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underneath the yellow glow
of planted lamps, a kicking stone,
on down a road. an old tune
painted on the ground.
i miss you,
like the red button
i found the other day.
a luminescent feather
still in flight. a sherbet dusk.
incog your face churns - me waiting
of planted lamps, a kicking stone,
on down a road. an old tune
painted on the ground.
i miss you,
like the red button
i found the other day.
a luminescent feather
still in flight. a sherbet dusk.
incog your face churns - me waiting
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i guess, its that longing feeling that i think most of us have woken up to at some point. don't get me wrong im grateful, but I want something else.
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I like the subtle clues that lead you to imagery rather than a direct order into imagery. If you know what i'm getting at.
Good poem, to the point, well formed with enough in-depth metaphors to provoke thought.
Good poem, to the point, well formed with enough in-depth metaphors to provoke thought.