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Deserted Broken Home by *itsalladream321:iconitsalladream321:


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Submitted: March 8
File Size: 1.3 MB
Image Size: 65.5 KB
Resolution: 800×447
Comments: 3
Favourites & Collections: 2 [who?]

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Make: SAMSUNG TECHWIN CO., LTD
Model: Digimax 430 / Kenox D430
Shutter Speed: 1/125 second
F Number: F/10.0
Focal Length: 17 mm
ISO Speed: 63
Date Picture Taken: Jun 27, 2006, 1:22:11 PM

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This is an edit from one of my previous works. I took some advice from someone and I think it looks tons better. I hope you all do too.

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*theFouro:icontheFouro: Mar 8, 2008, 6:34:40 AM
Much better. More intense and effective without the empty space up there. :)

The composition is really traditional, using rule of thirds now, and it goes really well with this scene. Also the stronger contrasts now help the overall feeling here.

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*Mickeygr:iconMickeygr: Apr 1, 2008, 10:37:03 AM
Looks like you took a good pic and got some good advice. The end result is really nice! Love it!
*itsalladream321:iconitsalladream321: Apr 1, 2008, 4:54:54 PM
I do too, its one of my faves.

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