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Break and Up by ~im-a-graveyard:iconim-a-graveyard:

Categories Literature > Poetry > Narrative > Spoken Word


The high summer wind settling
Children laughing out loud.
Today they take shelter under the birch tree.
Using a butter knife to cut an awkward silence.
They cant seem to find the right words.
His body language tells her
His shifty eyes show her
Their time is running out.
You've stopped returning my calls
she says.
He just silently shakes his head.
She makes an effort
And he barely tries.
I think its best
If we leave ourselves at rest
Then can we depart
He tells her.
The china doll lips slowly head south.
Her eyes in the same direction.
He turns his head and heaves.
She turns her head and screams.
The high summer wind drifts up.
©2008 ~im-a-graveyard
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i think an old friendship is slowly falling apart in my hands.
like the sand of time
fades with the ever chasing tide.
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~businka:iconbusinka: May 14, 2008, 7:46:07 PM
Aww. :-( :hug:
I'm sorry.

When I was reading it, I somehow got the feeling you were talking about Josh. Was I right?

--
"Pull the plug,
But I'd like to learn your name.
And holding on,
Well I hope you do the same.
Aww sugar, slip into the tragedy,
You've spun this chamber dry."

My Chemical Romance @ the Warfield on 04/04/08
~xHP-GD-MCRx:iconxHP-GD-MCRx: May 14, 2008, 10:37:03 PM
this is very well written although quite upsetting.
i'm sorry to hear that you're going through a situation like this.

:hug: if this is written from experience that is.
~maidenofwar:iconmaidenofwar: May 15, 2008, 2:44:09 AM
:hug: for you...


but it's beautiful, if upsetting....very well written :heart:

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Never let anyone bring you down. Never think your life's not worth it. Never turn to suicide. Never turn to depression. Never harm yourself in anyway. Never give in.
Keep standing, keep fighting the good fight no matter what.
Keep yourself alive
~im-a-graveyard:iconim-a-graveyard: May 15, 2008, 3:00:23 PM
no.
not josh.
my friend dar.
hes just..different now.

--
i have whiplash in my stomach!
~im-a-graveyard:iconim-a-graveyard: May 15, 2008, 3:00:56 PM
thank you

its how i feel between each other, and how we suck at communicating now and he wont listen.

--
i have whiplash in my stomach!
~im-a-graveyard:iconim-a-graveyard: May 15, 2008, 3:01:20 PM
thank you :]

:hug:

i wish he would cheer up and stop being so stubborn.

--
i have whiplash in my stomach!
~maidenofwar:iconmaidenofwar: May 16, 2008, 1:56:59 AM
no prob! :glomp:

ah, he'll come round ^ ^

--
Never let anyone bring you down. Never think your life's not worth it. Never turn to suicide. Never turn to depression. Never harm yourself in anyway. Never give in.
Keep standing, keep fighting the good fight no matter what.
Keep yourself alive
~im-a-graveyard:iconim-a-graveyard: May 16, 2008, 6:29:57 PM
i hope so.
its getting annoying

:]

--
i have whiplash in my stomach!
~businka:iconbusinka: May 16, 2008, 7:52:10 PM
:-(

I understand. I've been through losing friends a lot this year. I hate seeing people change.

--
"Pull the plug,
But I'd like to learn your name.
And holding on,
Well I hope you do the same.
Aww sugar, slip into the tragedy,
You've spun this chamber dry."

My Chemical Romance @ the Warfield on 04/04/08
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