UnmentionablesUnmentionablesUnmentionables6 years ago in Writers More Like This
PAGE ONE (four panels)
Panel 1 (small): Close in of blood running off the edge of a sidewalk.
Panel 2 (black & white): Two people fighting. One is a skinny college age man, ALLEN, wearing a sweat jacket. The other is an attractive black woman, LUNA, of equal age, wearing casual clothing. They are in a family room, obviously Allen's from all the geeky junk.
Panel 3: ALLEN is laying on the sidewalk, the blood coming out of the back of his head. He looks as if he fell off his bicycle. He is alive and stirring.
Panel 4 (black & white): LUNA is heading out the door, yelling behind her. ALLEN stands beside a table, looking defeated. There is a newspaper on the table.
Panel 5: ALLEN is sitting up on the sidewalk, on hand clenched to his head. His eyes cringed in pain. There is light from a large building on fire across the street in front of him playing off his body, but their is no other indication of the fire.
Panel 6 (black & white): ALLEN staring down a
Kollision Course ScriptKollision CourseKollision Course Script6 years ago in Writers More Like This
- by Dominik Jaworski
Dear artists. Before you start reading the info of what to put on the page, I thought I'd explain my intentions, so that interpreting the script will be slightly easier.
The overall concept of the story is to comment on (or state the observation of) the circular nature of life, how there seems to be a certain pattern that repeats itself over and over, even if the actors and the scenery changes. The current financial crisis, is one of the examples of such repeating of past events, but I bet you can find events even more fitting.
Due to this, there should be certain prevalence of round elements throughout the story, be they wedding rings or buttons. You can, of course, go wild with the theme, or use it sparingly, whichever way you should see fit.
As the story is a double page spread and should be readable in any direction the recipient might choose
a) reading the panels clockwise;
b) counterclockwise; or
c) first page 1 then page 2
stronger than steel part 1Stronger Than Steelstronger than steel part 17 years ago in Writers More Like This
How to do it, how to do it He wondered as he stood on the asteroid pacing back and forth ,the pressures of space not bothering him "Time beats space..." He muttered as he saw the meteor head down to a mostly blue planet except for the immensely large green super continent "No that won't do," he said "Rewind!" He yelled for no one to hear but himself the meteor winding back as he watched it replay it headed past him , "...pause." Hmm hmm hmm He wondered. "How to stop the crash while keeping my powers. No matter what it must be possible... hmm... play!" The meteor started back up again and heads closer and closer to the planet its about to crash any minute. Three seconds before the impact the scene cuts and changes. The meteor is a ball and the planet is a bat. The ball is hit. It goes flying and a kid who up until now wanted to be something, be s
Say it with soundSay it with soundSay it with sound6 years ago in Writers More Like This
I don't like writing introductions, I want my writing to speak for itself and have the artist interpret it any way they wish. But this deserves something more.
Think of this as an experiment. To try to make the viewer FEEL the musical notes.
It needs some stray lines coming from the instruments. Distortion of the picture. The louder it's supposed to be, the more distorted and crazy the images should be.
To the colorist: Try to remember color theory when working with moods. Every panel's colors does not have to match up, MOOD IS THE MOST IMPORTANT THING. Just a thought, but a more painted style would benefit this story.
If you can accomplish this in sequential story art format, my hat's off to you.
JIMMY, a young man (mid 20's, long black, stringy hair, black eyes with eyeliner) who looks like he raided a Hot Topic, stands on a giant stage. In front of him are thousands and thousands of screaming fans. Surrounding him, on the stage, are instrumen
stronger than steel part 3stronger than steel part 3stronger than steel part 37 years ago in Writers More Like This
"aw great 1 to 4 were down by three and there two best hitters are up the only way we can't lose is if the game end" he muttered "yeah we need some rain" said Tim "yeah we need some rain now" thought dustin suddenly a loud thunder is heard followed by the patter of rain as it quickly picked up "game called on acount of rain" yelled the ump
[later] " weird day isn't it" said ryan
"yeah" said chris and dustin at the same time "I wish this rain would just stop" the rain begins to slow down and then just stop
"hey wait up I got news you guys won't believe it" yelled justin
"what is it justin" ryan moaned
"I got something thats going to blow your mind" exclaimed justin
"your a girl" justin muttered
"no take a wild guess" said justin holding in his excitement
"judging by what
stronger than steel part 4you think were superheroes (ryan) not superheroes just superpowers (justin) exclaimed powers whats your super insanity (dustin) laughed no didn't you see how everyone was acting after I finished batting (justin) yeah you got ticked threw the bat and stormed off like every other time you bat (ryan) I'm going to forget that until I completely figure out my fire powers then I going to roast you (ryan) fire powers you got this figured out already whats my power (dustin) judging by the fact that its raining /places hand on shoulder/ and your not wet I would say water powers (justin) whats mine super strength (ryan) seems like it (justin) / ryan jumps up for joy slams on the ground causing a large tremor with a hill bursting out of the ground a few feet away / woah what the heck (ryan) looks like you got more than that I think you got geokinesis as well (justin) what (ryan) geo=earth kinesis=mind its latin (chris) what how did you know that (ryan) books internet I'm kinda smart whstronger than steel part 47 years ago in Writers More Like This
stronger than steel part 5[later that day] so what should we do now. (dustin)stronger than steel part 57 years ago in Writers More Like This
well we need only one thing if we want to do this right. (justin)
whats that superpowers. (chris)
yes that but the most important thing is that we have teamwork
without we'll be dead in no time. (justin)
why do we need to work together I means as far as I can tell we have all we need
street smarts, [points to justin]
strategic mind, [nods to dustin]
and muscles. [slams fist to chest]
thats all a team should really need right (ryan)
hey what about me! (chris)
what all you can do is jump high thats not even much of a power I bet anyone of us could do it with some training (ryan)
that isn't fair I've been dreaming to be a hero for a long as I can remember alright [starts huffing] ahh-ah-choo [huge gusts of wind come shooting out blowing ryan into the fence behind him] what the heck was that [as he fixes his hair] (ryan)
seems like he has some sort of super breath (dustin)
cool cool I guess your in (ryan)
well who makes you the boss anywa