I pull it back with both hands.  I sit down.  I rub my hands along the edges of the seat.  I do this every time I sit in a chair.

ďHey,Ē says Michelle, coming in.  ďI havenít seen you in awhile.Ē

ďSorry, I had to go to the bathroom,Ē I say, partly lying, but not really.  Iíve given up explaining my issues to people.  They just think Iím nuts.

You must think Iím nuts.

My mom comes in and starts serving out the pasta.  My dad comes in afterward, carrying a bottle of beer and a glass.  The rest of us already have drinks.

ďSo Michelle, howíre you liking chemistry?Ē my dad asks.

ďThe labs are so long,Ē says my sister, ďtheyíre from, like, ten to four and we canít eat lunch at all.  But the actual material is pretty interesting.Ē

ďHm,Ē says my dad, helping himself to green beans.  My mom takes a sip of water and eats some pasta.  Iím about to take a bite when I feel the familiar swooping sensation in my stomach.  I forgot something.  Again.

ďI think I left my bathroom water on,Ē I say.  ďI need to go turn it off.Ē

My mom rolls her eyes.  I sense the disappointment.  But I canít stand leaving the sink on.  Itís weird.  I really canít remember if itís on or not.  Itíll take me forever to go, but itís fine.  I want to wash my hands again anyway.

I get up from the table and walk to the doorway of my room.  I glance at my watch.  7:09 and thirty-five seconds.  They can totally see me from†the dining room.  Iíll have to pretend Iím interested in their conversation.

ďI like chemistry,Ē I say randomly.  I hate chemistry.  Itís so hard to do labs evenly.

ďThatís nice,Ē says my dad, giving me as strange look before turning back to Michelle.  ďSo what was your European history teacher telling you?Ē

I glance at my watch.  7:09 and forty-six seconds.

ďRebecca, if youíre going to go, just go,Ē says my mom.  I cringe mentally away from her unhappiness with me.

I should walk through the door.  What could possibly happen?  Iím not going to die or anything.

But logic wonít save me in this situation.  Anyway, ten more seconds to go.  I look at my watch again.  Seven seconds...six, five, four, three, two, one, go!  Right, left, Iím through.

I hate my life.

I walk to the bathroom and look inside.  The water is off.  I wonít go in to wash my hands, even though I really want to.  I wonít make my mom have to wait longer for me.

I pace around my room, right, left, right, left, right, left, turn around, right, left, right, left, right, left, turn around, repeat.  I check my watch.  7:12 and nine seconds.

I need to stop this.  Itís making me so unhappy.  It makes my mom so unhappy.  And it will all get better once I stop myself.

I stop walking.  I try to convince myself to lift up my left foot before my right.  I canít make myself do it.

Okay, maybe thatís starting too big.  I take a step with my right foot.  I keep my left foot in place.  Iím not going to move it.  Iím not going to move.  I wonít move it.

This is agony.  I feel off balanced, and it drives me crazy.  I need to move.  Iím getting tenser and tenser.  I have to even things out.  I have to.  But I wonít let myself.

ďStay strong,Ē I mutter.  Talking to yourself can be effective, but itís not this time.  My brain is screaming with effort and anger.  Lift up the foot!  Step with your left foot!

I canít!  Itís like my conscious.  I need to stay still.  I need to stay still.  I will not move.

My face is screwing up.  My eyes are getting wet.  A tear forms and drops onto my cheek.  That does it.  I step with my left foot.

I feel awful.  Iím sick of myself.  I almost had it.  If I had held through the crying, the shaking, the sickening, I would have been able to do it.  If I had stayed in that position until it just didnít matter anymore, I wouldnít have my stupid habits.

But Iím starting to realize that thatís the longest Iíve held myself in an unbalanced position.  Iíve gotten better.

ďRebecca?Ē my mom calls.  I glance at my watch.  7:14 and twenty-four seconds.  I station myself by the door.

If I keep on practicing, maybe some day Iíll be able to do it.  Maybe some day Iíll be able to step with my right foot and not my left.  Maybe Iíll be able to start walking with my left foot.  I wonít need to measure my name on my homework and I can listen to all of my music.  I wonít even care if a teacher erases the board properly or not.

But the best thing would be if my mom wasnít fed up with me all the time.  And I could walk through doors whenever I want to.

Well, practice makes perfect.  Iíll just have to keep practicing.

I walk through the doorway at 7:15 on the dot.
This isn't actually about me.
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