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Mind Tunnel

Kill yourself with negativity
take one step into the dark corridor
That secret little tunnel in one's mind.
When the need for dependence gives in
where are you to turn?
Instead there's nothing but darkness
A narrow space with no doors
No windows
No Light.
No Light.

Can't reach the light now.

Scream out into pitch dark silence.
A bitter chill overwhelms
It only took one step.
one step to throw yourself into a downward spiral

drowning in the misery.

Can't escape to the light
forever trapped Inside your mind.
the Mind tunnel.
©2005-2008 ~Dark-Ryo
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Submitted: June 1, 2005
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Weeee. I like this one. The darkness of one's mind, oooh la la. :heart:
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~MidnightRyoko:iconMidnightRyoko: Jun 2, 2005, 10:19:44 PM
I really do love your poems...they seem very jrockesque. ^^ :heart: :glomp:

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:blackrose:†~Kazuyo Emiru-Azami Nishiaki~† :blackrose:

~"If all the world was painted dark, and all the skies turned grey, then please tell me [if you could] when would it be 'day'?"~
~Dark-Ryo:iconDark-Ryo: Jun 3, 2005, 7:44:27 AM
Sankyuu. Nobody else will bother to comment. So for this, I :heart: you. y.y

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"I hope in faith, I leave no trace. Pray for the blind, stay undefined. Time is a debt, I have regrets. I know the truth, not bulletproof. I'm in touch with it lately. But then you told me to breathe in."
~MidnightRyoko:iconMidnightRyoko: Jun 3, 2005, 9:22:38 AM
aww... I :heart: my Ryoness. =3

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:blackrose:†~Kazuyo Emiru-Azami Nishiaki~† :blackrose:

~"If all the world was painted dark, and all the skies turned grey, then please tell me [if you could] when would it be 'day'?"~
*DBZchick:iconDBZchick: Jun 3, 2005, 1:04:54 PM
Interesting, deep and nicely done. Good job!

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"Life is not measured
By the number of breaths we take,
But by the moments
That take our breath away"