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All Deviations
All Deviations


I remember the way I once gazed into your eyes
Every fleck of gold the sun painted in them, I once memorized
I remember exactly how they sparkled in the moonlight
Like the fireflies, when we held each other through the night

And your heartbeat, and every delicate curve
Which I had once so perfectly learned
And each breath my own breathing spurred
And your precious voice my soul once heard

You were my universe's Sun
My friend, my dear beloved one
We promised it would always be that way
But it's been so long since that sweet day

I remember how you held me tight
Your embrace today doesn't feel quite right
The air turns cold as you speak my name
And I realize, nothing stays the same
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~Boo0ger:iconBoo0ger: May 10, 2008, 8:22:34 PM
I love the last line. It rings true almost for everything in life.
~Sister-Nightroad7:iconSister-Nightroad7: May 11, 2008, 1:57:26 PM
That was absolutely wonderful dear. You really have a way of capturing people with your writing. I hope that you aspire to make writing your Minor and continue to write wonderfully inbetween dental appointments!

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~SedahLiah:iconSedahLiah: May 11, 2008, 2:12:49 PM
Wow, very well written. Very original, which is hard to do when writing about romance. The emotion comes out very well, too.

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~kayleebuttons:iconkayleebuttons: May 11, 2008, 5:06:26 PM Mood: Wow!
I got very good imagery here. Very romantic and good. Bravo!!!!

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~seritha:iconseritha: May 16, 2008, 11:47:44 AM
That was great especially that last line

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=mormonchick1005:iconmormonchick1005: Jul 25, 2008, 12:17:45 PM
Actually, I hope to minor in Medical Anthropology.

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"These are the days that I've been missing
Give me the taste, give me the joy of summer wine
These are the days that bring new meaning
I feel the stillness of the sun and I feel fine"
~Sister-Nightroad7:iconSister-Nightroad7: Jul 25, 2008, 5:44:56 PM
Pastime then?

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-Watari ~bishie-stalker-club MINE! :bonk: :mwahaha:
-Zeniba *The-Disney-Directory
-Ms.Z ~DeathnoteXalphabeT
You watch me? I watch you! If not, REMIND THE POOR GIRL.
~hauntingmewithsmiles:iconhauntingmewithsmiles: Aug 3, 2008, 5:55:59 PM
This is really sweet, and well-written:heart:

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