MemoirThere lingers in every mind memories that will never blemish. In the most anodyne moment one might find a detail, a trifling aspect somehow significant enough for the very instant to be conserved in ones memory, always. Why? One may perhaps ignore the precise reason. Yet the vague, rather eerie remembrance often bears an indistinct teaching.
The beginning of a cold autumn. A pale grey sky watching serenely over a certain European port city; an antique town, almost sleeping in the early evening as if resting from its extensive centuries of history. And me, belligerent ten years old pacing through the disordered streets of stone. The air smelled of salt, and rose sole noise the seagulls shrieks. The walls were of uneven rock, the roofs of greenish copper, and there lay about an air of obsolete majesty. The pubs joined peaceful homes, standing along the widening or narrowing avenues leading each to a place of similar aspect or so would I then suppose.
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When amu and ikuto went inside ikuto's private jet amu looked at Japan one last time and went inside when they went off amu looked outside her window and saw Japan. Ikuto looked at amu then ikuto stood up and hugged amu "don't worry amu will be somewhere that you'll feel free and can spread your wings" ikuto still hugging amu "I know but I already feel home sick" amu all sad. Ikuto gave her a letter from her parents and his parents and she read her parents letter first:
Your invited to an around the world paradise trip
Our family and ikuto's family we'll be traveling to different areas thats is filled with true paradise
The first place were going is.....
I'll give you a hint
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Amu-chan was shock to learn Ikuto works for Easter so she was sad inside that her childhood friend couldn't be her enemy. "Hinamori-san are you ok?" Tadase said "Yea, I"m fine I'm a little sleepy" Amu said "Don't worry the meeting is almost over and all of us can go home" Tadase said. The meeting was finally over but her guardian characters were also sad that Amu-chan childhood friend Ikuto could be also her enemy.
2 weeks later
Amu-chan was at the airport waiting with ami-chan to finally see there parents again after a long business trip they had. "Amu-chan, Ami-chan" mom all happy with her arms open to hug her daughters "Mother" amu said "Mommy" ami
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Amu was nervous to do it with ikuto she felt excitement and nervous inside her heart "Ikuto why do you want to do it now?" amu all nervous "I love you and I feel we can do it without stopping" ikuto said. So he continue she felt his warm body and the way he kissed her she never knew he was such a good kisser "it's going to hurt so tell me when to stop amu" ikuto said so she felt the pain and was teary eye so ikuto stop from there and told her "Amu we should stop here we made it this far" ikuto said "ikuto I'm sorry we couldn't finish" amu all sad and about to cry. Ikuto hugged her2 "it's ok it's not the last maybe next time will be better" so ikuto and amu change into
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Amu was thinking about herself in paradise when a strange guy comes up to her and says "we are met to be together, Amu" she wondered who this guy was, was it her Prince aka Tadase or another guy. When her teacher wakes her up by hitting her with a book " stop daydreaming and pay attention". "Amu-chan if you keep daydreaming you will fall back in studies and fail as a Joker" Rima said, "I know but there is so much in my head with work, saving a lot of people from trouble of losing there dreams and goals and losing hope of there would be self" Amu said. When suddenly a thunderstorm came and everybody got scared for a moment becaus
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Amu looked at Ikuto at his beautiful purple eyes and his long eyelashes, they looked at each other. Amu felt her heart beating really fast and ikuto reached out his hand to amu chest "wait ikuto, what are you doing?" amu thought he was going to touch her chest and her heart was beating faster and she closed her eyes but she opened her eyes again and his face was close to hers. But he just grabbed her Humpty Lock "this is the Humpty Lock that pairs with my Dumpty Key" ikuto looking at amu Humpty Lock "I know but someone stole it and tadase thinks you stole it" amu all sad and unhappy. Ikuto grabbed something from his violin case and he showed her he got back the Dumpty Key "It's s
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Amu was hugging Ikuto so tight she didn't want to let go she was still crying because of what happen with her and Tadase. "What happen Amu?" Ikuto all worried "Tadase, he told me to stay away from you or else I'll become the enemy too" Amu still crying. Ikuto took her to his house to dry off and to wear his sister clothes till her uniform get dry, when the rain stops Ikuto asked her "what do you mean by staying away from me and also becoming an enemy?" "well the guardians and I know that you work for Easter and that you stole the Dumpty Key" Amu said "I don't work for Easter they force mean to do there dirty work or else my family loses everything and my sister can lose her dream
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Nagihiko comfort Amu by taking her to his house to talk her about her problems. "Amu-chan wants wrong before you were happy and cheery, now your sometimes sad and sometimes happy" nagihiko drinking his tea and having a rice cookie "I just have so much in my head" amu all sad. He drank some tea and had a rice cookie and then he saw a teardrop come out of amu eye "amu-chan what's wrong?!" nagihiko all worried she didn't say a word she just covered her face and said "I betray you and everyone in the guardians" amu all sad. Nagihiko look at her wondering what she meant by that so he grab onto her and gave her another hug and he wasn't letting go for a while "Nagihiko" amu blushed and
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Amu saw ikuto with awe and she didn't care of the curry and rice "what are doing here ikuto?" ikuto just ignore what she asked her and gave her the curry and rice and said "enjoy your food and have a nice day." Amu was sad she couldn't speak to him in the day time because an Easter spy may be watching her and ikuto when amu was eating her curry, nagihiko came up to amu wearing a female kimono and his hair up like a girl saying "amu-chan I need to put you in hair and make-up the show starts in 2 minutes" he grabbed her and ran backstage to get her ready for the show and give her the traditional dancing fan because the first scene she had to dance with the traditional fan. When amu
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Tadase saw Amu with an enemy he was shock to see her betray the guardians code. "Tadase" Amu all scared before she could say anything else Ikuto grab Amu-chan hand and ran into a hug crowd to lose Tadase and get into a tent and pretend to look around. "HINAMORI-SAN WHERE ARE YOU?" Tadase screaming loud "Tadas" Amu almost said his name but Ikuto cover mouth and told her "please don't ruin this moment Amu I want to be with you" Ikuto said. She just kept quiet till Tadase ran somewhere else Amu thought she should just go home already but Ikuto bought Amu-chan a locket with his photo in it. "Wow it's pretty the locket has something in the front too it has the mark of a heart and it's design is so
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When Amu was walking out the limo and saw the restaurant/club she was going to have her party she thought "this is going to be some 14th birthday party" as she walked inside she saw everyone in beautiful mask but she wanted to find ikuto in the huge crowd. As she walked down the stairs a hand reached out for her it was tadase she was scared to even look at him so she just said hi and ran into the crowd to danc so he wouldn't find her. When the party was getting more interesting more guests came ,the guardian characters met up with each other in a mask too to make it fun "Rima nice mask" amu said "Thanks it goes with my character a sad or cheerful clown" rima said while they were t
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Amu was still thinking why did he kiss him and then her touch her lips and realizes he took her first kiss. Amu wants wrong? Su said nothing I just twisted my ankle Im going to bed soon so dont worry about me Amu said. Amu shower and got ready for bed, while she was dreaming she had the same dream that shes in paradise feeling the breeze flow to her hair and the smell of the ocean, then the mysterious boy from before came back and said *beep* *beep* *beep what did you say? Amu said, he said *beep*. Then Amu woke up, her alarm clock was making the noisy beeps. Amu didnt feel so good so S
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Tips For The Novice
It's an all-too common occurrence on my periodic forays into the world of internet poetry - writing weakened by a lack of fundamental knowledge concerning the essence of poetry writing. There are no rules set in stone about creative writing. The writer that strikes new trails can make a lasting impact on the world of poetry, but the chances of a writer stumbling upon golden words without a solid knowledge base are slim to none. The following tips for novice writers are intended to help shore up those fundamentals, to help the young writer breathe the essence of life into their poems, and to better share that essence with the reader.
The most important element you can inject into your poetry is imagery. Imagery is made up of sense data: color, sound, smell, temperature, the feeling of physical contact. When we remember anything with any vividness, we remember in images. When we fantasize or hallucinate, it is i
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Love is one thing we cannot control
One day sweet, hard the other
It plays with you like you're a doll;
Makes you feel young forever
Old and lost, a blink after
You cry and cry in vain
Nothing can ever stop the pain
Love is gone with your joy;
You say you wont let it back
But other ways it will employ
And hit you in the back;
youll remember how sweet it was
And be defenseless over again
Itll consume you with its jaws
Until all there is left is sadness and pain
True love, maybe one day you will find
Love that will not ever ever end
Love that will take over your mind
That love is forever your friend;
But how much tears will it take for it to appear?
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Many of us learned that the writing process is made up of five parts: Pre-writing, Writing, Revision, Editing, and Publishing. Indeed, this process has been so ingrained, and the vocabulary and terms have become such a part of our education, that some students (and adults) feel as if writing is a formulaic, rigid thingnot unlike learning mathematicsthat they simply never excelled in. Fortunately, this simply isn't true. While the five basic steps of the writing process are effective, they can only be effective if the people using the process understand the purpose of each step.
Experience has shown that many students do not know the purpose of drafting beyond a certain, vague understanding that you're supposed to "correct" or "fix" something for each new draft. Its unfortunate, but its also been shown that students who are forced to Pre-Write in certain ways, even when they have been
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If you've ever taken a class in creative writing, you've no doubt heard the teacher repeat the phrase, "Show, don't tell" over and over again. While there are few hardest rules in creative writing, this persistent little mantra might be the ultimate. Teachers and writers who write about writing spout it out all the time, but what does it mean anyway? After, isn't all writing really "telling" on some level?
It's best to view "showing" not as a single technique, but a summation of the most effective writing techniques. If we know anything about poetry, it's that the best poetry usually conjures specific and concrete images. Beyond language itself, images are the meat and bones of poetry. So goes most of prose as well. The prose writer has the added duty of creating situations and characters that seem real and believable.
Showing invites the reader into the world of out poem and story. If the reader can see, smell, taste, and feel the world through our writing, the reader is more
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When Amu and Ikuto were kissing at the beach on a full moon they heard sparks Amu thought "I hear sparks could that be my heart?" They stop kissing and saw fireworks Amu smiled "beautiful these fireworks are different from simple ones" "Amu can I ask you a question?" Ikuto asked. He kneel down on one knee and he grabbed a little wrap box and opened it and said "will you marry me someday, Amu?" she was speechless and started to cry and she hugged him and whisper in his ear "I do" he grabbed the ring out and put in on her finger and the ring diamond was the shape of a heart with the same color as Amu hair. They hugged each other and kissed on the lip again she felt her heart was beat
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Amu kept singing and after her performance with ikuto, he was about to say something to her but then she ran. Amu grabbed her 4th egg and then it flew up and started to crack opened and then Dia came out "Dia" amu said "amu-chan I'm happy to see you my name is Diana I'm your would be self" diana said. Then ikuto came from behind with his violin case and ami-chan "why did you ran all of sudden" "my 4th egg was born" amu said. Ami-chan grabbed diana and hugged her the same as ran,miki,and su, "let's go back to the hotel" ikuto said. When they got inside the hotel they saw there luggage by the front desk then amu parents and ikuto parents were checking out already "We're heading to the airport to
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Amuto Idol Singer
The Guardians had another meeting about protecting each child heart, "so we all have to be aware and safe each child heart, we can't let Easter get the embryo we have to find out more about Easter and who they are?" Tadase looking through some papers. Yaya wasn't listening to anything only her CD player, she was humming some song, Amu took her headphones off "what are you listening to Yaya?" "Ikuto Tsukiyomi new CD Beautiful Night" Yaya showing everyone her the new CD. "Ikuto Tsukiyomi?" Amu thought holding his CD "He's that new singer that works for some huge company and he debuted with a hit song" Rima drinking her tea "he started as first singing in gro
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Chapter 4: Quality of imagery
4-1: Figure of Speech
We have already heard from deviantArt writers about the importance of "figure of speech" within imagery.
To make out a clearer picture of "imagery" from the writer's point of view, let us take take a closer look. You may find fyoot's Terms and Techniques a useful guide along the way, and other online resources to complement what we are about to explore. We will not go over the whole gamut of writing techniques here for that is not the main purpose, but here, let us look at how a variety of figure of speech may be used in a single piece of poetry.
We will dissect T.S. Eliot's "The Love Song for J. Alfred Prufrock" solely from a figure-of-speech point of view. For those who have not read it, we prefer that you peruse it once through before continuing this section. http://www.bartleby.com/198/1.html
What we would like readers to note is a) how figures of speech
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***Tips For the Novice (and otherwise) - Editing***
The blanket statement, "Editing/revision harms poetry," is simply wrong. It's akin to a photographer claiming that focusing the lens ruins the emotion of the photograph. It is the details, and the appropriate attention paid to them, that separate a photograph from a snapshot. Imagine a film maker slapping every frame he shot up on the screen without editing for continuity, for pacing, for effect. What a disaster. That is not to say that editing can't be destructive - there is such a thing as poor editing, just as there is poor writing. But done correctly, done well, it is one of the most important tools in the poet's shed.
Never shy away from editing/revision. Some young writers feel that to revise is to kill the spirit of the poem. This notion serves to sacrifice the potential of a poem for an ideal that
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When they took Tadase back to Easter headquarters the boss came to Amu and he grab her neck "stay away from our company or else your life and everyone else life is ruined" he let go of Amu and walked of. "You ok Amu-chi" Yaya comforting her *cough* I'm fine *cough* "We'll have to attack them tonight before it gets any worst then it is now" Ikuto carrying Amu "But Ikuto Easter has many plans to attack us. We can lose our life out there" Amu blushing "but I know there plans while I was in there control I remember somethings about how to get more power and try to get the embryo" Ikuto said. They all talked for a while and planned to meet at Easter headquarters tonight, when th
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Chapter 5: Imagery and its limitations
We have discussed in previous chapters, the nature and importance of imagery in poetry, and especially from the above experiment concerning originality, we are prone to being convinced of an infinite nature in one's creative possibilities, yet by common sense, we know that we all produce different imagery, differing in style, differing in quality, differing in the words we choose and the correlations we construct.
We will now look at the reasons and forces working behind the creation of imagery, and where the limits lie, and what constraints work against the writer's creative process.
5-1: Experience and Imagination
To begin our discussion, let us ponder what effect experience (or inexperience) of a subject matter has in our creative process.
First off, we will look at the opinions of deviantArt writers vis-a-vis the question, "is it possible to create imagery outside of one's physical and/or emotional experience?"
First there are those who
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Then they heard a laugh she got mostly scared, quickly Ikuto packed his violin in his violin case and grab Amu hand "let's go Amu" it was too late. Lulu came from behind a tree and laughed one more time and showed Amu her friend Kiana with the dream necklace she has around her neck and her character egg turned to a ? egg. "Kiana, this can't be, NO! it can't be true. Kiana and I are friends and she had dreams to become a famous hula dancer" Amu screamed with tears from her eyes. Kiana ignored what she said and Lulu left for her to finish the job and left laughing with joy, the ? egg grew bigger and capture kiana and it cracked open "Character Transformation Dancing Dreamer" she dan