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All Deviations
All Deviations


"So what do you do?" he asked, from the arm chair he'd claimed adjacent to me.

I reclined on the back of the sunken couch, fully comfortable with the words I was mulling over, letting them roll thoughtfully on my tongue.

"I'm a liar," I answered, as if it were as obvious as my hair color or the gravity present in the room, holding the books down on the coffee table.

A confused look crossed his face.

"I thought they said you were a poet?"

My eyes left him, lids following lashes to pull towards the carpet. I smiled softly to myself.

"Is there really a difference?" I said aloud, feeling like this was one of the moments that needed a sigh, but none audible escaped me.

Confusion stayed stubbornly plastered on his face, his eyes debating whether I actually knew my own words, as if maybe I was disoriented from the cup in my hand, and he hadn't noticed at first.

I shrugged.

"I could tell you stories, true or not, but either way, you would think they were unbelievable."
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I should have just said that at the party, lol.

A thought in my head listening to some FOB (ironic in ways I think only I know), noticing lots of lyrics about being liars, which I assumed meant the singer's character's words and poetry, which then led on for me to think of my lit classes and how poets back in the day and some now were all just a bunch of artificial liars. It started out as poetry but read as prose so I just filled in details and gaps around the conversation, making pretty pretty short thingies.

Take it or leave it, kid. You don't get honesty like this just anywhere.


12:16 p.m., Wednesday, July 16, 2008. Listening to Motion City Soundtrack's "Hold Me Down." (Like I'd listen to any other song right now *smiles.*)

If you're honest about being a liar, doesn't that mean you're really honest? This thought constantly confuses me.
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~convenientlyXdying:iconconvenientlyXdying: Jul 15, 2008, 10:23:37 PM
Wow, you are very wise!
This was fun to read, I like all the metaphors or whatever they're called =D

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*weitmare:iconweitmare: Jul 15, 2008, 10:24:24 PM
:heart: aww..!!

I really love this... you are really getting the hang of this prose thing! I swear you could write a book on this. It feels so much like the set up of a story.. but I still love it as a stand alone piece :D

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*ElectroBaby:iconElectroBaby: Jul 15, 2008, 10:30:26 PM
*blushes* Prose has an interesting feel to it. So different from poetry somehow. I guess it's because I can say more and be more direct. I'm not sure. But thank you lol *grins.* It does feel like a story, though in a way it's like a beginning and yet as if I flipped to the middle of the plot. *shrugs.* Guess it'll be a snapshot for now.

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*ElectroBaby:iconElectroBaby: Jul 15, 2008, 10:34:11 PM
*laughs* I don't think I'm wise lol, but thanks anyway.

And thank you for reading! Made me smile :D

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~electrolime:iconelectrolime: Jul 15, 2008, 10:40:10 PM
Very descriptive! :D

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*ElectroBaby:iconElectroBaby: Jul 15, 2008, 10:45:14 PM
hahahah, yeah, I can get wordy. Thanks for reading :)

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~convenientlyXdying:iconconvenientlyXdying: Jul 15, 2008, 10:51:40 PM
Lol, well I never thought about stuff like that, so therefore you are at least wiser than me =D
Hehe, no problem :heart:

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*ElectroBaby:iconElectroBaby: Jul 15, 2008, 11:08:42 PM
Eh, you just think about different things lol.

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~convenientlyXdying:iconconvenientlyXdying: Jul 15, 2008, 11:10:46 PM
Lol alright then =]

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