All Deviations

Poem: Timeline Of Errors by ~arhillier:iconarhillier:





It starts with one thing.
Similar to a line of dominos.
If you set them up right.
The fall in unison.
Beautifully.

It ends with the last domino.
Not in the middle.
You cannot stop the fall once started.
If they fall out of order.
Destruction.

Compare your life to a domino chain.
Each day you live, a domino falls.
We all have hundreds of thousands of dominos.
But, how do we choose to set them up.
Thought.

Will they interfere with others?
That airn't supposed to fall yet?
Or will you fall with others.
To add to the unity.
Dual Beauty.

What will you leave?
A message that will stay.
In the pile of your life.
The pile of bliss, or destruction.
Errors.

Mistakes are to stay.
If one domino is a mistake you can't fix it.
If one day in our life is a mistake, you can't fix it.
It's gone forever.
Time.

As we live.
Time runs every second of our life.
The dominos record our life. Our time.
Will we live to be perfect? Or full of errors.
I have lived a timeline of errors.
©2006-2008 ~arhillier
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This is a timeline of errors. Our lifes our as dominos. Set up in a patern, how to live. And how we will die. But we have a choice each day to set up our domino. Our day. The way we choose. How will we make it fall?

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~sabretoooth:iconsabretoooth: Jul 9, 2006, 1:55:22 PM
i dont really know about this one, i understand the meaning, but something lacking in it so i cant sympathise with you.

and you have lots of spelling mistakes

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