Avignon knows that April has arrived;
a week has passed, and perfection closed -
who has seen the crazy life inside?
The Man recants, his life deformed, perhaps,
should shelter become intensified
and an easier existence found for tortured Art.
When War came, and open flowed expense,
can curling pleasure hurt the Earth
now that pain is documented?
In Heart's true strength the burden passed
into quiet ceasing moments; years;
fragrant pastures blaze in golden light.
She is softness, your Renaissance, old man;
ninety famous stretches, fulsome workaholic -
pretty Jacqueline, clothed at last; your love.















Devious Comments
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However. i realy like a lot of the phrasing and flow of the text. and i especially like the last passage.
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I'm pleased you like this piece, despite any problems you have with reading it.
Your signature text pleases me, too; that statement concerning Perfection is so very true with poetry as an art form.
Regards,
James
Wonderful writing.
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Love,
Katie
Thank you very much.
Regards,
James
I must say, this is one of the better poems you've written. Maybe because it's fun.
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I'm so goth, I have a fishnet umbrella.
Still will put pink wig in front of wang and take photo for sex.
And an Art piece on Art too
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