I think you can make the nose better looking if you get rid of the mouth on the under side (sorry don't know how to explain it better) and make it again in the part wich is left... but thinner than it's now...

the mouth now looks like the way you would see the horse from up front, the horse should hold his head up a lot higher before you could draw the mouth like that... the down jaw should be way less visible....

and I think you should draw the right eye as well

but I think the mane look gorgeous and I love the color of the horse and the left eye and ear look really good, the right one is just a bit to broad... take a little bit from the right side and you'll be good

if you wish I could make a redline if that would help you, but only if you really want it

Greetings, Merel

ps. I really like this drawing, just pointing out how to improve it more to make it an outstanding one

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I really like it! Just tweak that right ear alittle so that it looks more refined and matches the left ear.

Wonderfull pieces as always.A definite fav i'm glad you put it up.Hmmm the nose seems well to me.If it's to straight it isn't right but that's just my opinion.Love the manes and facials.

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I love how it's all the same colour scheme. It's gorgeus.

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The ears are quite crap. I just didn't see it on the night I wrapped this up. So I thought it wouldn't hinder the piece, but... Refined it some already^^.

No, only the right ear needs work. I think the left ear looks just fine. It's still a lovely piece.

I agree, little imperfections are what make great pieces. But this is just disturbingly wrong. I have the piece as my cell phone bacground and the nose's just leaning too damn much off the centre...
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