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"Forgotten"

I forgot my umbrella,
And it started to rain.
It didn't really bother me though,
Because I was already soaked.
I forgot my shoes,
On the hottest day of the year.
There wasn't any pain however,
Because I was already burning up.
I forgot my coat,
And was caught in a snow storm.
I didn't freeze of course,
Because I was already as cold as ice.
Colder perhaps?
I guess it doesn't matter,
I've forgotten when it happened.
When we lock things away,
And try to keep them safe,
They gather dust.
We set them aside,
As not to allow any damage,
But what good are they forgotten?
A toy bear
Would rather be torn in battle
With the King of the Dragons,
Than left on the top shelf of a closet.
A beautiful doll
Would rather have her dress stained
During a tea party with the Queen of the Fields,
Than left in a glass case.
Nothing likes to be forgotten.
No matter how big or small,
Old or new it is.
No matter its color or shape.
Nothing likes to be forgotten.
Especially not me.

Copyright © 2006 Jarred Lee
©2006-2008 ~Itchitaka
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Submitted: August 7, 2006
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The 8th addition to my poetry release series. Written while looking out on a cold rainy day.








Credits: Craigfine











The poetry series thus far:





~~Love's Light in an Overwhelming Darkness [link]





~~Seek [link]





~~Restless [link]





~~A Man-Made Angel [link]





~~I Miss the Way it Never Was [link]





~~Silent Beauty [link]





~~Snowfall on Unfamiliar Ground [link]
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~sun-kisses:iconsun-kisses: Aug 7, 2006, 8:47:34 AM
wow.... VERY nice! :) its awesome!

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~Itchitaka:iconItchitaka: Aug 7, 2006, 8:49:51 AM
Thanks! :hug:

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~Gottalaughoripop:iconGottalaughoripop: Aug 7, 2006, 1:45:48 PM
That's very good- and very true. Protecting someone by keeping them away from the world only hurts them.

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~sun-kisses:iconsun-kisses: Aug 7, 2006, 4:54:55 PM
no problem! :D :glomp:

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~ExquisiteDefect:iconExquisiteDefect: Aug 8, 2006, 1:05:02 AM
It flows so nicely, and even though you drop the repitition, it still works because it's a thinking piece. I love it.
~Itchitaka:iconItchitaka: Aug 8, 2006, 7:10:15 AM Mood: Glad
Thank you! =D

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"By the time I realized it, I had already swung the bat. My palms still sting." -Naota (FLCL)

It's all just fun & games until the flying monkeys attack!

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~qurufinwe:iconqurufinwe: Aug 8, 2006, 8:06:20 AM
I liked this one. Does the word "soundy" actually exists in english? Anyway it's very musical :)

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~Itchitaka:iconItchitaka: Aug 8, 2006, 8:31:12 AM Mood: Thanks
Soundy? Haha, I don't think so? Thanks though! :)

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"By the time I realized it, I had already swung the bat. My palms still sting." -Naota (FLCL)

It's all just fun & games until the flying monkeys attack!

Clubs: *art-photography-club ~Emotional-Writings
~qurufinwe:iconqurufinwe: Aug 8, 2006, 11:56:01 AM
It's was worth trying :)
You're welcome, it's a great piece :+fav:

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The fact that no one understands you doesn't make you an artist - Zuma