Rain Of DarknessRain Of Darkness3 years ago in Free Verse More Like This
Rain of Darkness
Something inside of me...broke
The very core of my soul...snapped
I became surrounded by a numbing cold
I blinked and everything faded to black
When you left me alone-
I felt this eternal betrayal
When you decided to let me go-
The dependance I hid became unstable
The weight on my shoulders collapsed
While the world I once knew- wasted
The bottled up remorse relapsed
I was consumed by hatred
Thou have forsaken
Others will taste my conviction
Hope, itself has been taken
Along with every form of justification
Why am I the one abandoned?
I never took ANYTHING for granted!
Re-fracture and amplify the fragments
AND TELL ME THAT WASN'T YOUR INTENTION?
I'm a fraction of a remnant
And that's an understatement
You knew this would happen
When you took back our salvation
Something deep inside of me...crumbled
The center of my heart...stung
I made even the shadows
5 Steps to Writing Your Story's Disaster5 Steps to Writing Your Story's Disaster5 Steps to Writing Your Story's Disaster3 months ago in Reviews & Guides More Like This
Anybody Can Write a Novel
Chapter 4 “Plot Points” – Section 7 “The Disaster”
With Links to Supplementary Material
After your Midpoint (where the Antagonistic Force confronted your Protagonist and won), your Protagonist will have an emotional spiral into turmoil and dire consequences for everyone who had stakes in your protagonist's victory. Not only that, but your Protagonist will feel and take this failure more than anywhere else in the story—feeling like they have just been thrown
SadDo you know what it's likeSad3 years ago in Free Verse More Like This
to feel sad?
It hurts for awhile,
so deep your bones ache,
heavy like lead,
weighing you down.
But after awhile,
after so many fake smiles
and 'I'm fine's
and lies so well rehearsed
that you almost want to scream when no one notices,
even though that's what you wanted...
After all that,
you become numb.
The pain doesn't go away,
but it's more of a dull, throbbing ache now,
always enough to feel it
but never completely there.
It drags you down,
almost like drowning.
And you learn there's no fighting it,
no getting out,
no pulling yourself free.
even those little moments
of breaking the surface
of feeling alive and happy again
If only you'd told someone sooner,
let your walls down,
you're too far gone,
in too deep.
To Build A HumanTo Build A Human4 years ago in Short Stories More Like This
I wonder if I died last night.
I once wondered if I had died the night before. And that's not even the strangest thought I had that fateful day. But perhaps I should start from the beginning
I had been thinking about the troubling philosophical issue regarding the hypothetical teleportation device that uses quantum entanglement to instantaneously transfer data, then uses that data to exactly replicate the individual in the new place and simultaneously destroy the original. The new copy is like a twin with all the same memories of the original, right up to the event of the teleportation, creating a perfect illusion of transportation to everyone, including the replicant, who would have first person memory of the lifetime of the original and therefore believe himself to be the original. The only party for whom this fax machine from hell fails is the original, who is stifled by nonexistence.
So how can one be certain of this tragic flaw without experiencing it fi
Drat BreedsThe Breeds Of DratDrat Breeds4 years ago in Profiles More Like This
Breed Type or Type: Referring to an element; Wind, Water, Fire, or Earth
Main Breed: Breeds of drats that are similar in many ways, but still have different characteristics (Size, color, local )
Offshoot: A breed of drat that differs greatly in some way, but still not enough to be separated from their type
Kin: A breed of drat referring to other drats of a same type; sometimes called cousins
Mar: A male drat
Fen: A female drat
Kit: Young or baby drat
Clan: A group of drats; what all drats are a part of; A drat in relation to other drats of the same breed
Sun (10 feet)
Volcano (9 ¾ feet)
Steel (8 feet)
Desert (8 feet)
Ice (8 feet)
Ocean (7 ½ feet)
Jungle (7 feet)
Mountain (7 feet)
Storm (6 ½ feet)
Thunder (6 feet)
Adeptus AstartesAdeptus Astartes5 years ago in Traditional Fixed Forms More Like This
As the sun rises making my eyes shrink,
It's holy light flooding, the baren wasteland.
I can't help but think,
About how we made our last stand.
As I look around, I see the price that we paid,
I can distinguish my fallen brothers remains,
That lay in front of this improvised barricade,
They fought valiantly, thus honoring our Great Father's steel reigns.
Our enemy was formidable and cunning,
The green hordes threatened to overun these planets,
As they were charging they appeared overwhelming,
But we had no fear, for our Captain's voice, was flooding our helmets:
"We shall not falter, for we are his Angels of Death,
We shall fear no evil, for we are the Emperor's will made manifest."
Such is the fate of our enemies, to draw their last breath,
As the Emperor's Chosen let loose, their judging tempest.
Hados Character Bio Ver.1Name- HadosHados Character Bio Ver.11 year ago in Profiles More Like This
Name meaning/Origin- Latin for Fate, Doom, Destiny. Other Languages have similar meanings.
Nicknames- Demon, Son of the Fallen One, Harbinger of Evil, Son of the Prophecy, Prophociezed One, Son of the Sinful, Abomination, The Devil or The Beast.
Species- Demon Dragon Hybrid (Celestial & Angel & Demonic)
DoB/Origin- Modern Day Alaska, June 21st 1628 A.D., Native American Tribe of Unknown Origin (E18Y5365)
Age- 386 Years Old
Current Era of Age- Teenager
Parents- Nefarious and Crudalia
Adoptive Parents(Before he met his birth Parents)- Two Unknown Celestials and Unknown Native American Tribe.
Other Family- Quetzalcoatl (Uncle/Godparent/Mentor), Corbin Turley (Considered Brother), Myth (Considered Brother/Close Friend/ Myth-Keeper's OC), Proton (Emperor of the Dragonic Imperium, Considered Close friend and brother), Animus (Adoptive Son), CiC (Considered brother).
Deceased Family- All before his parents are dead. Had 17 other brothers and sisters but al
Decepticon rules of the baseRules of the base:Decepticon rules of the base6 years ago in Humor More Like This
1. Stop abusing Starscream. That is Megatrons hobby.
2. Don't fire any weapons inside the base. We are under water and don't need anymore leaks.
3. No human fanfiction about Transformers is allowed on Decepticon territory. a) Especialy not slash. b) Especialy not slash including Megatron and Starscream. c) Be warned that slash jokes will be severely punished.
4. The spacebridge is not intended as a place to dump garbage.
5. Human bowling is not allowed inside the base. We can do withouth the mess they make when they die. a) A exception is made for human writers of slash fanfiction.
6. If Shockwave calls Megatron is not home.
7. No filthy organics are to be used as pets. a) Especialy not humans. b) Yes Starscream that goes for dr Arkeville aswell.
8. Everyone must use protection. a) Especialy you Soundwave, we do NOT want to see anymore of your annoying casettes everywhere.
9. Devastator is never going to be challenged to a dance off again.
10. There is no such thing
Binge Eating DisorderShe curled up into a ball at the foot of her bed; her eyes clasped tightly shut as though protecting herself from the overwhelming sense of guilt spilling from her aching belly.Binge Eating Disorder8 years ago in General Non-Fiction More Like This
She had no control.
It scared her. It was as though whenever she walked into the kitchen a demon would take possession of her body. She couldnt pass by the fridge without it dragging her forward, pressing her to have just another bite; just another taste of this and a little nibble of that
Of course, it only happened when she was alone. If there was someone else there then the demon dared not show itself. The shame of such lack of control made her steer away from the kitchen while someone lurked there, but as soon as they left she would once again be drawn into the same pattern of feasting until her stomach hurt, just like it was now.
The worst part of it was that she had no idea how to end it; how could she possibly bring the horrid feasting episodes to a close? She couldnt even admit what sh
Deae Ex Machinis: OmegaContinued from Alpha.Deae Ex Machinis: Omega4 years ago in Short Stories More Like This
Heather decided not to talk to Adam for a long while after that. Even going so far as refusing to debate him in Mr. Wilde's class. The other boys at that school seemed to take this as some kind of cue. Heather was also realizing that something about her new physiology was really affecting the boys in school, and it seemed to go beyond a simple physical attraction. Many had taken to following her around, and when she was in a room all eyes always seemed to drift her way. She resolved to wear baggy clothing as often as possible to avoid as much unwanted attention as she could.
She had started going to the gym to explain her new body. The weights there, of course, held no real challenge for her. She had found ways to make it look like she was really exerting herself. She was also slick with sweat by the end of one of her workouts, and all the guys in the room seemed to be spellbound.
The Experiment A throbbing pain. Agony.The Experiment4 years ago in Short Stories More Like This
Her head ached, muddled and numb. Memories flickered to the what, where and why. She carefully opened her eyes to darkness and struggled to remember. Images, like still frames, haunted her.
The walk home. Unlocking her apartment. Dropping her keys.
The shadow in her living room.
The pain was easing, and her skin felt cool. Cold. She tried to touch herself, to raise her hand.but there was resistance.
She was bound at the wrists, arms tied behind the back of a wooden chair.
She wasn't naked. The cotton of her brassier, and the protection of matching underwear covered her shame. She squirmed, discovering that her legs were also secured to the chair. She struggled, fighting the velvety ropes that kept her immobile. The chair was secured to the floor. The bindings were tight.
She was completely helpless.
Her breath came fast, heart racing the fear o
I Just Want To Punch YouYour attitude, your arroganceI Just Want To Punch You4 years ago in Free Verse More Like This
Has pushed me to the edge.
It's too late to save me now.
And now I'm dead.
Bombia's Tips to Happy Roleplaying. Roleplaying Tips and EtiquetteBombia's Tips to Happy Roleplaying.1 year ago in Introductions & Chapters More Like This
Hello, my name is Bombia and I have been roleplaying for about thirteen years. Over those years, I have learned many things and I would like to pass on some knowledge to other roleplayers who are newer to it or would like some tips.
First off, let me talk about some etiquette tips.
Noting a person as part of a roleplay request:
What I find annoying and irritable is if someone just notes me with a "Hello." and nothing else. If noting a person for a roleplay, please tell them why you are noting them. That way the person who you are sending the Note to knows why you are noting them and the process is smoother.
Ending a roleplay
If you no longer wish to do a roleplay, please note the person and let them know that you do not wish to continue and if possible providing them with feedback as to why. That way you do not leave the person longing and waiting for a roleplay. It gets very annoying and rude. In some cases
FriendFriend (n): a person attached to another by feelings of affectionFriend3 years ago in Free Verse More Like This
It sounds so simple
These feelings of affection
Like there’s not much to it
But isn't there?
They come into your life
You can’t help but trust them
And you never expect them to leave
But don’t they?
Friends for almost three years
But then out the door you walked
We saved each other’s lives
Best friends through thick and thin
We had a rocky beginning
But then it all smoothed over
One little thing happens
You don’t trust me enough to ask the truth
You go to him instead, he who hates me
These feelings of affection have been replaced with something else
We've thrown each other away
We've cut each other off
I miss telling you everything
I miss you telling me everything
Now you just tell each other everything
I've been left out of the equation
One plus one plus one minus one
It equals two if you do the math right
And I’m just that little one
Thy Wraith Had anyone been awake that night, they might have been slightly afraid. There was very little traffic in the tiny county, but there were always forest sounds. But not tonight. Tonight was completely and utterly silent, not a cricket, not an owl, not even the wind. The sky was completely clear and cloudless…yet not a star shone, and it was the night of the new moon. Darkness and stillness abounded. Yet the residents of the rural area slept on, completely oblivious of what was to come.Thy Wraith8 years ago in Horror More Like This
At precisely 3:03 am, something fell from the sky. This was odd, for there was nowhere it could have fallen from. It did, however, fall, and it landed in the middle of a field. It was a playing card…in fact, it was the sixth Jokers Card. The face bore a red-robed figure, hand stretched out in a beckoning gesture. Had anyone been studying the card, and then looked up, they would have been in for a shock. The creature was there by the card; on its shoulder a crow perched, yellow eyes gazing keenly
The Dire Wolves ChapterThe Dire Wolves ChapterThe Dire Wolves Chapter2 years ago in Profiles More Like This
War Cry: THE WOLF HOWLS FOR YOUR BLOOD!
Colors: Brown, Bronze Shoulder and company colors. Switched for Terminators.
Founded: Unknown Founding.
Created for: Crusader Chapter.
Progenitor Space Wolves.
Gene Seed Purity: New Generation. Due to the unsuitability of the Space Wolf gene seed the Dire Wolves had to attempt to stabilize their father chapter gene seed. In secret of course. They have had mild success. They still suffer the the curse of the Wulfen.
Chapter Personality: The Chapter is a chapter of brotherhood. They are all brother till the end and will rarely betray each or their fellow members of the Imperium. Like their father chapter, they are honor and duty pound and feel like they must right the wrongs of the Imperium. Unlike the father chapter they have found politics to be fun at times. They aren't as honest as the Space Wolves.
Heroes of the Chapter:
Balgrim Chapter Master of the Dire Wolves. He led the assault into Tyranid infested territory to rec
The Seekers Chapter. 40kThe Seekers Chapter. (Not my Asorlin War Order)The Seekers Chapter. 40k2 years ago in Profiles More Like This
The Seekers are a standing force in an unknown sector of space. (Its unknown because I have no name for it at the moment. I'm open to suggestions.)
The Chapter was founded in the 38th millennium.
They are a Dark Angels successor chapter, coming directly from them. So they have all the gene seed problems as the Dark Angels. (I couldn't find that information so if anyone knows tell me.)
The Chapter Demeanour is that of; No Mercy, No Respite (Some Chapters can become so embroiled in their missions that all else becomes secondary, stubborn and courageous in the face of adversity but also to the detriment of the larger strategic situation at times)
Usually their mission involves going into a Space Hulk or find an abandoned fort and retrieve some ancient relic, armor or weapons. In others worlds they are dungeon divers.
Sacarak Corbec Master of Sanctity. (Head Chaplain) He slew a Demon Prince of Tzeentch in single combat.
The home world o
Athena PiratesAthena Pirates6 years ago in Fan Fiction More Like This
Humanity have moved from earth, the planet where they originated into space, after the pollution level reached a very critical level, the Federation decided to move everyone out of earth and into the colonies, they would start the cleaning of earth a big project, they estimated that the healing would take between 60 to 90 years, just to remove the abuse of centuries
The project nicknamed the healing planet, needed a lot of transportation, between many planets of men and materials, and whenever there is large amount of transportation piracy is prone to happen
Near the planet Uranus, a ship was carrying chemicals for water purification, when suddenly it was attacked by pirates, the pirates attached their ship to the huge container ship, but when they entered they were surprised that no one was there, and there was no shipment either!
Then out of the blue , two shadowy figure jump out from two crates near where the Pirates have entered the ship , and start firing from their gun , the pira
2.28.12today, i deposited the2.28.123 years ago in Free Verse More Like This
contents of my stomach
into an open, wanting
i, a liquid solid
am readily taken down
into its belly
where i decompose.
my throat is a raw
i use to
sing off key
i have a fever.
my temples are
and my skull
trapping the heat
it's like i have cysts
between my bones,
in my veins.
i lost my legs along the way
down into the abyss.
but i don't mind.
their muscles ached
i'd often thought of
still, i am left with
and they all creak,
and they won't shut up
and let me sleep
that must be why i never
can never be deep enough
to submerge me.
tonight, i'll sweat
myself out through
my pores and
always about the
same bones &
*that fluffy story everyone must read*It was just a few hours -three or less- since dinner had finished and Edward Nygma had just sent their two students to bed. There was complaints of it being too early, from Kitty, of course -the brunette girl with the blood red bangs could never make anything easy for Edward- but he explained how important their project was tomorrow.*that fluffy story everyone must read*1 month ago in Drama More Like This
They were going to steal back some jewels and tech that was stolen from the all knowing prince of puzzles by a mob. Of course a small mob wouldn't be an issue at all however, this one was a bit larger... of course, Nygma could handle this easily with his students coming alone to learn and receive some extra credit from the school system, all he needed was his mind and his tech to defeat those idiots, so there was no need to call Harvey/Twoface Dent, Jonathan Crane, or Jervis Tetch.
Or at least his pride said so.
Edward waited for just under an hour then checked to make sure that Kitty and Sam were asleep, he found the two wrapped in each others arms sweetl