Nice! I like the coloring of your characters. And how they're like... the same character... but male and female! :3

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HOLY SHIT I'VE SEEN THIS TOAST BEFORE!

Thank you very much ^_^ Hehe yeah :3 Though I have a tendency to have my character female most of the time, I figured it would be ideal to put both hehe

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"The people and the friends we have lost...

...or the dreams that have faded...

Never forget them."

Yuna - Final Fantasy X
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Huh! so why for you change your hair to red? some thoughts. The red parts of the hair look like an article of clothing. There's a few reasons for this. One of them being that you have a painfully scarlet red that is next to impossible even with died hair. another is that there is no definition in the hair. it's just a bulk shape, there's no smaller shapes separating it like hair lines tend to form in hair. even in your most simple animated characters there's a few of those.

Both these are not big deals, if you did one thing. Add highlights. I see you tried to make the edge of the hair a shade lighter but that doesn't look right for a highlight. Highlights form a halo around the head, like this:[link]

or these [link]

what I want you to look at is the highlights in the hair, where they are, how they fall, and the jaggedness of them. That could make alll the difference here.

It was easier to buy when you didn't highligh with the grey because grey can be a non-luminecent color at times, but red is bright, it needs it, mate.

Hey, do you have photo shop? if so, use the dodge tool! it makes is super easy XD, just play with it XD.

Anywho, I just wanted to see if I could help a bit XD other than that this looks real good, which is why i'm dogging you a bit cuz you are so close to having this be just spectacular XD keep drawing, you're always improoving man XD

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"Pudge controls the weather."--lilo

wow

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I MarXZimXSweetXGir u have to love her

wow hehe

I changed it awhile ago actually. And yes your right... I'm just lazy x.X I practically forced myself to colour this

but yes, I'm actually thinking about changing the colour of the top so it doesn't blend in so much with the hair, and I know it also needs more definition, hehe I'm gonna go back and fix that.

actually the insperation for how the hair is, I got from dot hack//sign

And thank you ^^ and I'll go back and add the highlights as well

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"The people and the friends we have lost...

...or the dreams that have faded...

Never forget them."

Yuna - Final Fantasy X
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.Hack// is a great series, and I know what you were aiming for, but there's gotta be some defigning property that makes it appear as hair XD Good luck and I hope I helped some XD

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"Pudge controls the weather."--lilo

hehe thanks

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"The people and the friends we have lost...

...or the dreams that have faded...

Never forget them."

Yuna - Final Fantasy X
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well when I first drew the hair like that there was more definition then lol I just gotta go back and fix it XD And you did, thank you

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"The people and the friends we have lost...

...or the dreams that have faded...

Never forget them."

Yuna - Final Fantasy X
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your welcome

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I MarXZimXSweetXGir u have to love her