Perspective help

did the original sketch of the pic here: [link]

His work is awesome, but he has encountered my most hated foe: Perspective Drawing

The chimney on the house in question looked forced, so I started to try and find which lines would go where, but then I never really had the original vanishing point to work with so the redone house looks like I butchered his pic (which I did) so then I blew off the dust on my 'how to draw in perspective' book and found something I hope will be useful for his perspective assignment.

I DID not do the original drawing, check the handy dandy link above, I did however do the crappy black lines via a ruler and tablet in photoshop.


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Toshi's original pic seems to have 3 point persective, with 2 horizon lines. the lines flow best in that particular situation... anyways now I'm just rambling to myself... here's hopin noone[read: Toshi] hates me for trying to help him out... this : [link] is another scrap on perspective