OMG I got a gift certificate for the art store and OMG I got bottles of ink and a palate and some brushes and nibs and a fountain pen and now I need some paper that won't get all warpy when I mix the ink with water. I have bristol board but I cant find the damn boxcutter and its too thick to cut with scissors. I was playing with my brushes and inks and stuffs and after correcting and correcting (Theres about three gallons of white ink on her jeans) I made this look somewhat presentable. THe pink and blue in the background I only really put in because I wanted to use the fan brush for something other than sneaking up on people and tickling them.
I keep changing my mind about morgans hairstyle. It may change. BE PREPARED(ZORZ)
I think that I, for once, will gived an actual critique.
Okay, first of all-I like your background and your coloring's pretty good. BUT. The nose is a bit off(meaning placement). You used a lot of crosshatching, which is probably just part of your style. Her fist...doesn't loook to much like a fist. I'm not any better than you, I just reall analyze and oveer-analyze my own work, and there are still so many flaws, it's barely funny. Well, anyway, this is pretty good.
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Hmmm....I don't want you to take this anyway, but this girls looks as if she posses the strength of atlas!
The shoulder in the back is kinda high, unless you're tensing it for some reason. She's also got a really strong chin, if that's your aim, fine, if not soften it up a bit.
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Okay, first of all-I like your background and your coloring's pretty good. BUT. The nose is a bit off(meaning placement). You used a lot of crosshatching, which is probably just part of your style. Her fist...doesn't loook to much like a fist. I'm not any better than you, I just reall analyze and oveer-analyze my own work, and there are still so many flaws, it's barely funny. Well, anyway, this is pretty good.
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I have the heart of a child. I keep it in a jar on my shelf. - Robert Bloch.
The shoulder in the back is kinda high, unless you're tensing it for some reason. She's also got a really strong chin, if that's your aim, fine, if not soften it up a bit.
Heh, look at me talking like I know anything.
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Oh noose, bandisht...!
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