I finally found a background that I halfway like...so I changed the piece totally.
Critique encouraged...I'd love to hear what's wrong and how I can make my art better.
For an artist to want others to admire their work, they need to admire it themselves. This is something I'm even dealing with myself. However, if you absolutely hate the piece, you shouldn't submit it until you're content with the outcome. If you can't get it the way you want it to look, try a new idea.
As for this piece, I think the idea is awesome, but a beach just doesn't seem to be a good setting for this sort of idea. The clouds are wonderful, though. But the subjects just look a bit out of place.
I was actually thinking the same thing about the background. I'm trying to find a different one that will fit better. Thanks so much for yer input, it's greatly appreciated.
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As for this piece, I think the idea is awesome, but a beach just doesn't seem to be a good setting for this sort of idea. The clouds are wonderful, though. But the subjects just look a bit out of place.
That's just my input. Other than that, nice.
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