Input please.So I'm trying to write more and I'd really love any and all feedback on my work so I can improve.Input please.20 hours ago in Personal More Like This
Also on another note, trying to work on fixing my external hard drive which might lead into my dolling again.
As far as drawing it does happen occasionally but I'd really rather focus on my writing. I mean most of what I end up wanting to draw is basically my stories anyway so why not just improve the medium they're already in.
Again any input would be appreciated.
Writing Exercise 1Samantha Johnson stood scrutinizing herself in the bathroom mirror again. She'd never found herself to be exceptionally pretty. Her arms were the wrong kind of lanky, with their awkward hanging not being helped by her shoulders which always seem to slump forward. Her stomach was not quite flat enough, while her hips and thighs weren't the right kind of thick. Not to mention her boobs weren't quite perky enough nor were they exceptionally large. Her bland dull brown hair just limply hung across her shoulders, not knowing if it wanted to be wavy or straight. Then there was her face, her lips sat there too thin for their own good below a nose which turned up towards small dark eyes which gave off the impression of being beady.Writing Exercise 11 day ago in Introductions & Chapters More Like This
She sighed as a soft voice somewhere inside her head reassured her that she wasn't ugly. True as it was she was also not beautiful, much like her name, not exactly pretty but still rather bland. 'You really shouldn't say such things' the same soft voice came from wi