Edited contest entry for InvadershariePrussia x ReaderEdited contest entry for Invadersharie2 years ago in Phase Two
You walked down the halls,looking for Gilbert,your best friend.He had said to meet you by the lockers after class.'Where IS he?',you thought. You decided to grab your things for your next class while you waited.
"Hey!Glad you decided to meet the AWESOME me here?!"You rolled your eyes at him as you shut the locker.
"Hey,Gil.What's up?",you said,shutting your locker and twisting the combination lock a couple times,to make sure it was locked.
"I just wanted to know if you wanted to go to prom with me." The halls fell silent,as if the whole world were awaiting your answer.
"Yeah,I'd love to!",you replied,smiling brightly,(e/c) orbs s
Beta-reader Match-making Fan Fiction contest entrySmoke hung low and heavy over Praxus, obscuring optics and clogging vents. Here, the once proud city-state stood cracked and charred, covered in ash. The glorious crystals of the Helix Gardens, the pinnacle of Cybertronian art and beauty, lay shattered. Many of the civilians were gone, long since departed or dead. Those who remained had abandoned their civilian ways, forced into more militaristic roles.Beta-reader Match-making Fan Fiction contest entry2 years ago in Phase Two
Towering above the surrounding ruins, the smoking husk of the Assembly sat. Not so long ago, this building thrived, the center of all Praxian culture and business. Grand halls held concerts, games, presentations, assemblies, and exhibits, and all manner of art and technologies were gathered and displayed here. It was the heart of Praxus.
It had been the first Decepticon target in Praxus.
The Assembly still stood… mostly. One wing had entirely collapsed. Windows had long since shattered under the onslaught. From several of the gaping holes, smoke trickled out. But it still stood,
[EDITED] Episodes of Neville's Perspective.-Episodes of Neville's Perspective in Hogwarts during the Second Wizarding War (EDITED)[EDITED] Episodes of Neville's Perspective.2 years ago in Phase Two
Neville Longbottom gazed at the passing scenery, feeling the slight rocking of the *Hogwarts Express*. Darkness had fallen onto the landscape hours ago, an indication that they were coming closer to their destination.
"Everything is going to change now, isn't it?" Ginny Weasley mumbled breaking the long silence that hung over them.
"At *Hogwarts*?" Luna Lovegood responded.
"Yeah...at Hogwarts" They were thinking the same thing about their first impression when they first arrived at Hogwarts, it seemed like a place of starting a new chapter, but now the idea has collapsed.
Hogwarts. Everything will be different. The Death Eaters which is a group founded by Voldemort, full of racial pure bloods, had somehow infiltrated the school and positioned Professor Snape, as the new headmaster. Neville could not understand how Professor Snape could betray them like that, how twisted could he really b
Last (first draft)There is no one who truly knows how to face the end that lies beyond the end of the world. One day, the seven Moons shine beneath the Sea of Enkre, as they are supposed to, and the next day you find yourself drifting away, your world diminished to a mere fragment of what it used to be. You open your eyes in the light of the Moons and for a moment you forget about the cataclysm from the night before, or you think everything was just a bad dream. You look around at the alabaster walls around you, still intact, and you tell yourself all is as before. You tell yourself there was no Armageddon, no catastrophe, you tell yourself those galaxies, all those people in them, could not have perished. But then you walk outside and you see there are only six Moons. Time drifts by and people start speaking of strange things, of cities of fire standing on the edge of the Sea of Enkre, and cliffs of ice standing beside them, and you notice there are only five Moons left.Last (first draft)2 years ago in Phase One
By the time you are down to you
Check and Mate (First Draft)Shikamaru continued signing the after action reports, ignoring the loud music and the raucous laughter outside. Parties just weren’t his thing. Even a blowout to celebrate the end of the Fourth Great war.Check and Mate (First Draft)2 years ago in Phase One
Even after he had dismissed them, his squad mates had tried their best to convince him to join them in the festivities. Ino had practically danced back into the tent, her long blonde hair flowing behind her, giving him a forced, flirtatious wink. “Come with us Shikamaru!” she had teased, the smile beaming through her sorrow and loss. “The war’s over! We won! Surely we can forget the paperwork and live a little!”
Ino had been drowning in her grief. She desperately needed an escape from the reality of things dragging her down. The optimal solution had easily presented itself.
His response had been a simple shrug. “Parties are such a drag... Standing around talking to people you barely know and will likely never meet again... I’m fine, beli
Last (written by dparparita, edited by me)No one truly knows how to face the end beyond the end of the world. One day, the seven Moons shine beneath the Sea of Enkre, as they are supposed to, and the next they are gone. You find yourself drifting away, your world diminished to a mere fragment. You open your eyes in the light of the Moons, and for a moment you forget. You forget the cataclysm of the night before, it fades from your mind like a strange and distant nightmare. The alabaster walls around you assure you: everything is still intact, all right, normal. There was no Armageddon, no catastrophe. Ridiculous, how could all those galaxies, all those people have perished? But then you walk outside and you see there are only six Moons. Time drifts by and people start speaking of strange things, of cities of fire standing on the edge of the Sea of Enkre, and cliffs of ice standing beside them, and you realize only five Moons are left.Last (written by dparparita, edited by me)2 years ago in Phase Two
By the time you are down to your last Moon, you will have gone through numbness and pain and
[Contest] HP Fanfiction: Episodes of Neville's POVEpisodes of Neville’s Perspective in Hogwarts during the Second Wizarding War[Contest] HP Fanfiction: Episodes of Neville's POV2 years ago in Phase One
Neville Longbottom gazed out at the passing scenery, feeling the slight rocking of the Hogwart’s Express. Darkness have fallen onto the landscape hours ago, an indication they were near the great castle.
“Everything is going to change now, isn’t it?” Ginny Weasley suddenly spoke up.
“At Hogwarts?” Luna Lovegood responded dreamingly.
“Yeah at Hogwarts...”
Hogwarts. Everything will change. The Death Eaters have infiltrated the school and positioned Professor Snape, the traitor, as the headmaster of the school. What Neville couldn’t understand is how someone can be so twisted that they could betray something that kept them in a safe haven for a long time.
He quickly sighed. Betrayal was another world to him. He couldn’t imagine betraying any of his friends. He looked at Ginny who was rummaging for her Hogw
A Dark HorizonSummer was over, that much was certain. As the sun set, fall had her gaze over the city, waiting as the moon rose in the oddly black sky above. It was as though the stars were afraid to shine, too scared to show themselves that night. But what was worse was the wind, a steady breeze that, as the moon rose, grew stronger, fingers of squalling gusts brushing through tree branches and abandoned swing sets.A Dark Horizon2 years ago in Phase One
Had the citizens of Reidington been awake, they would have noticed the sudden darkness that took over the city as the clock hit midnight. They would have noticed the snap of branches in the rough winds, the starless sky and dark streets. They would however, all share one thing in common as the wind blew. A nightmare, a glimpse into a world not one person wanted to be in.
Sakura Avalon was no exception and she lay in her bed, tossing and turning, the sheets tangled over her body as she tossed and turned. Beads of sweat trickled down her brow and a soft cry escaped her lips
in the woodsi was home from school and my friend said to follow her so i did. we went to a forest my mom said was very dangerous so i told her we couldnt go there. my friend started crying and took my hand very hard and ran with me still in her grasp. when we reached to the middle of the woods we were lost. i said we should go back but my friend ignored and went to the right. i stayed in my position in the middle of the woods scared and then i heard a scream. i thought it was her so i ran towards the scream and there standing wasn't just my friend but my friend was with this strange figure... i just stared at it with my eyes wide open and then............. it spoke!in the woods2 years ago in Phase One
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chapter 1 First daychapter 12 years ago in Phase Two
“Hey it's time,” I told Hawk Eye. “Ok but what is it time for,” he tried to be funny. “You know what it's time for now stop messing around LET'S GO!” I yelled. “Ok, Ok,” he complained. “ ya now let's go,” I tried to cheer him up,but I don't know how to do that yet.
“Ok now all you have to do is hand these cards out to some boys, can you do that,” I asked sarcastic.” Ya I think I can do that much,” He said making me mad. “ Ok then see you at the cercle after school, got it,” I kinda yelled that last part. We started handing out the cards, the cards reed,
Hey peeps meet me and Hack-Eye at the cercle after school.
P.S. You can't tell anyone till you know who has a card.
P.P.S. If yo
The Same Compartment - orig. by magicwingsforeverThe Same CompartmentThe Same Compartment - orig. by magicwingsforever2 years ago in Phase Two
Originally written by magicwingsforever
Edited by Indiana
When they first met, James Potter and Sirius Black didn't expect to be lifelong friends. They were just two boys sitting on the Hogwarts Express, shoved into the same compartment by some rowdy fifth years. Each of them kept to himself, and it wasn’t until James spotted Sirius’s broomstick advertisement booklet, tossed carelessly onto the seat, that the two of them began talking.
"What team?" James asked enthusiastically, pointing at the Quidditch players clutching world-class brooms on the cover.
Sirius snorted, glancing at the booklet and then to James. "Chudley Cannons, of course. I just went to see them, they were bloody amazing! You?"
James stared at Sirius, his eyes wide in amazement. "Same, my dad loves to take me to their matches! Gonna try out for the house team?"
Just like that, the two were friends.
When James joined Sirius at the Gryffindor table, they grinned
Portal: This Dark Path Beta ReadSPECIAL NOTE - PLEASE READ: This is the second half of the Beta Match Making Contest, where I beta read another deviant's fan fiction. This story was written by iammemyself, not me. I am only beta reading it. I claim no ownership of it. All credit for this story goes to iammemyself.Portal: This Dark Path Beta Read2 years ago in Phase Two
There are a few examples of British English spelling on words (colour vs. color), and to keep true to the original author's intentions, I have kept those spellings as intended.
Portal: This Grey Path
Written by: iammemyself
In an eternal instant, the world changed.
He knew of one reason, just one reason, that explained why he would wake. Here, like this, in the middle of the once-proud cracked walls and shattered windows.
She was not awake, not yet. Still she remained in her artificial slumber, but it would not last. He knew it
NaruHina: Inseparable (Edited)My breath grew shallow as I ran. I was deaf and blind to the world, ignoring everything but the pounding of my own feet. Rain drops fell from the brooding black clouds blocking off the bright innocent sun. I was just sick of it... sick of everything. I wanted to be anywhere but here.NaruHina: Inseparable (Edited)2 years ago in Phase Two
If you had asked me on a better day, I would have said all I wanted was a small place of sanctuary. Somewhere I wouldn’t feel the burning pain etched into my heart over and over again. But was there really such a place where you could feel protected and safe? Life had taught me, no matter how much I wished and pleaded for such a place to exsist, I would always be disappointed.
The tears came flowing down my cheeks mixing with the rain. My father always turned away when I cried. I always tried to hold them back but I couldn’t ever stop myself. Truly blinded now, I slowly came to a stop.
Ever since I started the Academy I was constantly being bullied about my bloodline. The word
Coming Down From the CloudsBriar Rose woke up. She had never woken up like this before. Her lips were all warm as something pressed against them. Her body was feeling so strange like something was flowing out of her.Coming Down From the Clouds2 years ago in Phase One
She wasn’t sure she wanted to wake up. The dreams had been so good. She had been dreaming about her true love, the young man from the forest she had met that day, or was it yesterday?
Would she ever be happy again after what had happened?
She was awake and could not sleep again, so she opened her eyes.
Before her was the young man from the forest, the prince from her dreams, her true love. She smiled. She could see the fairies that had been her aunts tiny and floating by the ceiling.
“Good morning, sleeping beauty.” He smiled at her. “Do you remember me, from the forest?”
She nodded and saw the fairies fly out the window.
“Good. My name is Phillip, Prince Phillip. We are betrothed.”
Betrothed, she knew that word. A word that had crushed her heart. She had be
Still the Same Girl (first Draft)The Abyss was tempting again tonight. Just a few steps away from Bell-mère's grave it called Nami to take a final rest, too. Let go, It whispered. You gave so much already. Nami was as weary as an old sail hanging limply in the wind. No fierce wind could fill her with joy again, it all seeped through the holes that had been torn into her.Still the Same Girl (first Draft)2 years ago in Phase One
“You're still the same girl.” Nojiko had told her. She couldn't have been more wrong. The girl that was Nami had died along with her mother as Arlong had shot her. Just when Nami had finally been ready to call Bell-mère by that name. Mother. And Nami had died again when she was forced to work for Arlong's crew. The flag that killed her mother forever stitched into her arm as an irremovable stain of sin. And then maybe a third time, as she told the other villagers and was shunned for betraying her own mother. She withheld the real reason why she did so, didn't want to share the burden. She had thought s
NaruHina: Inseparable (First DNaruHina: Inseparable (First Draft)NaruHina: Inseparable (First D2 years ago in Phase One
My breath grew shallow as I ran senseless in the world blocking off all comications. Rain drops fell from the pitch black clouds blocking off the bright innocent sun. I was just sick of it,of everything. I wanted to be anywhere but here, but I mostly desired a place of paradise for me. I didn't want to feel the burning pain embed into the strains of my heart again. But was there really such a place where you could feel protected and safe. Doubt overwelmbed me as i knew no matter how much i persuded myself it was true it would simply backfire me.
I slowly came to a stop as tears came flowing down my cheeks without my permission but I couldn’t stop myself just from mere will power. Ever since i started the academy I was consently being bullied about my bloodline. The words now echoed though out the shell of my mind.
“You’re just like your cousin Neji, thinking you are better than the rest of us”
“Yeah just because you
The Best in Everyone - Raw DraftShe sat in the chair, head tipped back, eyes on the seam between the wall and the ceiling. Her legs swung back and forth as they dangled from the chair that was just a hint too tall, and her chin bobbed slightly from side to side as the music pounded on the walls. She was vaguely aware the rules prohibited the use of loud music in the green room… but she was alone, and she would be alone until she was called to compete in the final match.The Best in Everyone - Raw Draft2 years ago in Phase One
She hoped it would be against Rosa. She prayed it would be against Rosa.
But if it weren’t… then she needed to break character.
Loose lips sink ships. That’s what she’d thought when she first heard what they said about her. Not that it bothered her, usually. She’d made peace with who and what she was when she’d been helpless to save Munna, because something about her had been so compelling that Hilda and Rosa had been moved to help. She may not be powerful in her own right, but Bianca had found her cha