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Twokinds 006 Chapter One by *Twokinds:iconTwokinds:


©2007-2008 *Twokinds
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Submitted: October 18, 2007
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Well, I keep cranking them out, one by one. Here is the remake of the first chapter page, which I think came out quite nice. I was going to give it a colorful background, but I decided to go with a minimalistic, white look; much like the original. I think in the end, with the shadow effect, it looks good this way.

Some interesting information about the original: I hadn't had the story really planned out in any great amount of detail. Some people have asked me why Flora is holding a magic staff, and the reason is, I had originally planned to have Flora be a magic user to complement Trace's swordsmanship. Trace originally didn't have any magic at all. I was literally making it up as I went along, and things obviously changed as the comic advanced in story. Once the plot fleshed out, the original Chapter One page ended up not making a whole lot of sense.

So, I got rid of the staff, which Flora never acquired. Trace's sword is changed. Shadow effects were added and I put in my current Twokinds logo design at the top. Enjoy!

Here is the original, for reference: [link]
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~dantiscus:icondantiscus: Oct 18, 2007, 1:19:03 AM
It was sweet startin' 2 read the comic,now it's the time 2 re-read it =3

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~Zeethefox:iconZeethefox: Oct 18, 2007, 1:45:38 AM
I did always wonder about that staff. good choice on recolouring and remaking the first 5 comics and this one, I think it was a good idea :)

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~Crazy-Jake:iconCrazy-Jake: Oct 18, 2007, 3:55:18 AM
I like traces old clothes. where can I get that sweater >.<

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~VulpixTheLonely:iconVulpixTheLonely: Oct 18, 2007, 4:31:23 AM
I really like that you re-did your work :) It's gonna attract far more attention this way ^_^
~Eternalwanderer01:iconEternalwanderer01: Oct 18, 2007, 5:15:37 AM
Whoa! I like this one much better. The makes alot more since with the story. The shadowing effects are awesome!

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~Dukane:iconDukane: Oct 18, 2007, 5:56:10 AM Mood: Wow!
Wow. And to think I just finished re-reading the comic today and come to see ur DA page and find this little gem. I really like the little shadow "extras" you got in there. :w00t!:

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~RakuenWold:iconRakuenWold: Oct 18, 2007, 6:10:37 AM Mood: Love
Very pretty ^_^ Goin back and taking care of all the lil odds and enjds from the beginning, its great! You can definetly see the progress you have made over the years doin this and it shines through!

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~LordViking:iconLordViking: Oct 18, 2007, 6:45:31 AM
I suspected something like that when I saw the staff. Haven't thought about it afterwards since now though.

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~shadoe-claw:iconshadoe-claw: Oct 18, 2007, 7:23:29 AM
hey theres a bird on trace's sword. XD

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