Well, here is another attempt at good looking "space." This is 4th attempt and personally, I think the best. I did the sun texture myself and I'm quite pleased with how it came out. I would appreciate C+C though. Thank you.
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John 3:30 "He must be come greater, I must become less." I want to be nothing. I offer up my life,actions and words as my worship to You Lord, for setting me free and giving me life from death. Let me not falter in my dedication to You.
very nice, i love the bluish nebula background (although it seems a tad repetitive) and the solar flares are simply amazing, very well done.
the starfield could use a little work, they all seem to be pretty much the same size (a tad too big, possibly), and spread out evenly, when it should be more random.
also, on the sun texture (specifically the yellow spots), i can tell what brush you used, it seems like you either made it far to large, spherized it too much, or a combination of the too. it seems rather pixelated but smooth which is what happens when you make brushes like those too big. you ought to either find a different brush or decrease the size of those (significantly), and do some manual brushing.
also the green planet, with such a bright contrasting color right next to the red sun really stands out. i guess it sorta depends on what you were going for with that planet, its so bright it adds a sense of surrealism (not quite the right word but i cant think of a better one) although it does sorta match up with the rest of the piece. like i said, depends on what you were aiming for. personally i might desaturate it a little, if thats what you were going for, it works.
also, completely based on my opinions and style, the sun seems a little too dark, i would lighten it up and also make the atmospheres brighter closer towards the planets.
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~Jeremiah~
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John 3:30 "He must be come greater, I must become less."
I want to be nothing.
I offer up my life,actions and words as my worship to You Lord, for setting me free and giving me life from death.
Let me not falter in my dedication to You.
I see you online all the time. *blinks*
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~Jeremiah~
the starfield could use a little work, they all seem to be pretty much the same size (a tad too big, possibly), and spread out evenly, when it should be more random.
also, on the sun texture (specifically the yellow spots), i can tell what brush you used, it seems like you either made it far to large, spherized it too much, or a combination of the too. it seems rather pixelated but smooth which is what happens when you make brushes like those too big. you ought to either find a different brush or decrease the size of those (significantly), and do some manual brushing.
also the green planet, with such a bright contrasting color right next to the red sun really stands out. i guess it sorta depends on what you were going for with that planet, its so bright it adds a sense of surrealism (not quite the right word but i cant think of a better one) although it does sorta match up with the rest of the piece. like i said, depends on what you were aiming for. personally i might desaturate it a little, if thats what you were going for, it works.
also, completely based on my opinions and style, the sun seems a little too dark, i would lighten it up and also make the atmospheres brighter closer towards the planets.
great piece!
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~Jeremiah~
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