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I was originally going to make a comic with this script, but I had trouble getting the characters to look just right and then school got in the way. (Maybe I'll make the comic next year) Besides, I think that those photos might be best left to the imagination even though it would have been nice to see a continuous progression of Mace and Bast trying to out-perform each other in the photos. Unfortunately, I still haven't read volume 4, so I can't be sure if a scene like this is even possible, but I'd like to think that Lilith somehow got at Mace and Bast for continuously fighting over her.

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I thought about adding another scene to explain how a camera was acquired to take the photos and why Lilith contradicted herself by saying they shouldn't start a scene and then tricks Mace and Bast into pole dancing, but those details are probably not necessary (even though I would criticize a work for such details being left out thereby kind of making me a hypocrite...). Also, I think that how the photos were taken could have been explained because I doubt Mace or Bast would like the idea of those photos being taken and probably would want the photos to be destroyed... I really could have expanded on this more...
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That was pretty hilarious;I can totally see Mace being overeager for it,hehe! A comic version would be pretty funny! Have a nice Halloween!