Entry for the "alternate ending" contest at . Also an experiment with panel format.
In case you can't tell what the hell is happening in this pic (as may very well be the case - I'm not sure I handled this so well), some explanation: In this Final Lair Scene, the Phantom has killed Raoul because, well, he's Raoul. He killed Mme. Giry because she was trying to stop him. He then killed Christine in a jealous rage. (He smothered her with a pillow! Literary reference! Get it?? Othello) So he's sitting there in despair while Meg, having found her way down there, witnessed the three murders and been driven totally batshit crazy, takes the letter opener from her mother's body (he stabbed her with a letter opener. It seemed appropriate) and kills our dear Erik. Then we have that iconic last Meg-holding-mask moment. Or I could just tell you to imagine the last scene of Sweeney Todd and you'd get the idea... I guess this is sort of a crossover.
Line art drawn and inked traditionally, colored in Photoshop with tablet. A couple textures from some site I can't remember now. And I don't think you can even walk like that in pointe shoes, mleh
I love the idea, and the color scheme and the folds and shading on Meg's dress. But I was a little confused by the next to last panel--I didn't quite make the connection and couldn't tell if this was a new injury or if blood was leaking from around the pillow. I think if I'd thought about it more, I might have gotten it better but your explanation was there so I didn't take the time to puzzle it out.
Still, it's a nice piece and a good entry! There should be more crazy Meg.
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Wow... excellent entry - but yeah, the next to last panel seemed like it was covering a wound. And killing Madame Giry? Dude, you're making this like the end of Hamlet where everyone dies. Anyhow, looks fab and good luck in the contest!
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"Even the darkest people have their lighter side." - Jeremy Brett, Actor
Thanks! Maybe if I added more obviously dripping blood in the second-to-last panel... Although I don't think I want to work on this anymore. I really wanted to do an "everyone dies" ending - the managers, Carlotta, Piangi, and Mssr. Reyer are most likely dead too.
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"Every normal man must be tempted at times to spit on his hands, hoist the black flag, and begin to slit throats." -H.L. Mencken
Thanks. Yes, that is rather unclear - I struggled with how to do that panel in particular. I was kind of disappointed because I didn't do justice to an idea I really liked, but ah well, experimentation... Glad you like it!
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"Every normal man must be tempted at times to spit on his hands, hoist the black flag, and begin to slit throats." -H.L. Mencken
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Still, it's a nice piece and a good entry! There should be more crazy Meg.
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The Fifth Cellar, a dedicated Phantom fic archive for all kinds of POTO stories.
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"Even the darkest people have their lighter side." - Jeremy Brett, Actor
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"Every normal man must be tempted at times to spit on his hands, hoist the black flag, and begin to slit throats." -H.L. Mencken
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"Every normal man must be tempted at times to spit on his hands, hoist the black flag, and begin to slit throats." -H.L. Mencken
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you should only look down at someone when you are helping them up
You are only as strong as the drinks you make and the tables you dance on
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Survivor of Phantom of Manhattan.
i love it!
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