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A girl named autumn by ~emotionalrun:iconemotionalrun:





This small life,
withering away,
time pulling at its very strings.

A tiny purple flower,
alone so innocent,
surrounded by death,
and after the long drought,
when the sun finally comes around,
life will spew anew from death...

October nights serve me no justice,
this rustic air ,
so refreshing when it burns..
Everything, so gray,
you never told me gray could be so beautiful.

Friends keep me warm,
yet friendship can be so cold,
sit with me tonight.
Our breath, like ghosts in the sky,
Lead the way to a frozen destination, where,
these mittens are so debonair and,
my scarf keeps me close,
please hold me like it does,
wound around me.
Your lips,
a sweet kiss of frost bite.

Could you dance with me now,
the slowly falling snow is the only thing watching us,
it lands in your hair,
so prefect, brown with streaks of yellow and red,
your head on mine,
we’ll talk about how we feel used,
all these emotions mixed in our chemical romance.

Your eyes are cold, but there is beauty there,
hold my hand until we must part ways.
you will be back again, I know this,
my heart will ache until then,
it is hard, but I’m glad I can say,
I fell in love with a girl named autumn.
©2004-2008 ~emotionalrun
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Submitted: October 17, 2004
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DAmn these small names, The title of this poem is I fell in love with a girl named autumn, but this damn site wont let me... lol:P ok back to the poem, if u live in a place closer to the equater you'll have no fucking clue about what im talking about, I live in canada its getting cold here now and this is fall for me.... so enjoi
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~HerrWinter:iconHerrWinter: Oct 17, 2004, 2:37:46 PM
its a nice vivid imagery
Very good poem...
~XsteffieX:iconXsteffieX: Oct 17, 2004, 6:08:15 PM
very nice :) it made a pretty picture in my mind. funnily enough I have a daughter named Autumn hehe.

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~emotionalrun:iconemotionalrun: Oct 17, 2004, 6:12:58 PM
awww really thats a very beautiful name :) and yes funny lol that i used that very name :D thanks for the comments :D

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I fell in love with a girl named autumn
~absense:iconabsense: Oct 17, 2004, 7:46:51 PM
I really like this. It's not just some lovey dovey poem with all action and no thought, this has meaning and some wonderful imagery in the words. A rare find :)

Actually, I submitted a photo somewhat recently titled 'Ghost Named Autumn', so I saw the title of your poem and did this weird double-take, so I just had to check it out :giggle:.

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~Rora:iconRora: Oct 17, 2004, 7:48:43 PM
Ahhh.. If I was a blibbering Idiot I'd think you were talking of true love to a person... however I have to admit I jave this love that your peom so nicely speacks of

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~emotionalrun:iconemotionalrun: Oct 17, 2004, 7:59:03 PM
thanks everyone :D

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I fell in love with a girl named autumn
~inmyroom:iconinmyroom: Oct 18, 2004, 2:31:22 PM
'Friends keep me warm,
yet friendship can be so cold,
sit with me tonight.
Our breath, like ghosts in the sky,'

those are my fave lines.. i love it!
~emotionalrun:iconemotionalrun: Oct 18, 2004, 2:52:12 PM
:) awesome, thnx for the comment

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I fell in love with a girl named autumn
~DaenerysFire:iconDaenerysFire: Oct 31, 2004, 11:37:18 AM
Autumn is such a wonderful name. The poem is truly delightful!

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