FF7 - The Rain Stopped

The Rain Stopped
read from RIGHT to LEFT

requested me something sentimental and tender for this 11111!Hits kiriban...
well, I had MANY ideas but I couldn't draw any! ...finally this is what came out of my pen today so I keep it. You can say "Hey! it's a notebook sheet!" (if you're nice enough to not pronounce it 'shit'. Well, if you say that I won't care because I love my notebooks and it's on their sheets that I draw the best, most of the time. The texture, the lines... I love it.
And this is a stroyboard, yes.
Not something 'achieved'. But I prefer my storyboards because they've got something special a work done on a beautiful white sheet doesn't have...
I like this work this way

Just in case you can't read:
"why don't you open your eyes?"
"why don't you speak?"
"why don't you move?"
"at least... I can cry..."
"and say it's the rain..."
"they said you're gone ...far away..."
"I miss you, you wute bastard!"
"where are you?"
"right beside you..."
"the rain stopped..."

And just in the case you can't read Japanese:
"goooo..." is the sound of the wind
"zaaaa..." is the sound of the rain

Last point, about the first panel... it's written "coma"... here are some interesting informations that may help you to understand better Reno's 3 questions X) and about the name that begins like "yosh..." it's because I might include this in a fic of mine... and I have this habbit to create lots of theories about every character, especially about their names...

lineart: inkpen; ???

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