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No feeling left. by =killerfairy:iconkillerfairy:

Categories Literature > Poetry > Human Nature > Open


Stagnant cries,
Of "let me in".
No feeling left,
In chestnut eyes.

Just fear that comes,
Seeping through,
Curling, caressing,
Through ripples of flesh,
And sudden, steely tears.

All the while,
They still cry,
"Let me in."
©2008 =killerfairy
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Yeah, angsty.
Because it's what I do best right?

© Amy Louise Davis 2008.

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*GreyHawk12345:iconGreyHawk12345: Jan 26, 2008, 6:14:07 PM
Pretty good. :)

Nice and short.

--
The Best Part About Life Is Knowing You Put It Together.
-Trent Reznor.
~mevrouwcrime:iconmevrouwcrime: Jan 26, 2008, 7:47:11 PM
loove the word

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suka : duka = teman :date:
*ravynsfaery:iconravynsfaery: Jan 26, 2008, 8:27:15 PM
<3333

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Pan dramwych ffrid yr Ywan,
Lle mae Tylwyth Ted rhadien,
Dos yamlaen, a phaid a sefyll,
Gwillia'th droed - rhag dawnsva'r Ellyll

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~ Nidd hawdd fy mala ~
!DP-DRAGON:iconDP-DRAGON: Jan 27, 2008, 4:22:26 AM
Homg, Nice.

--
Teff Is My Everything, I Am Nothing Without Her. :3

(\_/)
(O.o)
'(_ _)'

-This is Bunny. Copy him into your signature to help him in his quest to world domination...
=melupa:iconmelupa: Jan 27, 2008, 6:38:12 AM Mood: Love
beautiful baby,simply beautiful

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Eyes of a fallen angel, Eyes of a tragedy. - A Perfect Circle [3 Libras]
=PimpinRose:iconPimpinRose: Jan 28, 2008, 12:29:09 PM
This is so gorgeous, Amy.

Your writing amazes me, you have real talent.
The poem; it's thick, few words, sure, but there's something there that screams below the surface, where you can only get an idea of it.

I adore this piece.

<33.

--
I am beautiful for the one who loves me.
~HiddenDusk:iconHiddenDusk: Jan 30, 2008, 8:14:15 PM
Mmm, a fave. :nod: :salute:

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"Watch and pray, lest you enter into temptation. The spirit indeed is willing, but the flesh is weak." - Matthew 26:41 (NKJV)
=killerfairy:iconkillerfairy: Mar 9, 2008, 9:46:35 AM
Thank you so much sexy. <3

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Nurse Amy. :ambulance:

:batman::gun::spidey:

Tis known that I am a pretty piece of flesh.
- Shakespeare.
=killerfairy:iconkillerfairy: Apr 2, 2008, 5:06:13 PM
Thanks so much!

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Nurse Amy. :ambulance:

:batman::gun::spidey:

Tis known that I am a pretty piece of flesh.
- Shakespeare.
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