Aw I love the first picture on the first Panal he looks so cute XD;
Wait for me sexy!
Haha best line XD

"wait for me sexy!"
Im really lovin valentine and timmy's expressions! they're probably thinking "..oh shit..."

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_{You're so talented! I sincerely love that first panel, and the panel after it. hilarious expressions, and I think Chris is cool!Wehhe!
Can't wait for the next page!}

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I like your comic, Ashley, but the only thing is that Timmy and Valentine look a little too weird in the 7th panel. Honestly, I'm telling the truth! Whenever I draw my style of your characters, they would look more cartoony than anime. Even my expressions that I put on their faces are cartoonlike. Still, you're style is better than mine, anyway.

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LOL, there's a sweatdrop in almost all the panels.

I love Jeremy's face in the 2nd panel. XD And Roadkill, even in a need-a-chill-pill mode, is as smexy as ever. Jeremy kinda' reminds me of my character Flavian, but in personality only. Just the way he fawns over her. It's awesome either way. AND OH MY WORD I'M SO IGNORANT, I just realized that they're all wearing the spiked collar. I should have figured it out when Valentine was talking about wearing her army color but NOOOOO, I HAVE TO LET MY STUPID STIKE AGAIN.

Long comment. >.<

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LOLJeremy in the second panel omg xDDD I dont get why he likes Roxxy either. u_u I think the page came out good. Cant wait for the next part.

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i love how the 2nd pannel turned out i like his face and Valintine is really cute awww and look at Timmy ^^ keep up the good work

Actually I really liked this page. I liked the 2nd panel the most. I luved the nervious expresions on 7th panel. They look funny.

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Pretty good page. And Jeremy's comment was pure funniness. He must really like Roxy damn alot.

Whoot! The expressions are so brilliant! You really bring out the characters by those looks. I LOVE the 2nd and 3rd panels, they really made me laugh. XD That's too funny! Roadkill's extreme calmness makes him hot too *has the hots for a dog* XD Great job on this one! Who cares if it takes awhile, the results are always worh it! Don't rush yourself, a lot of people don't get comics done as quick as you anyway, and they still aren't as nice. I'm really liking this comic<3