Some Kind of JackpotPAGE ONESome Kind of Jackpot2 weeks ago in Drama More Like This
INT. DISUSED BOATHOUSE – NIGHT.
We’re inside a rundown boathouse near the Atlantic City boardwalk. Empty, broken crates and coils of old rope lie scattered around. The light from a single bare bulb overhead casts stark shadows up the splintered, unpainted boards of the walls.
NOTE: I suggest insetting the first three panels equal-sized on a tier at the top of the page, and making panel four a large full-bleed underneath.
Black, with a few little scrapes of light coming through rough fabric – we’re inside a burlap hood and can’t see anything.
CAPTION: Not so long ago…
DELFINA (OP): Yes, agreed. He’s got it coming.
DELFINA (OP): She’s your cousin’s daughter. You feel disrespected. I get it.
DELFINA (OP): Go home now, Sal. It’s taken care of.
Same POV. The hood is being lifted, about halfway up the panel, revealing the rough planks of the floor and someone in front of us wearing a leather jacket. Behind t