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All Deviations
All Deviations


'Twas the dreadfully hot summer of 1428
When they came riding to our high gates.
The beggar who sat there looked up with hate
But he did not know why, so he sat there in debate.
The Riders, on their horses sat proud and straight
Wearing beautifully engraved armour plates.

Appearances are deceiving, so they say.
Unfortunately, 'twas too true for King Raye.
He smiled, welcoming them to stay.
The Riders smiled, while inside, laughing away
At the game they were going to play.

For weeks they laughed and dined with Raye,
Who greatly enjoyed his time with this array;
For in a large, lonely citadel he did stay -
Thus, he never noticed the evil under way.

Then on that fateful fall Friday, Raye woke up
Watching the Riders drink from his beloved gold cup.
Bound from head to toe, he knew something was up.

"What are you doing?" Raye perplexedly pondered.
Replied a Rider, "Your trust, milord, has been squandered.
"'Round your kingdom and palace we have wandered
"And this is the kingdom that will be captured."

Shocked was King Raye, struggling against his restraints,
Voicing to the Riders in vain his complaints
All the while knowing that help could only come from the saints.

Many more weeks dragged by; autumn came and went.
The kingdom still under siege, much to the subjects' resent.
Raye, bound in the towers, his life being one of torment.
Knowing his death would be an eventual event.

His soul, somewhere between the living and dead
Saw a myriad of white feathers that led
Right to what looked like a dragon's head.
When he saw the scales, he gave a stifled scream.

It lifted his head, scales shining like an axe's head.
The dragon's mouth yawned open and it said:
"Tomorrow morning, do not eat your stale bread -
Find the weapon and key you wish for instead."

True to its word, a shiny dagger did appear,
With the silver key that was so revered.
Unlocking the door, shaking with excitement and fear,
In the castle did he finally reappear,
He tragically stabbed at the Riders with a sneer.

Finally, order was restored after weeks
Of torture, murders, and endless deceits.
Raye waved and smiled tiredly to the joyous shrieks.

Thus is the legend of King Raye of 1428
Whether a dragon really helped is up for debate.
Some suspect the dagger came from the beggar at the gate.
But to this day, he still stays, an unmovable weight,
Staring at the path that brings danger to the gate.
©2006-2008 ~patronus4000
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A ballad I wrote for English class. This is my second try at writing a ballad, and I must say, I'm pretty proud of it, which is why I put it here for everyone to see. ^^ It even has good rhymes!! XD Of course, that's only because I had a bit of help with a rhyming dictionary.

Since this project (it was part of a poetry anthology) isn't marked yet, my English teacher will probably go online and see if anyone plagiarized. So if he comes to this site, a few things to identify that this poem here is by the person who sits in his classroom.

- my English teacher's last name starts with a "L"
- his wife is an optometrist
- his classroom (at least in third period on day ones when I have him) is 222
- he likes to give really long notes for his students to copy from the overhead projector...
- and give really long speeches about them afterwards

=D Enjoy!
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~xxx-fancy-xxx:iconxxx-fancy-xxx: Nov 12, 2006, 11:14:55 AM
Lool. :D Yay rhymes! I think it was the dragon that helped him, not the beggar. :nod: Did this take a while to write? It seems hard to write ballads. Im glad I didn't have to write one. :phew:

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~patronus4000:iconpatronus4000: Nov 12, 2006, 6:58:38 PM
Oh yeah. I wrote it in one sitting - about three hours. Then I came back and edited, so the total amount of time spent on this thing was about four hours. XD

Ballads are easy, if you can rhyme. But I can't. So it's hard for me.

Hmm. I think both of them helped. But then again, I shouldn't be saying anything - after all, I'm the author of this ballad. ^^;

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~xxx-fancy-xxx:iconxxx-fancy-xxx: Nov 14, 2006, 5:06:40 PM
Lool.

Wow. four hours. *blinks*
And rhyming! *shudders*

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~patronus4000:iconpatronus4000: Nov 14, 2006, 8:41:10 PM
The evil rhyming!! x_X

Mr. L. hasn't even started marking our anthologies yet. He was only making up the rubric in class today. o.O *sigh* Can't... wait... to... get... mark... XD

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~xxx-fancy-xxx:iconxxx-fancy-xxx: Nov 16, 2006, 4:55:36 PM
lool. i dun think ms.siddiqui's close to finishing marking them either.

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~xxx-fancy-xxx:iconxxx-fancy-xxx: Nov 16, 2006, 4:55:48 PM
to *finish

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~patronus4000:iconpatronus4000: Nov 16, 2006, 8:00:51 PM
=( Me wants poetry anthology!! *throws temper tantrum* =P He's putting our class off because the Grade 12s, as you probably know, are more important than us puny Grade 10s.

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~xxx-fancy-xxx:iconxxx-fancy-xxx: Nov 16, 2006, 8:49:06 PM
Loool. Awwww. But the grade 12's are like gna be graduating this year...oh. XD

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~patronus4000:iconpatronus4000: Nov 16, 2006, 9:53:24 PM
Yep. They're just soo important.

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